Strange Lands: A Pandoran RP OoC Thread

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ShadowMainZERO

Quote from: Txantslusam Skxawng on March 25, 2010, 02:20:27 PM
Making new intro with the problem that zelenal had and fred helped him, so they got out later, ill edit the spam topic intro post

Technically its the other way around but oh well.

On an unrelatted  note: What do you guys think of my characters back story that I need to finish? My problem with it is that due  to the fact that typing on the Wii is a pain I'm not showing enough, I'm telling.

Writer's Rule #1: Show, don't tell important things.


Come join the adventure in Strange Lands: A Pandoran RP!

The ultimate power is found in the incorruptible light hidden deep in the darkness. You must delve into the darkest part of your heart and find that light. Once you do, never let go of it. Remember: Your heart is the greatest weapon of all.

Txantslusam Skxawng

New intro is posted in my spam topic intro from Zelenal, which is in this topic, a few posts below, u will noticed were I start writing :P
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Txantslusam Skxawng

#62
Quote from: Zelenal on March 25, 2010, 02:28:49 PM
Quote from: Txantslusam Skxawng on March 25, 2010, 02:20:27 PM
Making new intro with the problem that zelenal had and fred helped him, so they got out later, ill edit the spam topic intro post

On an unrelatted  note: What do you guys think of my characters back story that I need to finish? My problem with it is that due  to the fact that typing on the Wii is a pain I'm not showing enough, I'm telling.

Writer's Rule #1: Show, don't tell important things.

My rule: i see what i will write, idk really care since its my first book.

About your backstory, i think it had some gaps. And whats with the guy with the gun? And why did he shoot, and not asking for money?
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ShadowMainZERO

Quote from: Txantslusam Skxawng on March 25, 2010, 02:42:47 PM
Quote from: Zelenal on March 25, 2010, 02:28:49 PM
Quote from: Txantslusam Skxawng on March 25, 2010, 02:20:27 PM
Making new intro with the problem that zelenal had and fred helped him, so they got out later, ill edit the spam topic intro post

On an unrelatted  note: What do you guys think of my characters back story that I need to finish? My problem with it is that due  to the fact that typing on the Wii is a pain I'm not showing enough, I'm telling.

Writer's Rule #1: Show, don't tell important things.

My rule: i see what i will write, idk really since its my first book.

About your backstory, i think it had some gaps. And whats with the guy with the gun? And why did he shoot, and not asking for money?

See? That's my point. I was in a rush and I told you instead of showing you. If I did it in a flashback like I planned then I wouldn't have that problem (he did ask for money and  Zelenal didn't have any).

EDIT: "Just keep heading south!" ... "Okay! We'll see you north!"?

Also, what had Zelenal pinned down?


Come join the adventure in Strange Lands: A Pandoran RP!

The ultimate power is found in the incorruptible light hidden deep in the darkness. You must delve into the darkest part of your heart and find that light. Once you do, never let go of it. Remember: Your heart is the greatest weapon of all.

Txantslusam Skxawng

Quote from: Zelenal on March 25, 2010, 03:00:27 PM
Quote from: Txantslusam Skxawng on March 25, 2010, 02:42:47 PM
Quote from: Zelenal on March 25, 2010, 02:28:49 PM
Quote from: Txantslusam Skxawng on March 25, 2010, 02:20:27 PM
Making new intro with the problem that zelenal had and fred helped him, so they got out later, ill edit the spam topic intro post

On an unrelatted  note: What do you guys think of my characters back story that I need to finish? My problem with it is that due  to the fact that typing on the Wii is a pain I'm not showing enough, I'm telling.

Writer's Rule #1: Show, don't tell important things.

My rule: i see what i will write, idk really since its my first book.

About your backstory, i think it had some gaps. And whats with the guy with the gun? And why did he shoot, and not asking for money?

See? That's my point. I was in a rush and I told you instead of showing you. If I did it in a flashback like I planned then I wouldn't have that problem (he did ask for money and  Zelenal didn't have any).
Ok!

But what about the intro, thats our main goal for the moment
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Inventor of the word NARF


Yeya Swizaw

I don't have enough of an imagination to do a backstory. I'm fine doing a RP and making things up with the flow. But making something like a backstory from scratch... No.
"Everybody loves me... except people who don't"
  "Oe yawne lu frapor... oe ke lu suteru mungwrr"

ShadowMainZERO

Quote from: Txantslusam Skxawng on March 25, 2010, 03:04:15 PM
Quote from: Zelenal on March 25, 2010, 03:00:27 PM
Quote from: Txantslusam Skxawng on March 25, 2010, 02:42:47 PM
Quote from: Zelenal on March 25, 2010, 02:28:49 PM
Quote from: Txantslusam Skxawng on March 25, 2010, 02:20:27 PM
Making new intro with the problem that zelenal had and fred helped him, so they got out later, ill edit the spam topic intro post

On an unrelatted  note: What do you guys think of my characters back story that I need to finish? My problem with it is that due  to the fact that typing on the Wii is a pain I'm not showing enough, I'm telling.

Writer's Rule #1: Show, don't tell important things.

My rule: i see what i will write, idk really since its my first book.

About your backstory, i think it had some gaps. And whats with the guy with the gun? And why did he shoot, and not asking for money?

See? That's my point. I was in a rush and I told you instead of showing you. If I did it in a flashback like I planned then I wouldn't have that problem (he did ask for money and  Zelenal didn't have any).
Ok!

But what about the intro, thats our main goal for the moment

Check my post. I edited it.

Yeya: I'm not saying you have to.

I edited the first post, btw.


Come join the adventure in Strange Lands: A Pandoran RP!

The ultimate power is found in the incorruptible light hidden deep in the darkness. You must delve into the darkest part of your heart and find that light. Once you do, never let go of it. Remember: Your heart is the greatest weapon of all.

Yeya Swizaw

Quote from: Zelenal on March 25, 2010, 03:07:19 PM
Yeya: I'm not saying you have to.

I know, it was just a mini-rant to myself really...
"Everybody loves me... except people who don't"
  "Oe yawne lu frapor... oe ke lu suteru mungwrr"

ShadowMainZERO

Quote from: Yeya Swizaw on March 25, 2010, 03:10:46 PM
Quote from: Zelenal on March 25, 2010, 03:07:19 PM
Yeya: I'm not saying you have to.

I know, it was just a mini-rant to myself really...

You know, you kind of remind me of someone else I knew. That person was a good RPer but couldn't make a backstory. I guess that is because the writting skills needed to be good at both are quite different.


Come join the adventure in Strange Lands: A Pandoran RP!

The ultimate power is found in the incorruptible light hidden deep in the darkness. You must delve into the darkest part of your heart and find that light. Once you do, never let go of it. Remember: Your heart is the greatest weapon of all.

Txantslusam Skxawng

#69
Quote from: Zelenal on March 25, 2010, 03:07:19 PM

Check my post. I edited it.

Yeya: I'm not saying you have to.

I edited the first post, btw.
I saw your edit of the first post, but when will the missions be in there?
WirelessTsaheylu=Bluetooth
Inventor of the word NARF


ShadowMainZERO

Quote from: Txantslusam Skxawng on March 25, 2010, 03:28:09 PM
Quote from: Zelenal on March 25, 2010, 03:07:19 PM

Check my post. I edited it.

Yeya: I'm not saying you have to.

I edited the first post, btw.
I saw your edit of the first post, but when will the missions be in there?


Irayo!

They will be there when we come up with missions for teams to do. Most will be first come, first served but some will be given to certant teams (plot missions).

Also, I updated my character. His back story is complete, for now.

200th post! Booyeah!


Come join the adventure in Strange Lands: A Pandoran RP!

The ultimate power is found in the incorruptible light hidden deep in the darkness. You must delve into the darkest part of your heart and find that light. Once you do, never let go of it. Remember: Your heart is the greatest weapon of all.

Txantslusam Skxawng

Quote from: Zelenal on March 25, 2010, 03:50:07 PM
Quote from: Txantslusam Skxawng on March 25, 2010, 03:28:09 PM
Quote from: Zelenal on March 25, 2010, 03:07:19 PM

Check my post. I edited it.

Yeya: I'm not saying you have to.

I edited the first post, btw.
I saw your edit of the first post, but when will the missions be in there?


Irayo!

They will be there when we come up with missions for teams to do. Most will be first come, first served but some will be given to certant teams (plot missions).

Also, I updated my character. His back story is complete, for now.

200th post! Booyeah!
Now you can do the Na'vi dance, instead of the Avatar dance, cuz now your 'eveng!
WirelessTsaheylu=Bluetooth
Inventor of the word NARF


ShadowMainZERO

Quote from: Txantslusam Skxawng on March 25, 2010, 03:51:39 PM
Quote from: Zelenal on March 25, 2010, 03:50:07 PM
Quote from: Txantslusam Skxawng on March 25, 2010, 03:28:09 PM
Quote from: Zelenal on March 25, 2010, 03:07:19 PM

Check my post. I edited it.

Yeya: I'm not saying you have to.

I edited the first post, btw.
I saw your edit of the first post, but when will the missions be in there?


Irayo!

They will be there when we come up with missions for teams to do. Most will be first come, first served but some will be given to certant teams (plot missions).

Also, I updated my character. His back story is complete, for now.

200th post! Booyeah!
Now you can do the Na'vi dance, instead of the Avatar dance, cuz now your 'eveng!

*dances till dawn*

On topic: I'm going to edit the first post with our first mission. Also, if anyone has ideas for a mission then please post it.


Come join the adventure in Strange Lands: A Pandoran RP!

The ultimate power is found in the incorruptible light hidden deep in the darkness. You must delve into the darkest part of your heart and find that light. Once you do, never let go of it. Remember: Your heart is the greatest weapon of all.

Niwantaw

we have lost contact with an outliging outpost
we don't know what has caused this event...
(hang on wait thats aliens.....)
Only mostly AWOL.

Txantslusam Skxawng

Maybe on of the teams saw a Na'vi and run away in the other direction, away from the other team??...
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Inventor of the word NARF


Yeya Swizaw

Anyone know what time we start tomorrow? 4PM (GMT) is probably best for me.
"Everybody loves me... except people who don't"
  "Oe yawne lu frapor... oe ke lu suteru mungwrr"

Niwantaw

at a pushh i could do 4pm GMT until 10pm GMT the next day
although i would get slightlly incoherent as time goes by
Only mostly AWOL.

ShadowMainZERO

I'm considering posting the topic now so its up but not really begin untill tomorrow. As for when well, 4:00 pm (1600 hours) EST works for  me. Although  any time will do. If I do post it today It will just be the links to this topic and the CC thread and the team list.

Okay, things we need to figure out:

How will the Na'vi handle us when they find us/we find them?

What will we do once we get to Hell's Gate?

Will we meet other Na'vi clans?

How will the plot go?

When/If we fight a True Final Boss then:
-Who/What will it be?
-Will teams get a seperat boss to fight before the True Final?
-What is the True Final doing/going to do and why?
-What are we going to do when/if we beat him?


Come join the adventure in Strange Lands: A Pandoran RP!

The ultimate power is found in the incorruptible light hidden deep in the darkness. You must delve into the darkest part of your heart and find that light. Once you do, never let go of it. Remember: Your heart is the greatest weapon of all.

Letxepa tirea

Kaltxi ma oeyä smukan!

I have a few questions as an experienced Rper.

Is this a post by post RP or a Joint post via IM rp?

I rather not do Jp because I'm in a weird timezone.

Also due to my laziness I'd rather not read through 5 pages of OOC so If ic ould have a summary of what important things have been talked about that would be great.

Oh and I don't mind being the villain/turncoat if needed. :)





Oe zola'u, Oe tsole'a, Oe skola'a

Txantslusam Skxawng

Quote from: Letxepa tirea on March 26, 2010, 04:12:39 AM
Also due to my laziness I'd rather not read through 5 pages of OOC so If ic ould have a summary of what important things have been talked about that would be great.
First we wanted to start on tuesday ( this week ) but when we all were online, i only could stay online for 10 minutes and the story needed to be fine tuned, so we decided to start it Friday. Then we talking about teams and clantag , we dont have names yet for the team, but if we decide that u can be a villian, u will probably have your own team, but dont hope for that, since their still is alot of stuff to do. On the first post of this OoC topic will be the missions, Zelenal will just edit the post. A few posts below should be the original intro from Zelenal he/she made and I made a little adjusment, u will noticed when i started writing.

Also, looks at Zelenal's post
Quote from: Zelenal on March 25, 2010, 06:37:50 PM
I'm considering posting the topic now so its up but not really begin untill tomorrow. As for when well, 4:00 pm (1600 hours) EST works for  me. Although  any time will do. If I do post it today It will just be the links to this topic and the CC thread and the team list.

Okay, things we need to figure out:

How will the Na'vi handle us when they find us/we find them?

What will we do once we get to Hell's Gate?

Will we meet other Na'vi clans?

How will the plot go?

When/If we fight a True Final Boss then:
-Who/What will it be?
-Will teams get a seperat boss to fight before the True Final?
-What is the True Final doing/going to do and why?
-What are we going to do when/if we beat him?
WirelessTsaheylu=Bluetooth
Inventor of the word NARF