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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #40 on: June 02, 2020, 09:02:01 am »
Tomorrow I will find time for reading.
Read, very good again! :)
Keep your writing, you make it in excellent way!

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #41 on: June 04, 2020, 07:32:23 pm »
Another piece, I'd probbably start numbering these, so .....


Part 12
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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #42 on: June 05, 2020, 06:12:55 am »
Nice work again :)

Yeah, start numbering these - good idea!

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #43 on: June 08, 2020, 06:48:33 pm »
Part 13 .....
I must apologize for the Na'vi in this.



Edit:- Corrected some of the Na'vi dialogue, Massive thanks to Toliman for his help.
« Last Edit: June 11, 2020, 05:43:41 pm by archaic »
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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #44 on: June 08, 2020, 06:58:11 pm »
Nice! :)
Tomorrow I will look on it.

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #45 on: June 09, 2020, 12:58:03 pm »
Read, good writen! :)

I must apologize for the Na'vi in this.
No need apologize :)
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"Firawng lu piak si, taweyka tsa’u zum."
What you wanted to say here exactly?

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #46 on: June 10, 2020, 05:46:11 am »
"That's what opens the door."
or maybe
"That's what unblocks the doorway."

The point is, she already knows she can't escape, because the air outside her 'vivarium' is toxic to her. Now it maybe petty much academic, but she has understood how to trip the inner door to open from inside .....
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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #47 on: June 10, 2020, 09:12:53 am »
"That's what opens the door."
or maybe
"That's what unblocks the doorway."

I am not sure, but I would say it in this way:

Tsa'u sleyku futa rawng lu piak.

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #48 on: June 11, 2020, 05:36:04 pm »
Part 14 .....

A massive thank you to Plumps for his help with the Na'vi dialogue!


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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #49 on: June 11, 2020, 05:41:39 pm »
Nice, next new part! I will read tomorrow :)

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #50 on: June 11, 2020, 05:44:08 pm »
"That's what opens the door."
or maybe
"That's what unblocks the doorway."

I am not sure, but I would say it in this way:

Tsa'u sleyku futa rawng lu piak.
Fixed.
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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #51 on: June 11, 2020, 05:44:54 pm »
"That's what opens the door."
or maybe
"That's what unblocks the doorway."

I am not sure, but I would say it in this way:

Tsa'u sleyku futa rawng lu piak.
Fixed.
:)
I just hope that my idea is right.

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #52 on: June 12, 2020, 11:22:41 am »
Nice, next new part! I will read tomorrow :)
And I read - very good :)

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #53 on: June 15, 2020, 04:42:32 pm »
Part 14a .....






Part 15 .....


« Last Edit: June 19, 2020, 05:27:37 pm by archaic »
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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #54 on: June 15, 2020, 05:02:53 pm »
Txantsan! Tomorrow I find time for reading.

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #55 on: June 16, 2020, 08:07:36 am »
Read, very good again!

I wish I would be good writter too...

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #56 on: June 19, 2020, 05:31:47 pm »
I've messed up, I've posted the last piece out of order.
So I've cheated and inserted the piece I missed out as Part 14a (Canceled cancelation), in before Part 15. Which puts it back in the order I should have posted it in, in the first place.
My bad.
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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #57 on: June 20, 2020, 04:21:11 am »
Never mind, your work is very good :)

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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #58 on: June 22, 2020, 02:16:56 am »
Part 16 .....


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Re: Pasha, an Avatar story.
« Reply #59 on: June 22, 2020, 05:07:01 am »
Nice work again!

 

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