Book 1 Editing Progress

Started by Nume fpi sänume, February 09, 2010, 03:15:18 AM

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Lightna


Nume fpi sänume

Currently done with spelling editing, and have the first four chapters finished as well. Had a nightmare of a time trying to merge a few of those posts together, so I'm spreading things out a bit more.

Coyote

Are you guys... cleaning up my hideous abuse of the Na'vi language?  :-[
In Libertarianism, there is no Government, so the Bosses are free to exploit the Workers.
In Communism, there is no Government, so the Workers are free to exploit the Bosses.
So in Libertarianism, man exploits man, but in Communism, its the other way around!


VIDEO LOG DAY 8:
Attempted to pee on Viperwolf to test reaction. Please see attached medical file.
WARNING: Attached medical file exceeds gigabyte limit. System failure.

Nume fpi sänume

I'm writing off the Avatar misuse of Na'vi as "learning curve", but im trying to clean up the rest.

Coyote

#24
OK, good... yeah, when the native speakers are talking they need to... not sound like idiots....  :-[. Thanks!


In Libertarianism, there is no Government, so the Bosses are free to exploit the Workers.
In Communism, there is no Government, so the Workers are free to exploit the Bosses.
So in Libertarianism, man exploits man, but in Communism, its the other way around!


VIDEO LOG DAY 8:
Attempted to pee on Viperwolf to test reaction. Please see attached medical file.
WARNING: Attached medical file exceeds gigabyte limit. System failure.