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Pasha, an Avatar story.
« on: April 27, 2020, 11:13:33 am »
I think this is going to need a disclaimer. This fanfic is bleak, there will be a semi happy ending, but it's not a true happily ever after, not even close. The main themes are prejudice, misunderstanding, and heartbreak.
Be warned, this is dark, for me at least, and the narrator is a dumb ass human, it felt appropriate.

I have hinted in several other of my fanfaics that Pasha's early days were not good, and that it was only later that she would become an equal member of the Pandoran Research Department.

If you haven't read those fanfics I very strongly recommend that you do so before reading this fanfic.



A massive thank you to Plumps, Tirea Aean and Toliman for their help with the Na'vi dialogue!
There's also the usual warning about spelling and typos too. You have been warned.



« Last Edit: April 27, 2020, 11:18:17 am by archaic »
Pasha, an Avatar story, my current fanfic, Avatar related.

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #1 on: April 27, 2020, 11:23:55 am »
Nice that you completed it :) I will read it today later or tomorrow :)

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #2 on: April 30, 2020, 05:34:46 pm »
This is were it gets nasty.

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #3 on: May 01, 2020, 03:11:05 am »
Next part, nice :D I will read it soon.

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #4 on: May 01, 2020, 06:07:28 pm »
This is were it gets nasty.
Read :) Although it really gets nasty, it's good work!

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #5 on: May 04, 2020, 04:59:02 pm »
A break from the nasty now, there will be more later, but for now, not so much .....

Also a break form Na'vi, this too is temporary.



Edit:- Spelling!
« Last Edit: May 04, 2020, 05:13:34 pm by archaic »
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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #6 on: May 04, 2020, 05:02:26 pm »
Good, next part :D

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #7 on: May 05, 2020, 08:04:32 am »
Read right now. Again, very good writing :D

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #8 on: May 07, 2020, 05:45:59 pm »
Another piece, this one is similar to the last.


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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #9 on: May 07, 2020, 05:49:31 pm »
Txantsan! :D :D I will read tomorrow :)

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #10 on: May 08, 2020, 04:51:53 am »
And I read, again very good writed :D :D

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #11 on: May 08, 2020, 02:02:29 pm »
Irayo.  :D  :D
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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #12 on: May 08, 2020, 02:11:05 pm »
Kea tìkin :)

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #13 on: May 08, 2020, 02:33:02 pm »
I guess I better go write some more.
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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #14 on: May 08, 2020, 03:04:10 pm »
Yeah, do it if you can :)

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #15 on: May 11, 2020, 12:25:15 pm »
Another piece.

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #16 on: May 11, 2020, 12:31:09 pm »
Txantsan :D

I will read later tonight.

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #17 on: May 12, 2020, 01:19:14 pm »
I will read later tonight.
Read right now, very good again :D

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #18 on: May 12, 2020, 04:30:41 pm »
Irayo. 

:D  :D
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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #19 on: May 12, 2020, 06:04:47 pm »
Kea tìkin :)

 

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