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« Last Edit: June 18, 2012, 10:08:26 pm by Uniltìrantokx te Skxawng »
Previously Ithisa Kīranem, Uniltìrantokx te Skxawng.

Name from my Sakaš conlang, from Sakasul Ältäbisäl Acarankïp

"First name" is Ačankif, not Eltabiš! In Na'vi, Atsankip.

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Lora way, txantsan!

Aysäplltxevi:
Pxaya ayzìsìkrr, txana tìkawng, ... with "pxay" noun remains in singular
Lu keftxo nìtxan fwa oe nì’aw...
Na hì’ang a mì tompa apxa
tì’efu sì tìkame moeyä nìkì’ong ... hmm, I don't understand how "nìk'ong" fits here - can you provide English text?
stum ultxa sängi hu kxitx. ... ultxa is noun, you need "ultxa si" or "ultxarun"

Slä oel omeium futa fko ke kame fa menari, ke ki? fa memikyun... (intended meaning would be useful to propose correct words)
Nìrangal oel tsirvun tivok tsenget a ngal tok
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


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Way akosman! :)
Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.


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Lora way nìtxan.

One thing, since you are speaking of "oe sì nga", it would be better to use "oeng" than "moe"; that way you are including the person you're speaking with.
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
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Corrected.
Previously Ithisa Kīranem, Uniltìrantokx te Skxawng.

Name from my Sakaš conlang, from Sakasul Ältäbisäl Acarankïp

"First name" is Ačankif, not Eltabiš! In Na'vi, Atsankip.

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moeyä sirea
still needs to be fixed, but I'm glad we were able to add a little constructive criticism. :)
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
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Fixed.
Previously Ithisa Kīranem, Uniltìrantokx te Skxawng.

Name from my Sakaš conlang, from Sakasul Ältäbisäl Acarankïp

"First name" is Ačankif, not Eltabiš! In Na'vi, Atsankip.

 

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