My second song - war song

[Tswusayona Tsamsiyu]

ok so since no one in the pamtseo nìna'vi nì'aw has commented this song of mine (yet), I thought I would post it here too and in addition I can get correction (if they are needed) from pretty advanced na'vi learners. I'm eager for your comments.

Tsamä Tìrol
Samsiyut oel tse'a
Samsiyu anawm
Merakto txayo ka
Tsam zera'u, tsam

Merakto samsiyu olo'ä
Merakto feyä fa'lit
Ne tsawla tsam nìtxan fo kerä
Merakto nawma Na'vi

Perey oel ngati
Ma oeyä tsamsiyu
Txopu rä'ä sivi
Eywa ngahu!


Ha, 'upe aynga fpìl?