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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #380 on: August 05, 2021, 02:54:04 pm »
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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #381 on: August 05, 2021, 03:49:13 pm »
Read right now, txantsan! Good work :)

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #382 on: August 09, 2021, 04:05:21 pm »
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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #383 on: August 09, 2021, 04:58:38 pm »
Read, txantsan. Good work :)

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #384 on: August 12, 2021, 01:39:33 pm »
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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #385 on: August 12, 2021, 02:55:30 pm »
Very good, txantsan! :) :)

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #386 on: August 16, 2021, 01:15:22 pm »
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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #387 on: August 16, 2021, 02:08:24 pm »
Read right now, very good work :) :)

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #388 on: August 19, 2021, 02:53:54 pm »
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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #389 on: August 19, 2021, 03:44:12 pm »
Txantsan, good work :)

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #390 on: August 26, 2021, 03:33:03 pm »
So, this has taken way longer than I wanted it to.


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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #391 on: August 26, 2021, 04:25:17 pm »
Read right now, txantsana pamrel :) :)

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #392 on: August 30, 2021, 05:33:33 pm »
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I've jumped a large amount, all the important pieces were in place, and nothing much was going to happen until this point in the story.

Also, I've taken a bit of a liberty with a piece of Na'vi, my bad. If there's a better alternative I'll change it in a heartbeat.

Edit:- Now amended, ontu kxumpay to kxumpay ontuä.
A massive thank you to Vawmataw and Toliman for the correction!

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #393 on: August 30, 2021, 06:38:41 pm »
Txantsan, very good :) :)

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #394 on: August 31, 2021, 03:59:11 pm »
So, I used 'Ontu kxumpay' to mean Na'vi nasal mucus, care to share opinions on this?

I did look, but I couldn't find anything canon.
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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #395 on: August 31, 2021, 04:04:38 pm »
Ontu kxumpay is a good idea, Na'vi term for nasal mucus we really have not yet... maybe I would say "Kxumpay ontuyä" :)
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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #396 on: August 31, 2021, 05:55:15 pm »
Ontu kxumpay is a good idea, Na'vi term for nasal mucus we really have not yet... maybe I would say "Kxumpay ontuyä" :)
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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #397 on: September 01, 2021, 02:27:48 am »
Oops :-[ Yeah, kxumpay ontuä is right.

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #398 on: September 03, 2021, 02:52:24 pm »
Changed.


I'm struggling with writers block again, I'll post as soon as it's postable.
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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #399 on: September 03, 2021, 05:01:30 pm »
Good luck with writing :)

 

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