Way Txopuwä (Litany Against Fear from "Dune.")

[Nayumeie]

Oe zenke txopu sivi.
I must not fear.
Txopu lu tspangyu ronsemä.
Fear is the killer of the mind.
Txopu lu kxitx ahì'i a zamunge 'änsyema tìska'at.
Fear is the little death that brings complete destruction.
Oe ultxa sasyi oeyä txopuhu.
I will meet with my fear.
Oe tayung a tsa'ul ftivem oet ulte tsa'u kivä oekamlä.
I will allow it to pass by me and go through me.
Maw fwa txopu ftolem, oel sayar narit ronsemä fte tsive'a fya'ot txopuä.
After the fear has passed, I will use the mind's eye to see the fear's path.
Fya'omì ke layu ke'u.
In the path will be nothing.
Oe nì'aw 'ayì'awn.
Only I will remain.

Questions, comments, & corrections are all welcome.

[Kemaweyan]

Only two correction. In Na'vi is double negation:

 Fya'omì ke layu ke'u.
 In the path will be nothing.

And maybe this sentence "Maw txopu ftolem, oel sayar narit ronsemä fte tsive'a fya'ot txopuä." should be:

 Maw tsakrr a txopu ftolem, oel sayar narit ronsemä fte tsive'a fya'ot txopuä.
 After the fear has passed, I will use the mind's eye to see the fear's path.

or

 Maw fwa txopu ftolem, oel sayar narit ronsemä fte tsive'a fya'ot txopuä.
 After the fear has passed, I will use the mind's eye to see the fear's path.

[Nayumeie]

Noted and fixed. Irayo nìtxan!

[Lance R. Casey]

Sìltsan nìtxan!

A few more things:

Oel tayung futa tsa'ul ftivem oet ulte tsa'u kivä oekxamlä.
I will allow it to pass by me and go through me.

[Ftiafpi]

I think Skxawng had made one of these too, you should compare notes with him.

[Skxawng]

I think Skxawng had made one of these too, you should compare notes with him.

yup.

Oe zenke txopu sivi.
Txopuri tspangyu ronsemä lu
Txopu lu hì'ia kxitx fwa zamivunge tìska'at lewotx
Oel wayem oeyä txoputi
Oel tsati tayung ftem sì kxamlä oeio
Ulte krr a tsal ftolem, oel nariti lemìfa mayìn fte tsive'o tsayä fya'oti
Tsengpe txopu kolä, ke'u ke layu
Nì'aw oe 'ayì'awn

Seems our versions are mostly similar with minor exceptions and changes.