'Race for Survival' Comments

Started by Meynari Ke'nawm, February 13, 2011, 09:36:41 PM

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Meynari Ke'nawm

Thanks for reading! My first fanfic: so far, so good. I'll keep trying to remember to update. I just have to figure out the ending/rest of story...  ::)
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Amaya

Not a bad start but the chapters are a bit...um...short >.>

Still, a decent beginning

Puvomun

Quote from: Amaya on February 20, 2011, 07:44:56 PM
Not a bad start but the chapters are a bit...um...short >.>

ROFL! We don't all write chapters as long as yours! ;)
Also, writing can be hard work, especially when you're writing outside your 'comfort zone'.

Quote from: Amaya on February 20, 2011, 07:44:56 PM
Still, a decent beginning

Yes, it is a good start. Curious to see where this leads to.
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