Fandom > Pamrel nìNa'vi nì'aw

2011 Writing Contest Entries

(1/3) > >>

Alyara Arati:
Even if you didn't win, we'd all love to see what you wrote.  Or even if you can still find your entry from 2010 and want to post that here; if you meant your piece of writing for the contest, feel free to join this group thread.  Also, you can post your work separately as its own board topic, if you'd rather, and I'll make sure a link to it appears in this thread. :D

I'll start off with a poem that I toyed with but wound up not submitting, because I couldn't resist rhyming my own name.  It's hard to remain anonymous when you do that. ;)

lì'fya leNa'vi
lu pum tìyawnä oeru;
nìngay stum swok lam.
oe kaltxì si
awngey Nawma Yawnturu
ulte lor lu pam.
oel tìng na stxeli
pamrelit fa faylì'u
fte frapor tslivam
futa vitrari
oeyä piak nìwotx lu
pxel sanga sämyam.
'eykefu oeti
fìlì'fyal teya alu
tuté anitram;
ha 'ivong Na'vi
kop fpìlfya a tsun sleyku
awngat tsantslusam.
 
lì'fya lu kosman.
krr a pamrel si oe
nìNa'vi tsranten
fralì'u nìtxan;
txo sivar nìtxanwawe
'uo alor len.
lu atxanatan
ta lì'fyavi a'awve
ne lì'u asyen.
talun hu eylan
oey tsun oe pivlltxe
fa eltu atxen
sì nìteng txe'lan.
Na'vi lu oeru yawne
na tsyokx askien.
nivew piveng san
tseng alu Na'vi Nume
rutxe fivrrfen
 
fwa lu Alyara
sunu oer nìtxan talun
fpìl nìNa'vi po
sì stum Na'vina.
ulte fìfya oel pe'un
futa fa kato
kifkeyä 'i'a;
tengkrr oe tìng mikyun,
tireapängkxo.
ke lu oer am'a
fwa Nawma Yawnetu tsun
kivame nìno
oeti pxel Eywa.
tafral oe leyn nìmun
san mì oey re'o
lam swok fìlì'fya;
pumit frato oel rolun,
'eykong Na'vit ko!

Tirea Aean:
Wou this is really good! :D

Edit: I'm not sure if this thread seems like the place to put just any na'vi literature; I'd put contest entries, or stuff that was meant to be entered but was either too late or the author had doubt. The rest of all na'vi literature maybe should be put in its own thread inside this board outside this thread, kefyak? Just my thought.what do you say ma Alyara?

Alyara Arati:

--- Quote from: Tirea Aean on January 01, 2012, 12:58:40 am ---Wou this is really good! :D

Edit: I'm not sure if this thread seems like the place to put just any na'vi literature; I'd put contest entries, or stuff that was meant to be entered but was either too late or the author had doubt. The rest of all na'vi literature maybe should be put in its own thread inside this board outside this thread, kefyak? Just my thought.what do you say ma Alyara?

--- End quote ---

Yes, I completely agree with you on this, and I hope I made that more clear with my last edit.  
Also, irayo nìtxan ma Tirea!  I'm always glad when someone enjoys my writing. :D :-* :D

Tirea Aean:
Cool. I would post a piece here but nìawnomum I was judging ha tafral oe didn't submit anything to the contest. I did not participate in 2010. Maybe I will submit something in 2012 if I am not judging ;-)

Txur’Itan:
http://forum.learnnavi.org/pamrel-ninavi-niaw/kxitxil-mi-oeya-txelan-langu/

Navigation

[0] Message Index

[#] Next page

Go to full version