My titleless story! Fan Fiction

[MadArrowSkillz101]

‡ Preface ‡

EDIT:   When the war with the Sky People ended, a vast majority of them were sent back to Earth, except a select few, mainly those in the Avatar program or those friendly towards the Na'vi. Jake Sully was permanently united with his Avatar body and is now the clan leader of the Omaticaya clan with Neytiri as his bride and next in line for spiritual leader after Mo'at. In attempts to get a new home, the clan dug up the central core root of the fallen Hometree and replanted it in a location between the Tree of Souls and Hallelujah Mountains but quite a distance away from either. The root began growing at a rapid pace as a blessing from Eywa, and is very similar to the first in structure.
  The Sky People who remained on Pandora now just wish to study and interact with the Na'vi people in their natural, undisturbed environment. They sent out some equipment, mainly for Jake to use because he knows how for the most part, including a holographic map of the planet, an interactive radar for mechanical threats, videologs, and means of communications. Basically one of those systems that was in the Hell's Gate complex. They still send out Avatars to interact with and teach the Na'vi English. Jake and the clan agreed that the Sky People could send out a maximum of 3 small vehicles at once, but only for drops, pickups, or rescues. And so it continues.....

‡ 12 Years Later ‡

‡ Chapter 1 ‡

   "Why do I have to do this right now? I was going to join the others in the hunt," a young Na'vi named Arsil asked Neytiri, who was leading him to the technology corner against the base of Hometree. She sat him down on the rock in front of it.
   "Because we agreed to the Sky People we'd do this. All in iknimaya are to. Here, I'll get you started. (She tapped the screen and it turned on, and then opened up the video logger) You turn that on and answer the questions, in English. Now I have to go, Jake is calling for me." She walked around then into Hometree.
   Arsil is 17 human years old, around 9'11 of average build. His hair is the typical Na'vi braids. He has minimal jewelry and a knife strapped across his upper left chest.
   Arsil pointed the camera at himself and then gazed at the big interactive screens in front of him. He tapped the record button and an image of himself appeared on the screen. To the left of his image were interactive questions. He groaned and began the log, answering the questions as the appeared, "I'm Arsil, I'm 17, in Omaticaya clan. My parents were victims of the war 12 year ago. I was 5 then. Remember that Toruk Makto and Jake Sully came and save us all. There was uproar in clan when Jake was found as Avatar and knew the war would happen. During, I was in tree..."
   "You ran so fast when AMP suit came into your view, I bet you could beaten me in race that day," Arsil's friend butted in over his shoulder looking at what he was doing, also in English.
   Arsil turned and hit him with his tail, "I. We were 5 year, AMP big and powerful. I'm sure you did the same."
   "I on branch below you when..."
   "Out of harm's way!" Arsil said, he grabbed the camera and pointed it at his friend, "By the way, this is Ma'rik, my 'pain-in-ass' friend. Ma'rik, why don't you give the Sky People some insight."
   Ma'rik stood tall, full of pride, "Sky People! (Arsil laughed) I am Ma'rik, Arsil's friend. Best hunter with a bow. When I make, it will be supreme. I will finish iknimaya first and claim my woman, who all want me to choose them. Also,..."
   "Alright 'hotshot', enough sweet talk. My videolog." Arsil said pointing the camera back at himself.
   "Suit yourself, I'm going on the hunt, see you," Ma'rik said. He added "brave one" from behind Arsil's shoulder then jogged away laughing.
   Ma'rik is also 17, 9'8. His parents died in the war. He and Arsil live off the clan and Neytiri acts as their mother because their mothers were close friends to Neytiri. He wears his hair the same as Arsil's only with more braids in the front that hang over his shoulder onto his chest, and has more jewelry. His knife is at his left hip.
   "Hey wait up," Arsil called to Ma'rik, "Alright last question. (the question read 'Is that true' referring to Ma'rik) Of course no! Bye camera." He turned it off and ran after Ma'rik who went under Hometree and met with the others who were going on the hunt.



‡ Chapter 2 ‡

  "Hey check out whose going on the hunt, Pirka," Ma'rik said to Arsil when he stepped up next to him, giving a small gesture of his head.
  "Oh yea, your mate interest right? (He laughed) You don't see Ismaire do you?" Arsil replied, scanning the nearby crowd of Na'vi.
  "Mmm, no. Isn't she a singer and medicine type?"
  "Yea, good one too. Oh well. Let's get bows, I need a good one," Arsil said walking over to the group of the hunters who were going. He and Ma'rik both borrowed a bow and a few arrows each.
EDIT: Pirka is one of the most attractive females of the clan. She as well is 17 human years, around 9'4 and in perfect shape. Her hair resembles that of Neytiri's with a touch of uniqueness in the braids. Her hair combined with her elaborate necklace covers her decency well enough. She wears fine jewelry in her hair and ears, and on arms. Ismaire is also a treat to the eyes. She is 9'4 and the rest similar to Pirka, except her hair is a different design of braid, similar to cornrows and her jewelry color and assortment are different. They both change their hair based on the events they are going to be participating in, examples being letting it down striaght or cornrows/braids, etc.
  The clan members going on the hunt were Jake, Arsil, Ma'rik, Pirka, and another male and female. Pirka also borrowed a bow and some arrows. Jake told the small group that they'd split in twos with him and the other male as overseers. They would meet up just outside of Hometree with their kills. The six of them departed out of Hometree, it was now late afternoon and growing darker by the minute, the opportune time to hunt because they blend so well with the bioluminescence of the Pandoran jungle. The sparkles on the Na'vi's bodies began shining to beautiful effect.
  As they walked further into the jungle,they glowed brighter and the surrounding plants did as well. Arsil touched one of those plants that retreat into the ground on touch for fun, watching it shoot down, as well as a few plants and mushrooms that lit up as well. They walked along a path for about a mile before entering the unguided jungle. It was just on the verge of night and the jungle looked wonderful to the viewer. Ma'rik tried to pair with Pirka but she already went off with the female. He and Arsil went off on their own route. Jake followed the girls to watch their progression as the male followed Arsil and Ma'rik. Ma'rik drew an arrow and Arsil followed suit. Ma'rik crouched down and continued walking unheard. Arsil tapped a retreater plant with his tail which launched a bunch of other plants to the ground loudly. He got a glare from Ma'rik then they kept going.
  Ma'rik stopped next to a giant spiky plant and raised a hand to signal the stop to Arsil. "Got one, dead ahead." Sure enough, an animal lurked ahead drinking from a small puddle.
  "I've got eyes too you know." Arsil said.
  "Well use them and take out the one to the right."
  "Wow," Arsil thought to himself, "he must think I'm a terrible hunter. Great where did it go? Now I'm    gonna look real smart." Arsil stood scanning for it.
  Ma'rik gave a small laugh, "Nice going Arsil." He pulled the arrow tight and looked back at his target. Before he released the arrow a different arrow slammed into the animal, it squealed and fell over. Ma'rik saw the sparkles of another Na'vi approaching the animal and saw it was Pirka.
  "Hahaha, nice going Ma'rik," Arsil laughed at him then went back to the tracking.
Pirka looked up from blessing the animal, "Haha too bad boys," then finished the blessing.
  "Pirka! One second more, literally, mine, stolen, by you, this is not working," Ma'rik grunted. Pirka laughed and took the arrow out.
  Arsil found the animal's trail and silently followed it. It began going down a small hill of various foliage. He followed it to the bottom, it turned right and followed the hill which was now a plateau. As he looked round a large tree he saw the animal a way's away. He took some steps forward and crouched next to a glowing giant mushroom. There was a large tree to the left of the animal with thick foliage further down.
Arsil released the arrow just as the animal trotted behind the tree, the arrow zoomed bast its rear and into a plant. "Drat" he mumbled as he ran after it getting another arrow ready. He reached the tree and froze, a branch snapped. He crouched craning his ears and darting his eyes for any further sign of movement. He heard something rather large take a step just on the plateau, he knew there was another animal in the vicinity. He turned his head to the plateau and saw a few plants. They all lit up as a nice big Thanator brushed its chest against them. It had spotted Arsil. Its mane rose high up and growled at him. Arsil hissed then ran in the direction his prey went. The Thanator jumped for him but missed then growled again. It bounded after him, gaining rapidly. Arsil jumped down a small hill and saw his prey ahead of him running as well. As he passed a tree something yanked him from behind this tree off his path just as the Thanator slammed its jaw shut. It pounced and must have gotten the other animal for it yelped.
Arsil was held flat on the ground by the forearm of another Na'vi. "Who are you?" he said, for he had never seen her before.
  "Shhh, he's coming back." she replied. They inched to the other side of the tree out of view. The Thanator changed his mind at an appetizer and went back to his entrée. "My name is Neimi. What are you doing near that thing?" She said sternly.
  "Might I ask you the same question. I've never seen you before. Are you of another clan or what?" Arsil asked standing.
  She stood up next to him, she was around 9'4 with a description similar to Pirka, only she had a bow and a few arrows on her back. "Yes, I am from another clan, back at the Great War we were almost destroyed and the survivors are separated. I was 5 then, I left in search of a new home, but live pretty nomadic, I carved my own bow from my clan's ex-Hometree."
  "The Omaticaya?"
  "No, I presume that is your clan. I am from another. Here, come with me, you must see this." Neimi said, she grabbed his wrist and began pulling him in a new direction, then let go and led the way.
  "Where? I'm hunting right now, my clan..." Arsil said uneasy, yet he couldn't turn back, for some reason he wanted to follow her to wherever she was leading him.

‡ Chapter 3 ‡

  After running a few short miles of traversing the wild, marvelous jungle, Neimi stopped. "What is it?" Arsil asked stopping too, "There's just a sleeping herd of Hammerheads over there." She said 'oh' then continued. With each step they took, like every step at night, the ground lit up and the flora they brushed did as well. They continued on, Neimi led Arsil onto a tree's branch over a river. "Are you taking me to the Tree of Souls?" he asked.
  "No, but very near," she replied. A few more miles and Arsil could see the giant arches that encase the Tree. "Look there." It was now dawn and the sun was beginning to rise. He moved some vines out of his way and peered where she was pointing.
  It was a large silver container with years of overgrowth on it. Arsil walked right up next to it. "What is it?"
  "It was where the Sky People would control Avatars from. Jake Sully did in this one during the war."
  Arsil squeezed through a broken window. The whole inside of it was full of plant life. He could make out a smashed pod in front of him and an open one to the right. He squeezed past the growth once more and saw that Neimi was investigating what seemed to be a fallen AMP suit with a crap load of overgrowth. "That's an AMP suit. How did you know this was all here?" he asked.
  "I found this place after the war. You know who Colonel Miles Quaritch was right? (He nodded) This was where his last stand was. He fought Jake and Neytiri and killed the mighty Thanator, Neytiri killed him in the end, saving Jake's life. His body disappeared from this suit only recently." Neimi said.
  "How do you know all this information, its all in the computer thingy we have back at Hometree? You are not of my clan, who are you?" Arsil asked.
  "I told you, and Eywa told me the stories at the Tree of Souls. I'm sorry, you probably think I'm a freak. I'm going to leave you now." She said, she turned and began walking away, but Arsil grabbed her shoulder.
  "No, don't go. You can join my people, single nomads shouldn't exist. You saved my life after all, it's the least I could do."
  "Really?! You really mean it? (Yes) Oh thank you!" She hugged him, Arsil was a little surprised for a second but then returned the gesture. They then left and proceeded the long trek back to Hometree with Arsil out in front.

[Nume fpi sänume]

Interesting idea, blending the two societies together like that. Could shape up to be a pretty awesome story. Keep writing.

[Ikranä mokri]

ohh interesting id like to see where this is going

1 thing isnt Jake Sully toruk makto seeming as it means rider of last shadow??

not a critism just a helpful insight

[MadArrowSkillz101]

‡ Chapter 4 ‡

   Arsil led Neimi back to his Hometree. They arrived there near midday and were greeted outside of it by a few Na'vi on direhorses, who led them into the Hometree. Ma'rik grabbed Arsil upon walking in, "Thought you'd take a midnight stroll, eh? And scored on a new lady friend, I see how it is, just left us there thinking you were Thanator bait when you were running off with her. I see how it is." He said sarcastically.
   "It's not like that..." Arsil stopped in front of Jake and Neytiri, sitting in their customary seats having a light hearted discussion.
   "Welcome back Arsil my son. And who is this new face you bring here?" Jake said upon seeing Arsil.
   "This is Neimi"
   "Why are you here with Arsil, surely you two did not mate last night I hope," Jake said looking at Neimi.
   "No, no. Last night while on the hunt I ran into a problem with the mighty Thanator, as you probably heard, and she saved me from harm's way. I would request that she be granted a chance for membership with our people because her clan is non-existent." Arsil said.
   "Is this true? You saved Arsil from the Thanator?" Jake asked now interested. She replied 'yes', "Saving another is one of the highest honors one can do. Have you performed iknimaya?"
   "Yes, I have carved my own bow from my clan's old Hometree and bonded with an Ikran." She replied.
   "Your first step can be in helping Arsil in his trial. Then consider it done, just show me that you can belong with my people." Jake said happily.
   "Oh thank you great patriarch! I'd love to," Neimi said beaming with joy.
   While Arsil and Neimi walked away towards the food Neytiri expressed dissatisfaction. "What's wrong Neytiri?" Jake asked his mate.
   "Something about her, not normal. I just got an odd energy from her." She said picking up her father's bow, about to go hunting.
   "I think she's alright. We'll see as time goes by. I'll come with you on your hunt." They both got up and exited Hometree.
   Arsil grabbed some meat from the kill of the previous night and began eating it, Neimi joined him. "I'm so tired. Two days without sleep." Neimi said.
   "I hear you," Arsil said chewing. Ma'rik walked over and grabbed himself a small piece. "Oh, Neimi this is my friend Ma'rik, this is Neimi."
   "Pleasure," he said to her, "Arsil, you up for a race?"
   Suddenly not tired, Arsil said, "Definitely."
   "Arsil, I can help you in your iknimaya tomorrow. The beds are at the top right?" Neimi asked. Arsil nodded and she walked over to the spiral leading up.
   "Well you lucky little shroom," Ma'rik said.
   "Oh please, you're just jealous,"
   "Come on, once you disappeared...Speak of Eywa, what did you do that took all night and morning?"
   "Finish what you were saying first." Arsil said. They were now walking into the jungle towards where they keep the direhorses.
   "Fair enough, once you left, me and Pirka had some alone time, nothing compared to what you did I assume."
   "Not really, she just showed me some landmarks of the war, I'll have to show you sometime." He replied. They reached the direhorses and Arsil jumped up on one and bonded with it. "Hey Ma'rik," he called while Ma'rik was trying to get up on his.
   "Yea?" he got up and bonded with his.
   "Try to keep up," Arsil said then turned his horse.
   "Wait, where to?"
   "The waterfall, the one with the lake." Arsil said then rode off with Ma'rik in pursuit. Ma'rik is not the best rider in the world, he is much better at stealth and hunting, and scaling the landscape. Arsil, on the other hand, is a wonderful rider. The waterfall was only a few miles away and Arsil got there relatively quickly, Ma'rik, not so much. He fell off once, slammed into branches, and curled the horse around a tree once. He arrived and congratulated Arsil on the victory, but Arsil hushed him.
   "Shhh, look over the lake." He said. They were just on the edge of the foliage before a clearing in front of the lake. "It looks like, I don't even know. Make a quick spear." Ma'rik dismounted and looked over the lake. Both of them cut a decent sized piece of wood from a tree and began sharpening it while watching the unknown object. It was nothing big, it looked like a giant bat's wings only without the body and head, except it was made of steel and hovering. There was a rifle resting on the top of it. It was hard to tell from the distance they were at but they could make out the RDA's logo on the side of it. (It resembles the Green Goblin's glider form Spiderman)
   "The Sky People can't be back." Ma'rik said.
   "We'll have to ask Viktor when we get back," Arsil said finishing his spear. Viktor is an Avatar that participates in the school. Arsil added, "You call that a spear?"
   "Look!" Ma'rik said pointing at the glider. A human had surfaced out of the lake just near the object. He shoved a small square piece of technology and a bag on the top of the object. He was wearing a marine's uniform and an exopack. "Throw!" Ma'rik and Arsil threw their spears at the marine. He pulled himself up onto the glider but then jumped back off upon seeing the flying spears at him. One just missed him and the other chipped the glider. He resurfaced and sped up his pace. He pulled himself up and clipped the square down which acts as a map and scanner and put the bag in a small compartment. He strapped his feet down, picked up the rifle, and hit some buttons on the bottom. The glider turned on and the water underneath fanned out. The marine stood straight up and the glider rose up a little then came straight towards the Na'vi.
   Ma'rik swore and he and Arsil hopped on their direhorses and began galloping away with the glider gaining rapidly on them. The thick foliage caused him to fly above the treetops, watching them as he followed. He shot his rifle at them but missed all shots, mainly due to the foliage. Ma'rik split up from Arsil, unfortunately, the marine followed him. He weaved between the trees still hearing the glider nearby. Ma'rik slammed on the brakes and changed directions and the glider flew past but then stopped.
   There was a loud explosion and Ma'rik swung his head around to see fire. The glider has shot an incendiary and it torched the treetops, allowing the glider to fly below the canopy. The marine shot some more rounds, as did the glider. Ma'rik yelled in pain as his horse took some bullets. Two long, sharp blades came out of the front of the glider. Ma'rik jumped off his horse as the glider slammed into it. It retracted the blades and Ma'rik jumped onto it. He put the marine in a death lock around the neck. The marine began elbowing him until he released the lock. The marine steered the glider upside down. Ma'rik grabbed the marine's leg and rifle. He ripped the rifle out of his arms and threw it. The marine drove the glider straight at a tree. Ma'rik twisted the marine's knee until he screamed in anguish, then let himself fall, he slammed his back against a tree. The glider turned right side up and flew away, back to wherever it came from.

[MadArrowSkillz101]

‡ Chapter 5 ‡

   When Ma'rik got back to Hometree, the clan was in a prayer session to Eywa with singing, it was nearing nightfall. He sat down in the back of the group and Arsil nodded at him with an expression of contentment. Pirka and Ismaire were next to him. Ismaire stood, it was her turn to sing next and Pirka beamed at him Ismaire's voice was marvelous, she carried the clan in beautiful song until the session was over and night had come. Afterword, Ma'rik told what happened to him to the three of them to "epic" proportions. Arsil didn't believe him after the third sentence, but Pirka and Ismaire were quite joyed at his version. They grabbed a bite to eat from the kill of the day. That's when an Avatar, Viktor Mercy approached them.
   "Well well well, if it isn't Arsil and Ma'rik, my good buddies," he said in English placing his hands on one of their shoulders. He was shirtless with his usual cargo shorts. Viktor is a teacher in one of the schools and in his late 20's.
   In English, "Hey Vick, how's Hells Gate?" Arsil asked shaking his hand.
   "It's all right you know, normal techie stuff. Gets soo boring when I'm not out here though."
   "Where you been the pasts days?" Arsil asked.
   "Repairs. They're treacherous. Word around town you're starting Iknimaya, yes?"
   "Don't know what town, but yes. I have some "not word around town", today, me and Ma'rik had a close call with marine on a machine flyer thing. Are RDA back?" Arsil added.
   "Hmm, for all I know, they're not. But this would be around the time they'd return if they are, ya know, being almost 12 years and all. They could have been here for a few months now! But we would have known, they'd show up on the screens. You sure?" Viktor replied.
   "Come on, would I scrape my back on a fall? I fell of some flyer thing after fighting," Ma'rik said showing the group the slash he received from a tree on his upper back. It was nothing serious, he added, "Let alone fall."
   "Ouch. Well we'll definitely look into it guys. I'm out for now though, getting tired, I'll see you," Viktor said shaking all their hands again then going to the beds.
   "You really think they're back?" Pirka asked. Ismaire walked away to fetch some healing medicines for Ma'rik.
   "I sure hope not. They did enough damage to everything the first time they were here," Ma'rik replied. He was itching his scrape.
   Ismaire returned and placed one of her retrieved items over his back, it was a big leaf coated in ointment. He twitched upon the touch, "Don't be a baby," Ismaire said removing it.
   "I never said anything." When she finished. Ma'rik, Ismaire, and Pirka walked up the spiral to the beds. Arsil was already in one sleeping, no sleep for 2 days really had him pooped. Neimi was sleeping too, but two beds over from the last they saw her. Each climbed into a hammock and pulled it over and went to sleep.

[MadArrowSkillz101]

So sorry for not posting anything in forever, I must have died or something. Here's Chapter 5, so short haha. I'm currently writing Chapter 6 right now, it should be up sometime soon as well. What do you all think of my story thing? Feel free to post, use constructive criticism if you must. What are the ups and downs and other things like such?

I made some adjustments to the previous chapters: noted by the EDIT:

[Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}]

not as great as bionic arms on pandora, but its alright