The hunter and the Beast--- comments

[Txep swirä]

Hello everyone,
I forgot to make a comment treat, so here it is.
Please if you have a comment, place it here.

Greetings

[Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}]

it was sort of funny to see how a na'vi would react to a cat.

[Puvomun]

Nice beginning! And yes, good idea to bring in an 'Rrta native animal

[Txep swirä]

thanks,
it was just an idea where i was playing with.
what if a Na'vi meet one of our animals/pets?
but i think the first chapter is not done yet, i still miss some lines of the story.

i don't know if this will become succesfull or not but we will see. maybe i will write more, even you guys don't like it

[Puvomun]

maybe i will write more, even you guys don't like it

First rule of writing: do it because you like it. If you don't like it, little chance others will.
Another first rule of writing: write a LOT and go wild! No limits!
And another first rule of writing: don't be afraid to make mistakes. That's how we learn.

You see, writing is simple. There are only one rules.