My first short story in Na'vi

Started by Fortuna, December 21, 2009, 07:53:55 PM

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TimeisIndustry

Kaltxì, kaltxì, ma tsmuke, I just created a video speaking your short story, hope all you enjoy this. When it is finished i will share and easy link for you all :). Ignore any mistakes i make or anything like that, its purely just for the heck of it and fun

TimeisIndustry


Kamean

Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.


Blue Elf

Well, IMO it wasn't bad! Problem is that text needs grammar corrections - it was created in Na'vi prehistory :) and our knowledge now is much better. If you are interested, I can prepare corrected version, when my time permits.
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


TimeisIndustry

Sure! I would gladly do make a revised Na'vi video if you mean me haha

Blue Elf

Ok, here's my corrected version:

Unil
Mì oeyä unil oe karmä ka atxkxe ne na'rìng. Na'rìng swotu lu, na'rìng a tìreyit nga'. Oe tìran mì tìfnu krr a tsole'a atanit aean. Fì'u lu sìltsana aungia aswok. Tsakrr oel tsole'a tsamsiyut. Poe sevin lu. Poltxe poe san Nari si! Aysawtutel Na'viti 'ayeko. Na'vi zene hivawnu Na'viti sìk. Mawkrra poe kolä neto ulte oe txen slu.
Slä oel ke omum ralit unilä oeyä...


Quote from: English
Dream
In my dream I went through the land to the forest. The forest was a sacred place, the forest which contains life.  I walked in silence when I saw a blue light. Good and sacred was this omen. Then I saw a warrior. She was beautiful. She said: "Be careful! The sky people will attack the Na'vi. The Na'vi must protect the Na'vi."  Then she went away and I awakened.
But I do not understand the meaning of my dream...
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


TimeisIndustry

hahaha i will have fun with this now it is trickier