Ayhayku

Blue Elf · February 17, 2012, 02:22:28 PM

Quote from: Uniltìrantokx te Skxawng on February 17, 2012, 10:11:32 AM
Awngeyä sìrey
ultxa sìsyi hu Eywa
ayoeng 'ieia.

First try at a proper haiku

Nice!
To be absolutely proper, <ei> in last line should be omitted, but take it as just big nitpick

Alyara Arati · February 17, 2012, 03:49:04 PM

Quote from: Alyara Arati on February 17, 2012, 01:37:20 AM
'efu oe ngeyn
tìsraw si oeyä mesyal
aketsuktse'a

'efu sang pxiset
ayhawtsyìp yawne lu oer
na palukantsyìp

Kamean · February 17, 2012, 04:15:23 PM

Nice!

Irtaviš Ačankif · February 17, 2012, 08:02:46 PM

I dislike the fact that English "haikus" don't even make an attempt at following a 5-7-5 pattern...

'Oma Tirea · February 18, 2012, 07:44:01 AM

Probably because they follow syllables and not morae.

Anyways, while I'm posting here...

Krr a ultxa si
oehu, "'Oma tirea"
oeru rä'ä syaw!

Irtaviš Ačankif · February 18, 2012, 08:27:51 AM

No. They are totally random. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku_in_English See for yourself

Blue Elf · February 18, 2012, 02:49:41 PM

Tutan angawnop
fa herwì. Srake ayngal
pot tse'a? Fìpol

eyk zìsìkrrit
herwìyä sì tskxepayä
tì'i'a'vay krrä.

One syllable over, hìtxoa

Kamean · February 18, 2012, 02:52:31 PM

Kosman

Txur’Itan · February 21, 2012, 04:49:57 PM

Quote from: Uniltìrantokx te Skxawng on February 18, 2012, 08:27:51 AM
No. They are totally random. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku_in_English See for yourself

I don't Haiku here
Because I don't Haiku here
I don't Haiku here

富士の風や扇にのせて江戸土産
ふじのかぜやおゝぎにのせてえどみやげ
fuji no kaze ya ōgi ni nosete Edo miyage

Alyara Arati · February 21, 2012, 06:15:59 PM

Quote from: Txur'Itan on February 21, 2012, 04:49:57 PM
Quote from: Uniltìrantokx te Skxawng on February 18, 2012, 08:27:51 AM
No. They are totally random. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku_in_English See for yourself

I don't Haiku here
Because I don't Haiku here
I don't Haiku here

富士の風や扇にのせて江戸土産
ふじのかぜやおゝぎにのせてえどみやげ
fuji no kaze ya ōgi ni nosete Edo miyage

txo ke nivew nga
ke zene pamrel sivi
fìtsenge, kefyak?

Alyara Arati · September 08, 2012, 09:01:54 PM

tìran txon'ongmì
kxamlä zeswa apaynga'
klltel pom venut

Irtaviš Ačankif · September 08, 2012, 11:03:05 PM

kerängä set
ke leru kaw'it
fra'u lu mek

Blue Elf · September 09, 2012, 01:17:45 PM

Ahhhh, new life here!

numtseng sngä'i set
zene nivume nìmun
fte tslivam kifkeyt

Tirea Aean · September 26, 2012, 01:03:14 PM

ayopin alor
ayrìk zup ayutralta
zìsìkrr aswey

Kamean · September 26, 2012, 01:10:05 PM

Lor nìtxan!

Blue Elf · October 19, 2012, 02:00:31 PM

Writers - nari si! Our great teacher Paul needs some haikus - see and post in this thread.
Do not linger, time is short (until Monday)

And one autumn hayku:

Rìkeampin slu
ne kllvawmpin, zìsìkrr
alor zera'u

Kamean · October 19, 2012, 02:06:42 PM

Irayo

Blue Elf · October 28, 2012, 10:39:55 AM

Another "double" haiku, inspired by autumn:

Zerup fayìva
Taw tsngawvìk, talun hintrr
tìsomä 'i'a

Taw tsngawvìk, hufwe
fwefwi, ayrìk lìng mì ya
Kifkey halmahaw

Alyara Arati · October 29, 2012, 03:02:20 AM

Txantsan. I like halmahaw there. I probably would have used tserurokx, and I don't know if that would have been as poetic.

Blue Elf · October 29, 2012, 05:21:05 AM

Quote from: Alyara Arati on October 29, 2012, 03:02:20 AM
Txantsan. I like halmahaw there. I probably would have used tserurokx, and I don't know if that would have been as poetic.

Good solution too - I just didn't find it. And IMHO it is better. Congratulation