na'vi in the jungle comments thread

Started by Niwantaw, May 16, 2010, 05:06:10 PM

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Maweyatan

Sorry, computer was getting bad today. I want some more indepth character development. You kind of threw people in, without going deep into their character's personalities. I know it's early in the story, but still...I'm enjoying it, though!!!

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Tsamsiyu92

Duma Vadamee, I don't care what the others are saying, I am looking forward for you next chapter. I like your story, like i like every story on here.

Niwantaw

ARRG! this is not duma's fanfic thread...
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Maweyatan

Excellent! Keep it up! The only bad thing I have to say about this chapter, is that it seems you are losing your devotion to this fanfic. I hope to see some action, and not the Na'vi just running from place to place.


Tsamsiyu92

^The more random, the more believable in my opinion. Remember that the Na'vi are just a little resistance group, which could not stand up against the millitary forces.

Tsamsiyu92

I like the newest chapter. Awesome:) Can't wait for the next one.

Niwantaw

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Niwantaw

I'm allowed to randomly giggle in my own thread...

I hope...
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Txantslusam Skxawng

I like it!

Although a pistol of the Na'vi that shoots 9mm, kinda small for a Na'vi, don't you think.... But I get the point that he uses a pistol
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Tsamsiyu92

Quote from: Txantslusam Skxawng on June 14, 2010, 01:27:37 PM
I like it!

Although a pistol of the Na'vi that shoots 9mm, kinda small for a Na'vi, don't you think.... But I get the point that he uses a pistol

A regular M9 pistol (9mm) would fit bigger fingers.

Txantslusam Skxawng

I'm no gun expert..... but it could be a bigger pistol that fires 9mm and I don't think they will use the Beretta 92Fs in the future :P
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Niwantaw

the US army only recently replaced the Colt M1911.45
thats been in use for a pretty long time.
maybe they will use a similar weapon to the 92SF in the future...

Or even (this is the big one) maybe it's a modified pistol so that they can use them. Okay maybe i should of made that clearer but more will come to make things clearer in the future
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Tsamsiyu92

Quote from: Txantslusam Skxawng on June 14, 2010, 01:31:54 PM
I'm no gun expert..... but it could be a bigger pistol that fires 9mm and I don't think they will use the Beretta 92Fs in the future :P

I was just pointing out that the trigger guard of a M9 would fit bigger fingers, for instance, Na'vi fingers. I am no gun expert, but i play airsoft.

Txur Niftxavang

I actually own an M1911A1.45Auto   I'll post it soon, and as a duty weapon for my Law Enforcement Department, I might have to carry an M9, or Glock 19
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Tsamsiyu92

Quote from: Txur Nìftxavang on June 15, 2010, 08:46:23 AM
I actually own an M1911A1.45Auto   I'll post it soon, and as a duty weapon for my Law Enforcement Department, I might have to carry an M9, or Glock 19

The M1911 has a smaller trigger guard than an M9, i think.

Txur Niftxavang

Actually it is similar, but they are both somewhat round in shape. The M1911A1 trigger guard is much smaller.  I'll post my pic in the Real Life Pics Thread.
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