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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #220 on: September 29, 2011, 01:59:00 pm »
Pawlur:

Karyu Pawl anawm
fìlì'fyari akosman
ngar irayo si
« Last Edit: October 01, 2011, 02:24:31 am by Tswusayona Tsamsiyu »
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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #221 on: September 29, 2011, 02:29:55 pm »
Pawlur:

ma Karyu Pawl
fìlì'fyari akosman
ngar irayo si
Lìfyari sì haykuri oe irayo seiyi nìteng. :D
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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #222 on: September 30, 2011, 01:13:31 am »
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Pol emza'u tsa'ut.
Really, "pol" is correct as emza'u is transitive. Patientive is used correctly, so agentative is needed too.
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Piak sivi tsun
oe ronsemur oey, nìtam
fte kìyevame.
I don't think "kìyevame" is good here, as it means "good bye". As subjunctive is needed, you can add missing syllable by mood infix: fte kivameie

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ma Karyu Pawl
I'm afraid, that one syllable is missing here :)
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #223 on: September 30, 2011, 09:09:31 am »
I don't think "kìyevame" is good here, as it means "good bye".

It's used as "goodbye", but actually it means "may See (again) in the future."
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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #224 on: October 01, 2011, 02:24:01 am »
I don't think "kìyevame" is good here, as it means "good bye".

It's used as "goodbye", but actually it means "may See (again) in the future."
was going to say that. :)

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ma Karyu Pawl
I'm afraid, that one syllable is missing here :)
oh right. the English version confused me. wiya. lolatem ne san Karyu Pawl anawm.
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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #225 on: October 01, 2011, 11:46:06 pm »
I don't think "kìyevame" is good here, as it means "good bye".

It's used as "goodbye", but actually it means "may See (again) in the future."
was going to say that. :)

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ma Karyu Pawl
I'm afraid, that one syllable is missing here :)
oh right. the English version confused me. wiya. lolatem ne san Karyu Pawl anawm.

But, without "ma", can you still call him "nga"?  maybe:

Karyur Pawl anawm
fìlì'fyari akosman
irayo seri
???
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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #226 on: October 02, 2011, 10:20:37 am »
Sunu oer. :)
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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #227 on: October 02, 2011, 03:21:13 pm »
I don't think "kìyevame" is good here, as it means "good bye".

It's used as "goodbye", but actually it means "may See (again) in the future."
was going to say that. :)

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ma Karyu Pawl
I'm afraid, that one syllable is missing here :)
oh right. the English version confused me. wiya. lolatem ne san Karyu Pawl anawm.

But, without "ma", can you still call him "nga"?  maybe:

Karyur Pawl anawm
fìlì'fyari akosman
irayo seri
???
probably better. :)
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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #228 on: October 07, 2011, 12:39:38 pm »
Hì'angìl stä'nì
Ayhì'angit. Teräftxu,
fte stivä'nì fot.


Fayìva lu sìn
ayrìk, pxel atan za'u.
Frakifkey trrä.


Fìhì'ang, a hu
tsyal atsìng, tswayon nìksman
'oraio nang!



Taw alu stxong, set
txanatan lu. Ayfìwopx
rerikx pxìm nìwin.

Utralìl wrrpa
nìn ayoet. Lumpe nga
ke tsun kivame?

'Awsiteng awnga
hameyn lok 'ora. Poan
'almefu nitram.

Kä! Kifkey syeraw,
tìrey rikx nìtxur. Kivä!
Ftivia tsa'ut.

Ayuk tul, talun
atan terul, fo rerikx
fìfya nìfrakrrr.
« Last Edit: October 20, 2011, 07:42:40 am by Tan Jala »
kawkrr ke ftang pivlltxe :P

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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #229 on: October 07, 2011, 01:48:00 pm »
Wou, kosman! Pefya nga tsun pamrel sivi ayhaykur nìftue fìtxan??

Fpìl oel futa keyeyo fko tsun rivun:
Fayìva lu sìn ayrìk -> here should be used tok:
Pxel atan za'u
fayìval tok ayrìkit.
Frakifkey trrä.


Fìhì'ang, a hu tsyal atsìng -> construction lu+dative would be more correct
Lu for tsìnga tsyal
a hì'ang tswayon io

'ora nìksman, nang!
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #230 on: October 07, 2011, 02:01:12 pm »
Wou - txantsan! :)

Ulte pxerel leiu lor nìtxan.
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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #231 on: October 08, 2011, 03:25:46 am »
txantsana tìkangkem ma tsmuk. vivar...
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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #232 on: October 08, 2011, 07:57:47 am »
Lu ngaru stxeli fte ngivop pamreltseo ma tsmuke. :)  Sunu oeru pxerel kop. :D
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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #233 on: October 09, 2011, 08:59:36 am »
When the mirror speaks, the reflection lies.

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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #234 on: October 11, 2011, 10:49:28 am »
Mì sìfnu nìk'ong
Rìk atun zerup.
Wewa krr zola'u...

Payìvari tìrey
Lu yol nìtxan -
Nì'aw tìzup ne kllte...

Aysyulangìl alor
Nìn tawit ulte näk
Tompati asom.
« Last Edit: October 11, 2011, 03:03:33 pm by Kamean »
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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #235 on: October 11, 2011, 02:14:01 pm »
Wou, ma Kamean, nì'i'a oe tsun ivinan pamrelot a ngal ngolop!
Pxeya kxeyeyit oel tse'a:
- Payìvayä tìrey lu yola nìftxan: nìftxan is used for comparison (Oe lu nìftxan sìltsan na nga), so nìtxan is word you need
- Nìn tawìit ulte näk - typo, patientive case ending is -it
- you not always follow correct number of syllables, so your work is not real haiku -  you need 5-7-5 syllables

But nevermind, still nice poems, sunu oeru.
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #236 on: October 11, 2011, 02:58:26 pm »
Irayo nìtxan ma Blue Elf! :)

Yes, I'm know about syllables, but I'm not a great master of hayku.
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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #237 on: October 11, 2011, 03:03:13 pm »
Neither I am, it really isn't easy to write good haiku :)
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #238 on: October 11, 2011, 03:18:12 pm »
Complicated simplicity. :)
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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #239 on: October 11, 2011, 05:44:30 pm »
Mì sìfnu nìk'ong
Rìk atun zerup.
Wewa krr zola'u...

Payìvari tìrey
Lu yol nìtxan -
Nì'aw tìzup ne kllte...

Aysyulangìl alor
Nìn tawit ulte näk
Tompati asom.

Tewti ma Kamean! :D  Furia ngal ngolop "pxefoem" alor fìtxan, oeru teya si. :D  Rutxe vivar! :D
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

 

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