Try To Understand--comments.

[Ekirä]

I don't know much about how this thing runs....but this seems to be what other fan fictioners are doing.

Comments here, story here: http://forum.learnnavi.org/fiction-fanfiction/try-to-understand/

[Lolet]

Poor Korun! But good story! 

[Puvomun]

My first ever attempt at fan fiction! Just a short story.

Sìltsan nìtxan, ma tsmuke!
Really a nice story to read, and you have captured the spirit of the Na'vi people in this, as well as the world of the 'ewan. Irayo.

[Kayrìlien]

I've never been a huge fanfiction person, but I really like this! It gives great insight into how the characters are feeling and how they react to each other, which is often lost in stories this short. I think you've done a good job showing both the reverence that the Na'vi have for their world and the traditional awkwardness of adolescence. Great job!

Kayrìlien

[Muzer]

Moved some posts from story thread to comment thread.

[Tsamsiyu92]

Awesome writing, I hope to read more from you.