Poem - Pandora

[FamousMassacre1]

I wrote this today, please tell me your thoughts about it.

Pandora,

Planet of hope, home to the Na'vi, Omatikaya people and others too. Every breathe I take, I take wishing I was their... Earth is dying, so I hear. Avatars taking what is ours, and calling it theirs. Such violence Aytawtute cause. They destroyed Hometree with no emotional at all. They want to keep it civil, but how can that be? They destroyed our home, and killed my brothers and sisters with glee. Revenge is not welcomed, If not, Eywa might disapprove. From Pandora to Earth and Planets A-Like, we are a planet too.

I tried to do a Translation, but I kinda didn't get everyword

Pandora,
Planet of sìlpey kelku ne the na'vi, Omatikaya people sì others nìhawng every breathe oe munge oe munge wishing oe was their... Earth is dying, ha oe stawm avatars taking 'upe is ours, sì calling it theirs. such violence aytawtute cause. ayfo destroyed kelutral fa ke emotional at nìwotx ayfo new ne keep it civil, slä fyape tsun a lu ayfo destroyed our kelku sì killed my brothers sì sisters fa glee. revenge is ke welcomed, txo ke eywa might disapprove. Ftu Pandora ne earth sì planets a ayoe are a planet nìhawng

[Nume fpi sänume]

*nod* I like the perspective on it, thought it feels odd to reas something from the Na'vi standpoint and not see many Na'vi words. Still, a very nice piece

[FamousMassacre1]

Irayo, Nume fpi sänume

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