The Hunter and the Beast

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The hunter and the Beast
written by Txep swirä


hello everyone,

this is my first attemp to write a story in the English language and thats not easy for me.
this is not my first story, i am writing one now but thats written in Dutch.
i stopped with writing that story because i am stuck with it, and i had a new idea so i put it on paper.
it is not my intention to write mutch chapters of this story, maybe two of three of them.
if you guys like the story i will write more chapters.

and maybe, want someone check my story grammatical? Please pm me then i will be very happy if someone will do that.
i will edit the story if i find any errors.

greetings,
Txep swirä
"You not be here. Go back!"
Neytiri

I survived Black Mesa, I went trough City 17, I fought trough Rapture and escaped....
So what can possible go wrong on Pandora?

Stories:
The untold stories of the war on Pandora (written in Dutch)written in English

Txep swirä

chapter one
A Hunter walked down the corridor, his arms where on his back, bounded together.
Two guards walked behind him and paid attention to his attitude.
He couldn't see anything, his eyes where blinded. He only heard the footsteps of the guards behind him.

He didn't know where he was, he was captured in the forests and since then he didn't see any sunlight.
The last thing that he remembered was that he and some other warriors attacked a convoy of the Skywalkers.
The only thing he could think of why he was here, with what reason was he brought here? The Skywalkers normally kills the Na'vi, but why not now?

He felt the cold floor under his feets when he walked further, he heard sounds of talking people, other footsteps and many more sounds he didn't know where the came from.

Suddenly a guard grabbed his arm and he stopped, "for what?" he thought. He heard that the other guard passed him and he heard a knock.
An unknown voice said, "Come in" and he was pushed in his back, strangely he wasn't scared about his destination. So he walked and about 6 steps he was ordered to stop.
Again he waited, and for some minutes there was silence, nobody talked, nobody did something.

Suddenly he felt two hands in his neck; a guard removed the darkness and sunlight felt in his eyes.
He blinked and saw a man before him; he was sitting in a giant chair behind a giant desk full with paper and other objects.
The man didn't see anything and when the hunter looked back he saw that the guards were gone and that the door was closed.
He was standing on something soft; it so was pretty for his feets that he liked it.
A massive bookcase filled a wall, strange object were standing behind glass.
At the other side of the room was a door, he didn't know where too it leads but he wasn't
Interested in that.
Behind the man there were two windows, from where he was standing he could see the forest and he saw metal birds flying through the sky.
The man looked up from his paperwork and he stared to the Hunter.
The Hunter felt uncomfortable and he looked to the desk.

"I have question" the man said suddenly "Is it wrong that we, humans, are here?"
The Hunter looked in the eyes of the man and he couldn't think of an answer.
The man continued with speaking "Yes, said the man with the money. We need the resources"
The Hunter could only look the man, again he couldn't think about an answer
So the man spoke again, "No, said the Rebellion. It's a free world, it doesn't belong to us."
"Where was that man going?" Thought the Hunter.
"So I choose for the man with the money. And now I am here. I am here to work for the man with the money."
"What should you do?" He asked
"I... I... I don't know" the Hunter said.
The man smiled "That's why you don't know that this world have much valuable things. Like ores and other resources"
"I know what is valuable" the Hunter said, "I know what is really valuable here".
"Take a seat then" the man said, "Then we will talk".
While the Hunter cautiously walked to the chair, he saw that something white was in it.
But he didn't know what is was, so he attempted to sit.
Suddenly he felt something sharp in his butt and he looked behind.
He saw that the white thing was an animal; he didn't know what it was so he looked to the man.
The man only smiled so he looked back to the animal, and he saw big eyes with very narrow pupils.
It had his ears behind its head and it showed his teeth and it was ready to attack the Hunter again.
Sharp claws were visible and the animal attacked again but the Hunter dodged it with jumping back.
While he did that, he hit the desk and stuff moved and felled.
The animal stands up and showed a very big tail, his fur was massive; it looked bigger than it was.
While it jumped from the chair his tail stroked the Hunters leg and the animal walked to a corner where it could observe him.
He followed every movement of the Hunter and showed no interest to any other thing in the room.

Even the man was looking to the animal and when he looked back he saw that the Na'vi was sitting in the chair.
The man started "So you know what valuable? What can you tell me about it?"
"Its simple" said the Hunter "Everything around us is valuable: life, the animals, the tribe everything!"
the man laughs en said "That's not what I mean. I mean really valuable. Like this." He grabbed a little rock from his desk and showed it to the Na'vi.
"You know what this is?"
"No" did the Hunter say. "I don't know what that is."
"This is Unobtainium, if you have this then you can get everything you want."
"But I have anything what I want." Said the Hunter.
The man laughed again "You are to simple, but you don't have anything. I give you freedom if you tell me about Hometree."
While he said that, the animal in the corner walked to the Hunter and it sad before his feets and he looked up.
The Hunter didn't answered because all of his attention was to the beast before his feets.
The beast looked up and jumped on his lap.
"What is that thing doing?" Thought the Hunter and he hold his head back because the animal was standing up, reaching with his head to the Hunter.
The man smiled, he saw a fearless Na'vi struggling with a cute beast.
The Na'vi did something and the beast atacked the Hunter with his claws, resulting in four bloody scratches on his chest.
The beast was still standing on his lap and reached again to his head.
The Hunter did nothing to keep it away and he feels a wet noise touching his cheek, "What is this thing doing?"
The beast relaxed and showed trust to the Hunter by staying on his lap.

"So what can you tell about Hometree?" said the man.
"Its my home" was the answer "We live there for many generations."
"Ok, I see. Can you talk about moving to an other place?"
"Why?" asked the hunter, he didn't know where the man was going to.
"That's simple" answered the man, while he grabbed the stone again he said "This can be found under your home, its worth a lot and we want it."
"I don't believe I can't do that, sir" said the Hunter.
"What? Why? From what I understand is that you lead a pack of hunters and warriors."
"Yes, but I can't do that." the Hunter.
The animal on his lap was licking his claw and when it was done, it looked up and it showed interest in the hunter.
"What can you tell about the tree?" said the man.
"It's very old, it's big and his roots are very deep in the earth. We live there, it's our home"
That was not the answer that the man wanted to hear, he pushed a button and said "Guards come here please."
Two guards entered the room and grabbed the arm of the Na'vi.

The Na'vi rose up and the animal jumped from his lap on the ground and yawned, he showed some impressive teeth.
He saw that and walked to the door when he suddenly thought of something.
"Sir?" he said, he stood still and turned around "What is that for an animal? I have never seen it before."
The man smiled and said "That is an animal from my home planet, it's called a Cat. It's a pet and I brought it with me."
The Hunter left the room with this information and was going to an unknown destination.
"You not be here. Go back!"
Neytiri

I survived Black Mesa, I went trough City 17, I fought trough Rapture and escaped....
So what can possible go wrong on Pandora?

Stories:
The untold stories of the war on Pandora (written in Dutch)written in English