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Poem "Tìmawey Txonä"
« on: January 23, 2010, 09:59:51 am »
Kaltxì ma eylan

Just thought that would be the right place for my first poem in Na'vi.

I'm far from certain in the language, so every feedback is appreciated (be it grammatical, content-wise etc.)

rutxe, plltxe meuiahu


Tìmawey Txonä

I.
Oeru ketuwong nga lamu
Fìfmawnit atxan Sawtutel peieng
Ayfo fmami ’ivefu ngati fa yola krr
Slä nga tok ayfokip krr nìwotx

II.
Ayfol mamunge sì syamaw ngati nìapxa
Ayfol mamunge ngati fpi tsam
Ayfol sami helkut stum sanhìne
Slä nga ramikx tsatseng ayfone

III.
Nga ’eveng lu tsnì fko txamängìng
Ayoeng zene srung sivi fteke nga tìyerkup
Fte ngal rayutxe awngeyä ayronsemit
Ulte fpomit zamayunge awngeyä kifkeyur

IV.
Ngeyä lora mokril rikx ftu frautral
Nga syusaw hufwe lu: ’ivong kifkey!
Nga txìngtu lu tsnì za’u ne’ìm
Seiyi helkut ta tìska’a tsamä

V.
Nga tìrol lu a fko ke ramängol yola krr
Fmawn tìreyä angay a fko txamängìng
Set ayoengìl kameie ngamì
Ulte tse’a ngeyä tìlorit tìyawnitsì

VI.
Za’u oene; lu oehu; txon zera’u
Ulte kxawm trr ’ayong nìmun
Ngeyä tirea oehu layu – oel stawm ikranit
Tsnì rerol mì sìmawey txonä



Irayo for your attention :)


EDIT: translation (spoiler)
« Last Edit: January 23, 2010, 06:42:31 pm by Plumps83 »

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Re: Poem "Tìmawey Txonä"
« Reply #1 on: January 23, 2010, 06:02:35 pm »
I understood some of it, and while it doesn't seem fully correct, I also don't know enough about the grammar and construction to tell you whats out of place. I would like a translation included, at least in a spoiler block so I can read it and see how accurate my Na'vi is getting.

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Re: Poem "Tìmawey Txonä"
« Reply #2 on: January 23, 2010, 06:43:39 pm »
Tslolam ;)

I added the spoiler

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Re: Poem "Tìmawey Txonä"
« Reply #3 on: January 23, 2010, 08:09:44 pm »
Well, my Na'vi is getting better bit by bit. Its much nicer now that i have the translation :) before i only had a vague idea of what it said.

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Re: Poem "Tìmawey Txonä"
« Reply #4 on: January 23, 2010, 08:59:50 pm »
It was a really nice poem I think. With poems you don't really need to worry about grammar.
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