"Soul mates" the comments. (My first story.)

[Unil stä'nìyu]

Ye'rìn, ma 'eylan. Ye'rìn.

(I hope i got that right. Still have to lookup most words to understand.... But hey, thats learning too right?)

[Tsamsiyu92]

Ye'rìn, ma 'eylan. Ye'rìn.

(I hope i got that right. Still have to lookup most words to understand.... But hey, thats learning too right?)

That's right.

(Try to write tons of sentenes in Na'vi, that's how I "thrusted" the words into my brain).

[Unil stä'nìyu]

Hapxì vol lu alaksi, ma 'eylan. (have fun- can't find out how to write that )

[Unil stä'nìyu]

Ok. Chapter 9 is up.

I'm about to run out of finished chapters, but chapter 10 sould be up in a few days max. (Just need to read it through)

Then 11 and 12 needs to be done. I have done a rough outline as of now, but i think i need to go a little deeper into certain aspects of the story.
Therefore you might find that chapters from 10 and onwards, will be slightly longer than the first 9 chapters.

Still hope you who read it, like it. And as always, feedback is welcome.

Have fun

Eywa Ngahu.

[Muzer]

I'm quite intrigued by the whole plot so far; finding it... well, interesting to say the least.

[Unil stä'nìyu]

I hereby present to you : Chapter 10

Again, feedback welcome, and have fun

Cya

[Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}]

again you have impressed the hell out of me.

i thought this story was going to be stupid by just the name, (i know rasist), but i just skimmed through the first chapter and its a hell of a lot better then i thought it was going to be. its way better then my story, (i think), and i strongly encourage you to continue on with story.

hope all goes well with the rest!

[Unil stä'nìyu]

Hey

Nice that you liked it. I hope you get a chance to read more of it.

If it's better than yours, i'm not to say. That, at least i think, is all about style and likes.

I like your story, and still waiting for the next chapter

As for my story, Chapter 11 is well underway. Still needs some more work, but it'll probably be up within the next couple of days.

Thanks for the feedback

Eywa Ngahu

[Unil stä'nìyu]

...and then it's done. Chapter 11 is up. I don't hope that this get's worse in your opinion. It is, i think, a little too much fantasy, but i will pull through. I have some ideas as how this should end. But i can say already, that it will require at least a sequel. But that is another issue.

As said. Chapter 11 is up. Enjoy it

Eywa Ngahu.

[Tsamsiyu92]

I think I see where this is going...

Spoiler

The gas mix is in the Pandora air.

[Unil stä'nìyu]

I think I see where this is going...

Spoiler

The gas mix is in the Pandora air.

Yup. But Gab doesn't know that... Yet... And still it's only the two gasses that is tested... What happends when they test an actual pandoran atmosphere??? Hehehe... Only time will tell

[Tsamsiyu92]

^But one of those gasses is why humans use those exo-packs.

[Unil stä'nìyu]

Interresting, don't you think?

Actually, as far as i understand it, both of the gasses are the reason for the masks. But let's see where it brings us

[Unil stä'nìyu]

Chapter 12 is up... And i'm in bed (1:18AM here)

Hope you like it.

NN

[Tsamsiyu92]

It's great. Keep up the good work:)

[Unil stä'nìyu]

Hi again everyone.

It seems that a new chapter should've been upped this weekend. That didn't happen due to RL stuff. I am in the middle of that chapter, but heavily suffering from writers block... DAMN! But if everything goes according to plan, next chapter will be up by the end of the week. I'll be sure to let everyone know when that happens.

Another thing. I have heard rumors about some communication, used between Pandora and Earth. I think it was described in the "Guide" which i don't have. Sadly. Can anyone tell me more about that? Maybe a link to somethink? I need to learn what i can, so i don't screw up my timeline in the story.

With that said, i'll get back to work (*sigh* the RL one) and think some more about finishing the chapter at hand.

Eywa Ngahu

[Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}]

type in Avatar survival guide in ebay and you know what it is.

[Unil stä'nìyu]

Ok. Late here again, but Chapter 13 is up. To be honest, i've had some serious thoughts about this chapter. Didn't even know if i wanted to post it at some point. But i think, as the story progesses, that it's a vital part of the complete picture. So, it's here, and i hope you enjoy it, even if it's a little far fetched.

Also, there's a lot of text taken from the movie itself. And i'm almost sure that some errors are in there. (Shaved tale/tail Louie?) Such mistakes are to be corrected, with the help if you guys

As always, enjoy and...

Eywa Ngahu

[Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}]

want more!