The Skxawng and his Gaia are soon parted.

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Txur’Itan

Fan-fiction website. - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5818287/1/A_Skxawng_and_his_Gaia_are_soon_Parted
Fan-Fiction discussion forum - http://forum.fanfiction.net/topic/74778/25654666/1/

Chapter -- One (1) -- Edited on the FF site.
Written before I found all of the information on Grammar, vocabulary, and got a better understanding of tense.  I will need to re-edit this Chapter when I have more time.

Chapter -- Two (2) -- Edited on the FF site.
My Na'vi is much improved I think, but I am still learning.  I am confident in what is conveyed.

Chapter -- Three (3) -- Edited on the FF site.
I am posting chapters on to fan-fiction, it seems more orderly, and keeps me from slamming this server with my files.

Chapter -- Four (4) -- Posted - Click the page right button, the pull down doesn't seem to show it if the page is cached from before.

Chapter -- Five (5) -- Posted -

Chapter -- Six (6) -- Posted -


私は太った男だ。


Txur’Itan

#1
It has been a while.

But, here is Chapter two.
私は太った男だ。


Txur’Itan

#2
Chapter 4 completed and Posted on the FF page.

I edited chapters 1-3 on the FF site, I think I was way too tired when I did it, so let me know if I crushed those chapters into meaningless nonsense.  I will probably have to reread them again, and reedit when I am less tired.

I have added meaning translations for the Na'vi in all of the existing Chapters, some of the readers needed that.  I am still uncertain of my grammar, so if Learn/understand something new that I did not know before, I will edit and fix the Na'vi dialogue where it is glaringly obvious.  But I have poured over the Na'vi in these stories so much, I have their meaning memorized.
私は太った男だ。


Txur’Itan

I completed chapter five, finally!

I was heavily distracted, so on ward and outward.

I have some momentum on Chapter 6, maybe I will finish that a bit quicker than my other chapters.
私は太った男だ。


Txur’Itan

#4
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5818287/1/A_Skxawng_and_his_Gaia_are_soon_Parted

I lost momentum because of work stress.

I broke up chapter 6 into two parts.  Mostly because I think I am going to end this story in Chapter seven.

I think that with the plans for the sequel, I don't want to play around with a contradictory vision of life under the ocean.  It would be far too much work, and beyond my ability to commit to so much research prior release of the extended 1st movie, and a potential ocean targeted sequel, I was thinking I should probably stop with some open ended closure.

The next series could be for the period between 2 and 3 , and then after that, maybe I will write some more.

Unless there is interest in a story that might be significantly outside of cannon.
私は太った男だ。


Txur’Itan

私は太った男だ。