Body-related words

[Mirri]

So it's my turn to reveal new body-related words, and instead of just posting stuff, I wanted to do something special with the words given to me.
I've written three poems, which will be revealed over the next couple days, using the new words


First one is a short haiku:
Kame sireat
a srekrr kamä. Ta'leng
fizayuyä nga




Second is a poem:
Aysuteri ta taw
Fol ereyk fngapit
Slä fo txopu si na'rìngur
Feyä mesyokx 'itrikx
Fo täpatep nìtirea
Ulte munge txepit
Fte nivekx ayoengeyä ta'lengit ayutralä.

Fkori ke tsun tslivam
Tìsrawti a po sleyku
Txo peyä ayngrr ke niä kifkeyit
Ulte peyä ronsem lu kip taw

Na'vi		English
ta'leng		skin
tsyokx		hand

More to come tomorrow!

[Swoka Swizaw]

I "complain" in the last body parts post (about the lack of the word "hand"), and someone delivers it the next day. Brilliant.

These words - and your poems - I like.

EDIT: I re-read your poems, and they are fantastic!!

[Tirea Aean]

wow Mirri, your work is brilliant!! lor leiu nìtxan nang! txantsana tìkangkem. oel faylì'ut tsive'a a fì'u prrte' leiu oer.

[wm.annis]

Please include the accenting for ta'leng (or I could, but I don't like editing other people's posts).  Irayo!

[Kì'eyawn]

Is this word 'itrikx also new, ma smuk?

[Tirea Aean]

my guess is no. possibly derived from existing vocab in the following way:

'it+rikx='itrikx

[Mirri]

Please include the accenting for ta'leng (or I could, but I don't like editing other people's posts).  Irayo!

If you can, then please do so. There is no accenting on any of the words that I have received.

Fixed.

[Mirri]

my guess is no. possibly derived from existing vocab in the following way:

'it+rikx='itrikx

Nga eyawr lu.

We also need a word for poetry. lì'utseo ?

[Tirea Aean]

yes. I can definitely live with lì'utseo. makes sense to me. we have pamtseo, reltseo, and the such.

[Teyl Maktoyu Ayfìwopxä]

Wow, I really like it!

[Nyx]

Great poems, Mirri, and that's a sweet idea! Looking forward to more of that ^^

[Prrton]

So it's my turn to reveal new body-related words, and instead of just posting stuff, I wanted to do something special with the words given to me.
I've written three poems...

Tewti! ma Mirri

Faylì'utseo ngeyä nìngay lor lu nìtxan!

Memikyunmì srereiew!

Irayo!

[NeotrekkerZ]

Just posting to keep current with the thread.  Love the poems too.