Sky People - comments and questions

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archaic

Depends which human, Tawtewng springs to mind suddenly. ;) ;D
Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

Puvomun

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Ngopyu ayvurä.

Puvomun

Alrighty then. Chapter 50 is up. FIFTY. And you folks are still not tired of this story??
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Ngopyu ayvurä.

Nusumea Tirea

Kehe, we are not tired yet. We eagerly await the seccond part of it and all the sequels    :D

Amaya

*cuddles nantangtsyip*  Kehe!  Never tired of it! :P :P :P

Puvomun

Okay. Good. After all, I am writing on. Good to know that it is for a good reason. ;)
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Ngopyu ayvurä.

archaic

AHHH!!!!
Part 50? I am so far behind!!!! >:(
Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

Puvomun

QuoteRakan was almost famous for not being able to carry anything that came too close to a tune.

Poor Rakan...
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Ngopyu ayvurä.

Lolet

Quote from: Puvomun on April 25, 2011, 02:49:09 PM
QuoteRakan was almost famous for not being able to carry anything that came too close to a tune.

Poor Rakan...
;D

Puvomun

Ma oeyä Eywa... I am actually writing the text for a new Song that will be created by Puvomun, Amhul, I'vawm and Apxanari. The English version is done, I am moving it into Na'vi now (which means the English is changing as I lack some words). The Na'vi is probably loaded with errors and mistakes, but I love this!!

Let me treat you to the title and the first few lines of the song:

Kive Toruk Makto. (The seventh rider of Last Shadow).

Atxkxe lamu mawey, atxkxe lamu lefpom, Vay sawtute zama'u, mamunge feyä ayu lefngap sì feyä aysä'o a kxitx sì tìska'a.

Sawtute lamu tìngäzik, sawtute ke kamamänge. Fo stamo kame Eywa. Ayfo mungwrr 'aw, tsamsiyu asawtute. Fol zama'u olo'ti. Fo fpame' mì uniltìrantokx, fo new nivume. Uniltìranyu fpame' tse'a, ulte nì'kong po namume sì kamame. Po slamu Omatikayaru.

Slä sawtute ke kamame. Uniltìranyu pamlltxe foru, slä sawtute vamar tspang ayoengä kifkey, oeyä ayutral, oeyä seng aswok. Sawtute tsam sami.

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Ngopyu ayvurä.

Amaya

>.>  Ma Puvomun, is Jake not the sixth Toruk Makto, not the seventh? ;)

Puvomun

Quote from: Amaya on April 28, 2011, 03:33:32 PM
>.>  Ma Puvomun, is Jake not the sixth Toruk Makto, not the seventh? ;)
Yes! Someone else sent me a message with the same remark. You are correct, you get 12 points, and you can collect the coffee machine from the table on your left!

I already changed it on the Puvomun blog... (and the text is on the intermediate subforum to be corrected...)
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Ngopyu ayvurä.

Amaya


Puvomun

Fright moment!! I looked at the Avatar workfile I loaded in my writer's software and had a SHOCK! 45 chapters?!  :o

Then I noticed I had loaded "After the RDA", instead of "Sky People". Sheesh.
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Ngopyu ayvurä.

Puvomun

Good grief. A few more chapters and Sky People passes the 100.000 words...

"Which is a lot, I'm guessing." (Parker Selfridge)
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Ngopyu ayvurä.

Tsu'tey

I have read all you new Chapter and i say very cool written and a awesome Story, i understand not all but what I understand is great !

Ich bleibe in Erinnerung. Ich habe mit Toruk Makto gekämpft. Und wir waren Brüder. Und er war mein letzter Schatten.

Puvomun

Quote from: Tsu'tey on May 18, 2011, 04:18:39 AM
I have read all you new Chapter and i say very cool written and a awesome Story, i understand not all but what I understand is great !
Danke schön, mein Bruder. Irayo, ma oeyä tsmukan!
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Ngopyu ayvurä.

Puvomun

Historic moment.  :-X


Sky People has just passed the 100.000 words marker. Over 166 pages of text.

Note: this happened in chapter 55, which will be called "The song is finished".
The words last written, to get to this point, where: "Where to?" she asked.

Thank you all for reading, which drives me to keep writing!
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Ngopyu ayvurä.

Puvomun

Damn you, chapter 56...

you make me cry again...
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Ngopyu ayvurä.

Amaya