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Offline francoivan

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Na'vi Poem III
« on: January 14, 2010, 09:05:48 am »
Kaltxì frapo nìmun
I've made another "poem" :P

Atokirina'
hiyìk fì'u.
slä txolu ngay.
txolu nìwotx lok oe.
oelu ke ta fitsenge,
slä oe tse'a set,
Omatikaya oeyä smuk lu.
kawtu tsun latem tsakem set.

Atokirina.
Strange thing.
But it's true.
It's all near me.
I'm not from here,
But I see now,
Omatikaya are my brothers and sisters.
No one can change that now.

Any error you find, just tell me. From errors you learn :)

Offline Étienne

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Re: Na'vi Poem III
« Reply #1 on: January 14, 2010, 09:29:35 am »
Love it.  ;D

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Re: Na'vi Poem III
« Reply #2 on: January 14, 2010, 11:50:21 am »
Wow, that's simple and nice. We don't see many ideas that leave a lot for the reader to let their mind wonder about. I enjoyed that one :)

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Re: Na'vi Poem III
« Reply #3 on: January 19, 2010, 12:22:59 pm »
Beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it.  I am writing Chants over a Shruti Box to peoples Na'vi Haiku's and poems.
NEver been skilled at languages so will leave that up to you all but compose music daily.
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Offline Pa'lis Maktoyu

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Re: Na'vi Poem III
« Reply #4 on: January 19, 2010, 01:29:36 pm »
AMAZING! that sounds very good. I tried to pronunce and it sounds great!!!!

good job

Eywa ngahu :D
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Offline suomichris

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Re: Na'vi Poem III
« Reply #5 on: January 19, 2010, 01:38:46 pm »
I couple of questions from a newbie... :p

Atokirina'
hiyìk fì'u.
slä txolu ngay.
txolu nìwotx lok oe.
oelu ke ta fitsenge,
slä oe tse'a set,
Omatikaya oeyä smuk lu.
kawtu tsun latem tsakem set.
What does txolu mean?

I'm also wondering about:
kawtu tsun latem tsakem set

This is poetry, I realize, so maybe it doesn't matter, but should we have negatives all throughout?

kawtu ke tsun latem tsakem set

I haven't see many examples with tsan, so I'm not sure if it works like other verbs and whatnot, though...

 

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