Coming back with another poem :P

['Awpo]

Kaltxì ma eylan,

I have been away for a while again and I wanted to do another poem for myself.
It's Night Close by Mark R. Slaughter this time, and it goes like this:

Under night close
Death rose to greet me.
I turned; looked back,
Though nothing beckoned –
No one cried or mourned.

Scorned by all
– My fellow race –
I shed the byes to empty space, then
Gazed upon the stony face
Of Death anon, and
So chose our treaty.

So my attempt to translation would be:


Äotxon tstu
Kxitxìl nefä sami kaltxì si oeru.
Oe mamìn; namìn ane'ìm,
Hufwa ke'u aungia sami–
Kawtu tsamngawvìk fu ngaytxoa sami.

Stamängo fa ayfo
- Oeyä nì'enga ponguti -

This is all I got though, because my native language is Dutch instead of English, so I found it very hard to understand the last lines of the poem sadly enough... So if anyone is willing to do them for me I would love them for eternity

Comments and constructive criticism is appreciated!

Eywa ayngahu
'Awpo

[kxamtxon nantang]

First before I start "treaty" doesn't exist yet in Na'vi so I used agree(mllte). This is grammatically incorrect, I know, but I didn't know how to change agree to agreement. And I didn't know how to turn us into our so I left it us.

äotxon tstu si
kxitxìt kamlltxem nekaltxì si
Oe mamìn, namìn ane'ìm
Hufwa ke'u syamaw
kawtu tsngamawrìk fu ngaytxoa sami

Vame'ki fanìwotx
Oeyä nì'enga ponguti
Oe lonu ayhum ne txayo, tsakrr
Namìn tskxe key
Kxìtx ke, sì
ha ftxamey ayoeng

Hope you enjoy

[Tirea Aean]

well, us-->our is (ay)oe(ng)eyä, pick one or both of the things in the brackets.

There's a writing contest breweing up in the news section. perhaps yall would like to participate?

http://forum.learnnavi.org/news-announcements/navi-language-writing-contest/msg0/?topicseen#new