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Offline EyeOfPython

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Pamtseo amip oeyä alu Aurorae
« on: May 07, 2015, 11:10:43 am »
A new piece I wrote. Positive and negative feedback is highly welcome :)



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Re: Pamtseo amip oeyä alu Aurorae
« Reply #1 on: May 07, 2015, 12:07:31 pm »
It's nice  :)

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Re: Pamtseo amip oeyä alu Aurorae
« Reply #2 on: May 07, 2015, 12:57:58 pm »
Sounds modern.

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Re: Pamtseo amip oeyä alu Aurorae
« Reply #3 on: May 08, 2015, 01:06:50 pm »
Pamtseo atxantsan nìtxan! :D

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Re: Pamtseo amip oeyä alu Aurorae
« Reply #4 on: May 08, 2015, 01:13:47 pm »
You composed that? :o
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Re: Pamtseo amip oeyä alu Aurorae
« Reply #5 on: May 08, 2015, 01:26:16 pm »
I'm glad you like it :)

Sounds modern.
Interesting. I would settle it more in the late romantic area, which I don't regard modern^^ But I think we just percive things differently, which is nice :)

You composed that? :o
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Re: Pamtseo amip oeyä alu Aurorae
« Reply #6 on: May 09, 2015, 06:38:29 pm »
Lor lu nìtxan nang!

 

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