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Re: The Lion King nìNa'vi
« Reply #20 on: October 11, 2010, 03:14:57 pm »
Nìtxan Txantsan Nang!!!!!!

I am a HUGE Lion King fan. Irayo Nitxan!! for doing this, Le`Eylan. This is indeed one of the best things I have seen translated into Na`vi, and it is a perfect story for translating. I can't wait (no, not to be King!) to see how you finish this. I will undoubtedly print it out and read it over and over.

TLK was my #2 favorite film, but was recently eclipsed when I saw 'Avatar' for the seventh time (seen TLK six times, but will undoubtedly see it again, as it is periodically re-released). I have also seen the Broadway show six times, and will see it again either in December or next April. So that certainly makes it my favorite story after Narnia.

I will sing or speak any male lion part except Scar. I can also sing the Zulu chant in the main/end title, as well as some of the other Zulu in both the film and the show. I can also do an effective, authentic lion roar, and I can and do roar with the 'pride' next door!

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Re: The Lion King nìNa'vi
« Reply #21 on: October 12, 2010, 02:01:22 am »
This is cool.  I look forward to more.  :D
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Re: The Lion King nìNa'vi
« Reply #22 on: October 12, 2010, 12:37:24 pm »
Merel amip. Slä oel kin tuteot a tsun tsive'a oeyä keyeyt.....  ::)
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Re: The Lion King nìNa'vi
« Reply #23 on: October 12, 2010, 12:45:35 pm »
I’m on it :) … it’s not that much, though, I think…

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Re: The Lion King nìNa'vi
« Reply #24 on: October 12, 2010, 04:29:32 pm »
W. T. F.
*snip*

O.O

That is a loooooot.... has this been advertised somewhere?!

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Re: The Lion King nìNa'vi
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Re: The Lion King nìNa'vi
« Reply #26 on: October 12, 2010, 06:37:26 pm »
Wou fìsäfpìl nìwotx.*

Ke fnan oel fìfnetìtsunit a slivu kenongyuo nìtam fte fmivi srung sivi frapor fìtxan nìtsafya slä txo kin lahea menari fte nivìn tìralpengit nì’it nì’ul, rutxe oer ätxäle sivi nìprrte’ luke fwa pey kaw’it.*


’Ìheyu Tìreyä!

Yawne nìwotx!
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Re: The Lion King nìNa'vi
« Reply #27 on: October 13, 2010, 02:34:39 am »
Added to the Current Projects thread, and stickied...  :)
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Re: The Lion King nìNa'vi
« Reply #28 on: October 13, 2010, 03:06:35 am »
... just be careful about copyright issues.  Disney's notorious for protecting them...
And how do you suggest that I do that? :-\

Wou fìsäfpìl nìwotx.*

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’Ìheyu Tìreyä!

Yawne nìwotx!
Irayo seiyi ngaru ma Prrton, ulte rutxe, srung sivi. Tengkrr oe pamrel si, oel ke tsere'a oeyä keyeyit.  ;)

Added to the Current Projects thread, and stickied...  :)

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Re: The Lion King nìNa'vi
« Reply #29 on: October 13, 2010, 10:29:30 am »
Merel amip nìmun :3

EDIT: ayrel amip nì'ul
« Last Edit: October 13, 2010, 11:01:17 am by Le'eylan »
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Re: The Lion King nìNa'vi
« Reply #30 on: October 13, 2010, 12:02:05 pm »
Nìpänutawnìng ;)

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2. ta tsakrr awnga zola'u 'Rrtane
ulte tsame'a tsawket
fìtsenget terok nì'ul ayul to awngal tsun tsive'a,
nì'ul hem to awnga tsun (kem) sivi … not sure here. I’ve never seen si on its own and I dont’t think it’s possible.

3. fìtsenget terok txana tìlorìl,
terok nì'ul ayu to ngal tsun rivun.
slä tsawke kllkxem nìtxur,
kerä ka taw aean.
vewng awngat tengkrr awnga rerey. … not sure here, I’m taking this from Fìtxon na ton alahe… where it’s said: tengrr hereyn nìpxintengrr teruvon ke tsranten

4. …

vaykrr awngal rivun awngeyä sengit, … or senget etc.
sìreyä ayfya'o. … lenition after


7. Zazu- Ngeyä sa'nokìl kawkrr ngaru ke kolar futa nga zenke uvan sivi syuvehu srake?
Scar- Peut new ngal?
Zazu- Oe zìma'u fìtsengne taluna oel new piveng ngaru futa Olo'eyktan (alu) Mufasa zìya'u. … maybe the apposition is better here
Oe sìlpey ngaru lu lun atxantsan a peng pelun ngal ke terok tì'eoiot fìrewon.
Scar- Ma Zazu! Nga teykul oeyä syuveru. … (1) Now, I’m not sure with that. Do we need tha vocative whenever we call a person? I’d say yes, but others might be of a different opinion. (2) If I remember correctly, Scar has a mouse, kefyak? Why not use vey then?
Zazu- HRH! Pxaya ayu tayul ftu nga tengkrr Olo'eyktan zaya'u.
Poan sti na Toruk luke sneyä smar.
Scar- uhh... Oe txopu si NÌTXAN.
Zazu- KEHE ma SCAR, rä’ä nìn oet nìtsafya... SRUNG! … Interesting question, whether the exclamation »Help« in Na’vi is the same… Could also be srung sivi, tìng srung oer or something like that

8. Mufasa- Ma Scar!
Scar- sran?
Mufasa- Poanit/pot lonu. … if it’s to be »release him!«
Zazu- Nga zera'u mì hrr atxantsan, ma Olo'eyktan.
Scar- Wou, fìswirä ke tsun livu oeyä tsmukan kefyak?
Mufasa- Sarabil oelsì ke tsarme'a ngat fìrewon tì'eoiotmì.
Scar-  Tsatìlen larmu fìtrr, srak? Oe 'erefängu kawng nìtxan.
Oe zamene tswiva'... … “I must have forgotten”, IIRC, maybe Oe tswama’ nìlaw/nìngay will do the trick, although I’m not sure whether the sarcasm comes through :D


9. Zazu- Tsa'u ke lu kea lun! Na Olo'eyktanä tsmukan, nga frakrr leru 'awve!
Slä, nga ke larmu fìtrr.
Scar- Tse.. Oe larmu 'awve, vaykrr tsaswirätsyìp nolokx.
Mufasa- Tsa"swirätsyìp" lu oeyä 'itan... ulte ngeyä olo'eyktan laryu.
Scar- Oel (zene?) tskxekeng sivi oeyä tìskepekur! … because of si-construction
Mufasa- Oìsss!  ngeyä txalit oene rä'ä mìn! … I changed the position of rä’ä here because of the recent posts about ke from the workshop. I take it that rä’ä needs to stick as closely as possible to the verb. Not sure about transitivity here, is mìn a transitive verb?
Scar- Kehe ma Mufasa. Slä kxawm ngal ke mivìn NGEYÄ txalit oene.
Mufasa- Längu tsa'u fpeio, srak?
Scar- Tam tam. Oe kawkrr ke unil sivi teri fpeio sivi ngaru! … because of si-construction
Zazu- Tsahey, pelun?
Scar- Tse, oel eromum futa oer tolìng eltut, slä txur ke lu oer.


10. Zazu- Längu 'awpo mì frasoaia ma 'eylan. pum amune mì fum oeyä. … this is a tricky one … “there are two (of those) in mine (i.e. my family)” … two pum’s in one sentence that refer to different words? Don’t know if that’s possible. Otherwise you can just use soaia again, I presume
Ulte ayfol frakrr ska'a sì'eoiot...
Mufasa- Pehem sivi oe poanhu?
Zazu- Poan lasyu txantsana tìhahawä tseng. … not sure about the ‹asy› here… I thought this was used for the personal intention of the speaker
Mufasa- Ma Zazu!
Zazu- Fpivìl teri tsakem! Tengkrr poan tsewtx lirvu, ngal tsun mivunge poanit wrrpa ulte yur poanit! … lirvu again because of tengkrr

to be continued…


Hope, this is helpful… ;) and I didn’t wear you down with this. You’re doing a fantastic job here and I love the project!!! Mivakto nìzawnong!
« Last Edit: October 13, 2010, 12:04:44 pm by Plumps »

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Re: The Lion King nìNa'vi
« Reply #31 on: October 14, 2010, 10:46:08 am »
Nìpänutawnìng ;)

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2. ta tsakrr awnga zola'u 'Rrtane
u...

Ma Plumps, irayo seiyi nìtxan!  :D
I've fixed what you commented on, and it would be great if you took another look before I get started on the pictures :)
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Re: The Lion King nìNa'vi
« Reply #32 on: October 14, 2010, 11:08:48 am »
Phuuu, glad, I didn’t scare you off :P
I would be comfortable if somebody else also had a look at it… I can always overlook something…
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Re: The Lion King nìNa'vi
« Reply #33 on: October 14, 2010, 11:37:24 am »
I would be comfortable if somebody else also had a look at it… I can always overlook something… ;)

Indeed indeed. >_>
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Re: The Lion King nìNa'vi
« Reply #34 on: October 14, 2010, 12:46:34 pm »
I would be comfortable if somebody else also had a look at it… I can always overlook something… ;)

Indeed indeed. >_>
Zeit für Prrton.

Is there something compiled with the most recent (edited by Tsm. Plumps) text juxtaposed to the original? I'm happy to to look at it, but my brain is not wrapped around where all the pieces and parts are well enough to find and assemble them into what I should be reviewing. Nìkeftxo...

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Re: The Lion King nìNa'vi
« Reply #35 on: October 14, 2010, 06:53:05 pm »
Krr a fìtìkangkemvi lu hasey, rutxe oeru piveng fte tsivun oe fìtìrolit rivol :) Ke tsun pivey!

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Re: The Lion King nìNa'vi
« Reply #36 on: October 22, 2010, 07:10:48 pm »
Now we just need voice actors :)

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Re: The Lion King nìNa'vi
« Reply #37 on: October 23, 2010, 08:06:50 pm »
Le `eylan, will we be seeing more story soon?

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Re: The Lion King nìNa'vi
« Reply #38 on: October 24, 2010, 02:31:05 am »
Le `eylan, will we be seeing more story soon?

I would like to say yes, but I got so insanely lot of homework and test these days..
But I will try, hopefully tomorrow.
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Re: The Lion King nìNa'vi
« Reply #39 on: October 25, 2010, 08:45:19 am »
Me and KalaKuival translated "The Morning Report":

« Last Edit: October 25, 2010, 08:50:27 am by Le'eylan »
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