The story of Theyl. Comments thread.

[Teyl Maktoyu Ayfìwopxä]

Please leave your comments about my new story here.

Read the story at:
http://forum.learnnavi.org/fiction-fanfiction/the-story-of-theyl-%28hapxi-aw%29/

Confirmed languages the story will be translated to: English, Na'vi, Dutch.
If you'd like me to translate to any other language,
please contact me and I'll try my very best.

Thank you for reading.

[Tsamsiyu92]

You started out well, why did you have "theyl" as a na'vi name, there's no "th" in na'vi.

...and who closed your story thread? a mod?

[Teyl Maktoyu Ayfìwopxä]

No, I did, I can close my own posts too, I just did it to prevent people to post there.
I don't know about that name, I just liked it. I could replace it with kxetse?

[Tsamsiyu92]

Or Tseyl, or txeyl.

The best and most original names are either two words nicely squesed into eachother or just something that fits pronounciation rules. Like

Theyl -> Tseyl (fits pronounciation rules without causing ambigiouty)
Tawtute Akawng -> Tawtewng (username here, "welded" nicely together).

Tirea as a name could also cause ambigouty, because it is a word from the dictionary, but also a rarely used one, so change it only if you want to, however, seeing as the character is a Na'vi male, the name might sounds more like a girl's name. Simply adding a "n" would fix that.

Tirean maybe?

[Teyl Maktoyu Ayfìwopxä]

Lol, I just put in Tirea, to put our mod in there :p not sure he noticed yet.