Opening My Eyes

Started by Yeya Swizaw, April 07, 2010, 07:25:08 AM

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Yeya Swizaw

This story carries on directly from the end of the film. I haven't written much yet, but here's the intro to get you sucked in (hopefully):

I opened my eyes.
Everything seemed more vivid.
The sky, the trees, the lake.
"Where am I?" I said...

A voice spoke, from nowhere.
"You are with me..."
"With you..? With who!?" I asked.
"Eywa..."

I stood up.
"What! Am I dead?" I cried.
"No. The people are sending you into your other body.
But there are more important matters to discuss..."

Silence...
"More important?" I asked.
"Yes. I brought you to my planet for a reason.
More important than anything you have already done..."

And then everything started to fade.
"No! Stop!" I screamed.
"I need to know more!"
The world vanished...


I opened my eyes...



"Everybody loves me... except people who don't"
  "Oe yawne lu frapor... oe ke lu suteru mungwrr"

Niwantaw

thats quite good


unfortunately for some reason i thought of eywa speaking in a Indian accent

it did not help

but after the i got over the Indian eywa it's quite good
Only mostly AWOL.

Yeya Swizaw

"Everybody loves me... except people who don't"
  "Oe yawne lu frapor... oe ke lu suteru mungwrr"

Eana Tanhì

i wanna know what happened next...  :D

Dreams die first because people give them up so easily...

Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}

i wanted to use something like that in the first ch but i edited it out.

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