Pandoria's walk: A Soldiers Story

[Txuraeyktan]

Pre Story notes:
I have not written much on this story yet I will be making parts of it up as I go along
I will be making a comment thread
Notes i do have for story is its this Man who's avatar died but he dicides to work with na'vi but you will see. and the very first part will be confusing but its like the man telling the group of guys his story/life
comments thread- http://forum.learnnavi.org/fiction-fanfiction/comments-pandorian-walk-a-soldiers-story/

CHAPTER 1: Pandora's Soldiers
   "It makes you think. It really does.  When something happens, something that you; you never thought would happen. It Happened to everyone else, but not to you, no never to you. That, that is, no, was what I thought too.
    Sure growing up my life sucked. But in sixth grade everything changed for the good. This extremely nice girl asked me out and seventh grade was good. I grew to be 6 foot 4 tallest person in the school. About halfway through 8th grade "something happened" One night I went home and got a phone call. it was the police. My Father had been driving and had picked up my Mother and as they were on their way home they got in a car crash. They were both dead.
     It screwed me. I decided to think about it in my room. I threw my phone at the wall from anger and hate of everything. My life and especially my luck. Ha Luck. Then my cell phone started ringing. My girl broke up with me. I went into my dad's room, found his shotgun and some ammo. I walked outside with a shotgun in my hand. I bet my neighbors thought I was crazy homicidal freak. Well my brother old car sat in the back yard. I put about 200 shotgun shells into it. I started walking back to the house.
     Sitting on my dad's favorite birch tree was a small little tweety bird. Now, this is where some will say i took my choice to be a good person or an "evil" person. Let's just say I didn't choose well. I raise the gun to the tweety birds head.
    After that night everything changed. I started failing school and beating up random people to get my anger out. When I was 16 I grabbed my dad's gun and swore to avenge my parents. I tracked down the drunken truck driver in a bar 2 years later. I had a magnum in my pocket so he couldn't see it. I asked him to take a walk with me and shot him dead.
     At this point I was 7 feet tall. A few days later I figured the steam from the kill had finally blown off. I was wrong. A cop had shown up at my house and had arrested me.
     "Mr. H you are convicted of assisted murder do you plead not guilty or guilty?"
     "Guilty"
     "then you will spend 2 to 4 years in a state level prison."
     I was 21 when I got out and had decided to join the military. When I got into the general's office he asked me something.
     "Look, you applied to go to war on earth. Recently Pandora has been occupied and they could really use your help up there. Pay is a lot better, will you do it?"
     "Yes sir, anything to get off this hateful planet."
     It took about a year to get all the preparations ready. And then 6 years in cryo. So here I am 22 or 28 depending on how you look at it. playing poker with my squad and kicking there asses while I'm at it."
     "Yea, yea you are lucky I'm off today I usually do better than this" pvt. Page stated.
      You see the squad I'm in called each other by their favorite musician. I was Sergeant Hendrix.
     "Whatever, it's going to be about 48 hours till we head out let's get some shuteye."
     "Alright sarge'."
     I stared at the ceiling wondering what it is going to be like out in Pandora. I kept trying to fight back that what we are here for, what the RDA are doing is for the right reason. And it kept fighting back with why would there be so many anti RDA that used to be RDA. What is actually going on out there? Then slowly i drifted into a deep sleep awaiting that lovely bright pandorian light to drift into the room.

[Txuraeyktan]

CHAPTER 2(grammer check in progress)
   I woke up to the fresh morning sun peaking through the window. My first night on Pandora and I barely got any sleep but i saw that everyone else was up so I went over to great them.
  "What's up Page?"
  "nothin' getting ready to go out on our patrol."
  "we got patrol today?"
  "ye. the squad that was going to do it got ambushed and, lets say, they got screwed over."
  "damn"
  "Go underneath the cabin'' he pointed to a stairwell, "and grab yourself a gun or two. Your going to need it."
  "alright."
  I walked over to the staircase noticing it was much larger than I had anticipated. I started my decent down the two-story decent and my left leg began to cramp as i got to the bottom.
  "holy crap thats a long ass staircase." I wispered to myself.
   I walked into this giant room with about, I don't know thousands of guns just hanging and even a computer in the middle to help you find one. I went over to it and typed in 12 gauge shot gun. it pointed to me in the general direction and i grabbed the box that said "shotgun kit." I opened it to see the barrel and the butt of a shotgun sitting there i put it together and took the box of ammo. As I took the ammo from the box a second compartment opened. It contained a few things. The first thing i saw was little box with a handgun symbol on it and its own box of ammo. I opened it to find a 6 shot revolver with about 150 spare bullets. secondly it contained a pair of dog-tags with his name and his squad already on it.
  "that's weird. very weird" he said to himself.
  It also contained a pair of sun glasses that looked nasty and his uniform. than a canister for his water 3 grenades and a stim-pack.
  "Almost like they knew I was coming."
  Then he heads back up the stairs and gets on the truck to go to his patrol.
  "hey driver so give me some briefing on what we are doing."
  He looks around and sees all 5 of the men sitting awaiting his answer. Pvt. Page, Himself, Corpral Murphy, lieutenant plant, and captain paul jones.
  The driver looks at the men as they travel down the road. "you are going into the Green forests. we only have explored about half of that. your job will be checking the parts we have and pushing another 3 or 4 miles into it or so. Extract will be 3 days from now at a prelocated spot Captain has. Good luck"
  "Alright but how long till we arrive? I could really use some more shuteye"
  "about 16 hours."
  "perfect, ill see you guys 16 hours from now."
  It was easy to fall asleep on the vehicle surprisingly. It was almost silent and actually gave me a slight massage while we rode down the slightly bumpy road. The drift of tiredness came in and soon most of the men were asleep. Then the dream from my past hit me.
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  It was night, me about 13 or 14 I remember the night exactly. My brother had come into the house. He had been the one to look after me when my parents had died.
  "look, bro, this is going to be hard to tell you. But your finally old enough to have me tell you. You know it is extremely hard for me to keep the house up, feed you, and pay all the bills with the job i have. Or had."
  "yea why?"
  "well...I...Er i signed up to go to pandora. now that your old enough to live on your own and with the money i make up there i can send to you. It will be a tough change but im sure you can do it."
  "Alright, its probably what dad would have wanted anyways. just dont get yourself killed up there."
  Thats what I had said, but its not what i ment. truthfully i hated my brother for saying that for leaving me. He really was the only reason i was still alive and he was my idol, my hero. while people in my class talked about superman and batman and how they were their hero i would proudly say my brother was my hero.
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  I woke up about 3 hours later. Everybody was asleep and so I decided i might as well sleep some more too. Its going to be a long week afterall