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Re: TOOTHLESS 1 & 2 - How to Train your Dragon.
« Reply #60 on: May 23, 2010, 02:42:44 pm »
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Re: TOOTHLESS 1 & 2 - How to Train your Dragon.
« Reply #61 on: May 23, 2010, 04:21:47 pm »
Seze could totally take toothless :P

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Re: TOOTHLESS 1 & 2 - How to Train your Dragon.
« Reply #62 on: May 23, 2010, 05:50:51 pm »
oh no. a who would win in a fight question. lol
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Re: TOOTHLESS 1 & 2 - How to Train your Dragon.
« Reply #63 on: May 23, 2010, 08:42:50 pm »
Seze and Toothless would probably be buddies taking out the RDA.

However, we have an interesting issue here.

Seze has carbon fiber reinforced bones, Toothless's skeleton is unknown.

Toothless is clearly an agile and fast flyer in the movie, Seze is more of a gliding flyer.

I am unsure of how fire effects the Ikran flesh, but being a fire breathing dragon with fire resistant scales, toothless may have an advantage there.

Assuming Toothless is on Earth, he is coming from a planet with a thinner atmosphere with a higher gravity.

Am thinking that the Banshee Bites and claws would be very dangerous to toothless if they got into CQC, but at range Toothless has a clear advantage, but he can not do anything without hiccup now that his tail has been injured, so there needs to be a rider on toothless at all times, and that is the biggest weakness, take out hiccup or his prosthetic tail-flap, and toothless can't fly.
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Re: TOOTHLESS 1 & 2 - How to Train your Dragon.
« Reply #64 on: May 29, 2010, 09:36:25 am »
How will Hiccup make an exopack for toothless?
Did Astrid tag along.
Where do you find a cryo unit big enough, and flame proof enough, for a night fury?

OK then, so who's going to write this crossover fan fic?
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Re: TOOTHLESS 1 & 2 - How to Train your Dragon.
« Reply #65 on: May 29, 2010, 09:51:12 am »
you.
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Re: TOOTHLESS 1 & 2 - How to Train your Dragon.
« Reply #66 on: May 29, 2010, 11:26:00 am »
Your kidding me?
Have you read my Avatar 2 script?

That took me three months to write, and I can't help feeling that I should go back and rework much of it .....

The first half is too wordy.
There is no Ikran riding before the war.
Neytiri has a new Ikran we are told, but we never see it, or them 'choosing' each other.
I really should have expanded Peyral's character more before her scene with the amp suit, and the chase isn't developed enough.
The shack with Jake and the other guy, it wasn't explained how two extra people are suddenly in on Jake/Bill/Cindy & Max's plan.
I should have explained what happened in the Avatars dormitory shack and the blood on the floor, before the two humans found it .....
and so on and so forth .....
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Re: TOOTHLESS 1 & 2 - How to Train your Dragon.
« Reply #67 on: May 29, 2010, 11:31:31 am »
*Grabs archaic by the back of his shirt and lifts him off the ground*
"PULL YOURSELF TOGETHER!!!!!!!!!!!"
*shakes archaic*
"Stop picking holes and start writing more"
*throws archaic into a corner*
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Re: TOOTHLESS 1 & 2 - How to Train your Dragon.
« Reply #68 on: May 29, 2010, 11:40:45 am »
you've been owned. :')
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Re: TOOTHLESS 1 & 2 - How to Train your Dragon.
« Reply #69 on: May 30, 2010, 11:57:18 am »
Archaic get's up, dusts down, and continues :



 ..... Forgot to mention the Guy in the amp in the scene with Peyral, is the same guy as was shooting up the forest, who the outcast escorted back to see Lars Pope.
Forgot to mention Quaritch in the night out scenes with Pasha, Bethany and Wainfleet.
Didn't fully explain that Selfridge is being played by Dasliva.
There just isn't enough Jake and Neytiri time.
Mo'at is a great leader in her own right, this didn't show in the scene where the field hospital is attacked.
Failed to mention that the Warrior having bullets dug out of his leg is Tsu'tey.
Failed to spell out that the Outcast turned every human thermal imaging screen off at the same time.
I could continue .....

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Re: TOOTHLESS 1 & 2 - How to Train your Dragon.
« Reply #70 on: May 30, 2010, 12:10:15 pm »
*grabs archaic, smacks archaic's head into a wall and then gags archaic*
"SHUT UP AND START WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
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Re: TOOTHLESS 1 & 2 - How to Train your Dragon.
« Reply #71 on: May 31, 2010, 04:49:38 am »
Archaic gets up and dusts down again. Uses blood from the slight head wound to write on the wall .....


 ..... The whole environmentalist message is almost completely missing.
Too few characters are named.
Magnus only stops Mo'at from being shot the way he does, coz I couldn't think of a powerful enough speech for Jake to give, to stop Lars shooting her.
Failed to include a female doing pull ups.
Failed to explain exactly how Trudy isn't dead.
Failed to get Augustine on screen as much as I had intended to.
Failed to mention if Quaritches spirit is with Eywa.
Failed to have Grace explain that she is too happy where she is to want to come back as one of the living.
Failed to Czech spelings properly before posting scenes .....
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Re: TOOTHLESS 1 & 2 - How to Train your Dragon.
« Reply #72 on: May 31, 2010, 05:06:00 am »
*ties up archaic then dumps him in a vault which is then sealed*
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Re: TOOTHLESS 1 & 2 - How to Train your Dragon.
« Reply #73 on: May 31, 2010, 11:44:54 am »
Archaic smiles, thinks 'The things I have to do, to avoid writing fanfic, but I beat you Tawtewng!'
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Re: TOOTHLESS 1 & 2 - How to Train your Dragon.
« Reply #74 on: May 31, 2010, 12:58:58 pm »
*fails to mention the mind control gas flooding the vault*
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Re: TOOTHLESS 1 & 2 - How to Train your Dragon.
« Reply #75 on: June 01, 2010, 02:07:07 am »
Archaic is completely mindless, so the gas has no effect.
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Re: TOOTHLESS 1 & 2 - How to Train your Dragon.
« Reply #76 on: June 02, 2010, 02:26:32 pm »
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Re: TOOTHLESS 1 & 2 - How to Train your Dragon.
« Reply #77 on: June 02, 2010, 02:56:54 pm »
I am a bad, bad tute.

And I know this is not the fist time I been bad and you have had to point it out.

Sorry.



So, How To Train Your Dragon, will it get any Oscar nominations? I feel it deserves a few.
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Re: TOOTHLESS 1 & 2 - How to Train your Dragon.
« Reply #78 on: June 02, 2010, 03:23:19 pm »
I am a bad, bad tute.

And I know this is not the fist time I been bad and you have had to point it out.

Sorry.

So, How To Train Your Dragon, will it get any Oscar nominations? I feel it deserves a few.

As much as I would like to see that happen, I sincerely believe The Secret of Kells will win.
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Re: TOOTHLESS 1 & 2 - How to Train your Dragon.
« Reply #79 on: June 03, 2010, 12:37:37 am »
They gave best picture to 'The Hurt Locker', so why not?
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