A Na'vi story, comments thread.

Teyl Maktoyu Ayfìwopxä · April 18, 2010, 04:51:21 AM

Kaltxì ma tsmuk,

From now this will be the comments thread for my story,
I've removed the story and replaced it on the fanfiction thread.
Be sure to visit, I'll also place my updates here!

For the story please use this link:
http://forum.learnnavi.org/fiction-fanfiction/third-chapter-of-a-navi-story/
Mìhìl.

Tsamsiyu92 · April 18, 2010, 04:00:52 PM

Well, you know that "sixteen" is not vofu, but mevol (16_decimal=20_octal).

But if you temporary translated 16_octal as "sixteen", then it's right.

Teyl Maktoyu Ayfìwopxä · April 19, 2010, 09:35:06 AM

Quote from: Tsamsiyu92 on April 18, 2010, 04:00:52 PM
Well, you know that "sixteen" is not vofu, but mevol (16_decimal=20_octal).

But if you temporary translated 16_octal as "sixteen", then it's right.

Irayo! I'm bad with Na'Vi numering.

Ftiafpi · April 19, 2010, 09:42:38 AM

It's good. Some of the character conflict seems a little contrived but whatever.

Anyway, since this site is about learning and not about us translating stuff for you, if you translate this to the best of your ability I will help correct it.

Teyl Maktoyu Ayfìwopxä · April 19, 2010, 09:48:07 AM

Ah, well, I didn't say 'let it be translated by the moderators', did I ? :-)

Offcourse I'll try to translate it on my own first.
I don't want to be 'learning' Na'Vi for (about 2) months (now) and don't know how to greet, and talk about the weather.

Muzer · April 23, 2010, 04:14:00 PM

Quote from: Ftiafpi on April 19, 2010, 09:42:38 AM
It's good. Some of the character conflict seems a little contrived but whatever.

Well you don't know what the back story is, so there is probably a good reason for the conflict - the line Tsäku said could have just been "the last straw".

Anyway, interesting start - shouldn't this really be in the fanfic subforum?

Teyl Maktoyu Ayfìwopxä · April 23, 2010, 04:16:53 PM

I dunno, perhaps here are more people who will read it?

Tsamsiyu92 · April 26, 2010, 01:42:49 PM

You're doing it well, maybe it's time to translate it completely.

Teyl Maktoyu Ayfìwopxä · April 26, 2010, 03:14:02 PM

Err, no thanks, I'm already busy on a translating project, I won't translate this untill around June-July.
Also because of my school.

kewnya txamew'itan · April 26, 2010, 03:15:20 PM

In that case, might it not be better in fanfiction?

Teyl Maktoyu Ayfìwopxä · April 26, 2010, 03:17:26 PM

Haha

I've heard that before, and am still thinking of that.

I know my next chapter will be in na'vi though.

Teyl Maktoyu Ayfìwopxä · April 30, 2010, 05:25:00 PM

Okay, can anyone tell me how to move a thread? because I'll move this.

Tsamsiyu92 · May 02, 2010, 12:33:13 PM

I do not think there is an apostrophy between me- and -vol.

Teyl Maktoyu Ayfìwopxä · May 08, 2010, 03:07:37 PM

Be sure to ready my fourth chapter of my story!

Tsamsiyu92 · May 09, 2010, 04:55:40 AM

It is really a great story, keep it up:)

Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä} · May 12, 2010, 01:53:27 PM

can you translate the Na'vi words into english? some of us havent mastered it yet

Teyl Maktoyu Ayfìwopxä · May 12, 2010, 06:13:54 PM

Done! :p

Teyl Maktoyu Ayfìwopxä · May 14, 2010, 02:23:20 PM

TO EVERYBODY WHO READS MY STORYLINE!

THIS WEEKEND THERE WILL NOT BE A NEW CHAPTER.

I'm to busy with other things, I have not had any time for writing yet.

Thanks for your attention!

Mìhìl

Teyl Maktoyu Ayfìwopxä · May 17, 2010, 03:19:01 PM

Chapter 5 is out...

Yes it's a very short one, and no I didn't write it myself but copied it from the movie...

Any questions?

Teyl Maktoyu Ayfìwopxä · July 25, 2010, 03:46:29 PM

Right, here's the thing, if you get me motivation on this page,
I'll start a new one or continue this one, depends on what the comments say.

Otherwise, I'll stop learning na'vi.
I'll still keep posting on the forums, but I'll stop learning.