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Tswusayona Tsamsiyu

#220
September 29, 2011, 01:59:00 PM Last Edit: October 01, 2011, 02:24:31 AM by Tswusayona Tsamsiyu
Pawlur:

Karyu Pawl anawm
fìlì'fyari akosman
ngar irayo si
Nivume Na'vit, fpivìl nìNa'vi, kivame na Na'vi.....
oer fko syaw tswusayona tsamsiyu

Kamean

#221
September 29, 2011, 02:29:55 PM
Quote from: Tswusayona Tsamsiyu on September 29, 2011, 01:59:00 PM
Pawlur:

ma Karyu Pawl
fìlì'fyari akosman
ngar irayo si
Lìfyari sì haykuri oe irayo seiyi nìteng. :D
Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.

Blue Elf

#222
September 30, 2011, 01:13:31 AM
QuotePol emza'u tsa'ut.
Really, "pol" is correct as emza'u is transitive. Patientive is used correctly, so agentative is needed too.
QuotePiak sivi tsun
oe ronsemur oey, nìtam
fte kìyevame.
I don't think "kìyevame" is good here, as it means "good bye". As subjunctive is needed, you can add missing syllable by mood infix: fte kivameie

Quotema Karyu Pawl
I'm afraid, that one syllable is missing here :)
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)

Sireayä mokri

#223
September 30, 2011, 09:09:31 AM
Quote from: Blue Elf on September 30, 2011, 01:13:31 AM
I don't think "kìyevame" is good here, as it means "good bye".

It's used as "goodbye", but actually it means "may See (again) in the future."
When the mirror speaks, the reflection lies.

Tswusayona Tsamsiyu

#224
October 01, 2011, 02:24:01 AM
Quote from: Sireayä mokri on September 30, 2011, 09:09:31 AM
Quote from: Blue Elf on September 30, 2011, 01:13:31 AM
I don't think "kìyevame" is good here, as it means "good bye".

It's used as "goodbye", but actually it means "may See (again) in the future."
was going to say that. :)

Quote from: Blue Elf on September 30, 2011, 01:13:31 AM
Quotema Karyu Pawl
I'm afraid, that one syllable is missing here :)
oh right. the English version confused me. wiya. lolatem ne san Karyu Pawl anawm.
Nivume Na'vit, fpivìl nìNa'vi, kivame na Na'vi.....
oer fko syaw tswusayona tsamsiyu

Alyara Arati

#225
October 01, 2011, 11:46:06 PM
Quote from: Tswusayona Tsamsiyu on October 01, 2011, 02:24:01 AM
Quote from: Sireayä mokri on September 30, 2011, 09:09:31 AM
Quote from: Blue Elf on September 30, 2011, 01:13:31 AM
I don't think "kìyevame" is good here, as it means "good bye".

It's used as "goodbye", but actually it means "may See (again) in the future."
was going to say that. :)

Quote from: Blue Elf on September 30, 2011, 01:13:31 AM
Quotema Karyu Pawl
I'm afraid, that one syllable is missing here :)
oh right. the English version confused me. wiya. lolatem ne san Karyu Pawl anawm.

But, without "ma", can you still call him "nga"?  maybe:

Karyur Pawl anawm
fìlì'fyari akosman
irayo seri
???
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Kamean

#226
October 02, 2011, 10:20:37 AM
Sunu oer. :)
Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.

Tswusayona Tsamsiyu

#227
October 02, 2011, 03:21:13 PM
Quote from: Alyara Arati on October 01, 2011, 11:46:06 PM
Quote from: Tswusayona Tsamsiyu on October 01, 2011, 02:24:01 AM
Quote from: Sireayä mokri on September 30, 2011, 09:09:31 AM
Quote from: Blue Elf on September 30, 2011, 01:13:31 AM
I don't think "kìyevame" is good here, as it means "good bye".

It's used as "goodbye", but actually it means "may See (again) in the future."
was going to say that. :)

Quote from: Blue Elf on September 30, 2011, 01:13:31 AM
Quotema Karyu Pawl
I'm afraid, that one syllable is missing here :)
oh right. the English version confused me. wiya. lolatem ne san Karyu Pawl anawm.

But, without "ma", can you still call him "nga"?  maybe:

Karyur Pawl anawm
fìlì'fyari akosman
irayo seri
???
probably better. :)
Nivume Na'vit, fpivìl nìNa'vi, kivame na Na'vi.....
oer fko syaw tswusayona tsamsiyu

Tan Jala

#228
October 07, 2011, 12:39:38 PM Last Edit: October 20, 2011, 07:42:40 AM by Tan Jala
Hì'angìl stä'nì
Ayhì'angit. Teräftxu,
fte stivä'nì fot.
Spoiler

Fayìva lu sìn
ayrìk, pxel atan za'u.
Frakifkey trrä.
Spoiler

Fìhì'ang, a hu
tsyal atsìng, tswayon nìksman
'oraio nang!
Spoiler


Taw alu stxong, set
txanatan lu. Ayfìwopx
rerikx pxìm nìwin.

Utralìl wrrpa
nìn ayoet. Lumpe nga
ke tsun kivame?

'Awsiteng awnga
hameyn lok 'ora. Poan
'almefu nitram.

Kä! Kifkey syeraw,
tìrey rikx nìtxur. Kivä!
Ftivia tsa'ut.

Ayuk tul, talun
atan terul, fo rerikx
fìfya nìfrakrrr.

Blue Elf

#229
October 07, 2011, 01:48:00 PM
Wou, kosman! Pefya nga tsun pamrel sivi ayhaykur nìftue fìtxan??

Fpìl oel futa keyeyo fko tsun rivun:
Fayìva lu sìn ayrìk -> here should be used tok:
Pxel atan za'u
fayìval tok ayrìkit.
Frakifkey trrä.

Fìhì'ang, a hu tsyal atsìng -> construction lu+dative would be more correct
Lu for tsìnga tsyal
a hì'ang tswayon io
'ora nìksman, nang!
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)

Kamean

#230
October 07, 2011, 02:01:12 PM
Wou - txantsan! :)

Ulte pxerel leiu lor nìtxan.
Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.

Tswusayona Tsamsiyu

#231
October 08, 2011, 03:25:46 AM
txantsana tìkangkem ma tsmuk. vivar...
Nivume Na'vit, fpivìl nìNa'vi, kivame na Na'vi.....
oer fko syaw tswusayona tsamsiyu

Alyara Arati

#232
October 08, 2011, 07:57:47 AM
Lu ngaru stxeli fte ngivop pamreltseo ma tsmuke. :)  Sunu oeru pxerel kop. :D
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Sireayä mokri

#233
October 09, 2011, 08:59:36 AM
When the mirror speaks, the reflection lies.

Kamean

#234
October 11, 2011, 10:49:28 AM Last Edit: October 11, 2011, 03:03:33 PM by Kamean
Mì sìfnu nìk'ong
Rìk atun zerup.
Wewa krr zola'u...

Payìvari tìrey
Lu yol nìtxan -
Nì'aw tìzup ne kllte...

Aysyulangìl alor
Nìn tawit ulte näk
Tompati asom.
Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.

Blue Elf

#235
October 11, 2011, 02:14:01 PM
Wou, ma Kamean, nì'i'a oe tsun ivinan pamrelot a ngal ngolop!
Pxeya kxeyeyit oel tse'a:
- Payìvayä tìrey lu yola nìftxan: nìftxan is used for comparison (Oe lu nìftxan sìltsan na nga), so nìtxan is word you need
- Nìn tawìit ulte näk - typo, patientive case ending is -it
- you not always follow correct number of syllables, so your work is not real haiku -  you need 5-7-5 syllables

But nevermind, still nice poems, sunu oeru.
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)

Kamean

#236
October 11, 2011, 02:58:26 PM
Irayo nìtxan ma Blue Elf! :)

Yes, I'm know about syllables, but I'm not a great master of hayku.
Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.

Blue Elf

#237
October 11, 2011, 03:03:13 PM
Neither I am, it really isn't easy to write good haiku :)
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)

Kamean

#238
October 11, 2011, 03:18:12 PM
Complicated simplicity. :)
Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.

Alyara Arati

#239
October 11, 2011, 05:44:30 PM
Quote from: Kamean on October 11, 2011, 10:49:28 AM
Mì sìfnu nìk'ong
Rìk atun zerup.
Wewa krr zola'u...

Payìvari tìrey
Lu yol nìtxan -
Nì'aw tìzup ne kllte...

Aysyulangìl alor
Nìn tawit ulte näk
Tompati asom.

Tewti ma Kamean! :D  Furia ngal ngolop "pxefoem" alor fìtxan, oeru teya si. :D  Rutxe vivar! :D
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci
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