Ayhayku

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Tìtstewan

Quote from: Ithisa Kîranem on March 09, 2013, 12:44:57 PM
Random offshoot, but shouldn't this thread be renamed "Ayhaiku" rather than "Ayhayku"? In Japanese, "haiku" is three syllables: /ha.i.ku/.
I think the same.


Mip :)

Tìfnu mì fìtxon.
Sanhì lrrtok si ta'em.
Ayna'vi hahaw.

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Blue Elf

Quote from: Tìtstewan on March 09, 2013, 04:58:38 PM
Tìfnu mì fìtxon.
Sanhì lrrtok si ta'em.
Ayna'vi hahaw.

Not bad :) Welcome here!
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Tìtstewan

Quote from: Blue Elf on March 09, 2013, 05:25:47 PM
Not bad :) Welcome here!
Irayo ma Blue Elf!

:D

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Alyara Arati

Quote from: Tìtstewan on March 09, 2013, 04:58:38 PM
Quote from: Ithisa Kîranem on March 09, 2013, 12:44:57 PM
Random offshoot, but shouldn't this thread be renamed "Ayhaiku" rather than "Ayhayku"? In Japanese, "haiku" is three syllables: /ha.i.ku/.
I think the same.


Mip :)

Tìfnu mì fìtxon.
Sanhì lrrtok si ta'em.
Ayna'vi hahaw.


Done, though all of the Subjects on Responses still say Re: Ayhayku.  Nothing's perfect
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Blue Elf

Quote from: Alyara Arati on March 13, 2013, 01:40:55 AM
Done, though all of the Subjects on Responses still say Re: Ayhayku.  Nothing's perfect
That's because when responding to post, subject is taken from the original message. When replying to thread, subject is taken from thread name. There's no solution...
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Tìtstewan

I seached on Na'viteri. Karyu Pawl use also Hayku.
...take a look...
Now I'm confused. :-X :-\

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Irtaviš Ačankif

Maybe we should ask K. Pawl.
Previously Ithisa Kīranem, Uniltìrantokx te Skxawng.

Name from my Sakaš conlang, from Sakasul Ältäbisäl Acarankïp

"First name" is Ačankif, not Eltabiš! In Na'vi, Atsankip.

Alyara Arati

Quote from: Tìtstewan on March 13, 2013, 09:29:26 AM
I seached on Na'viteri. Karyu Pawl use also Hayku.
...take a look...
Now I'm confused. :-X :-\

Okay, with that precedent, I'm going to change it back to hayku.  I wish I had one to contribute at the moment.
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Ezy Ryder

'awvea tì'eyng.
Kxawm, ke tuteta angay;
Slä ngay fpi oe.

Irtaviš Ačankif

lora yawnetu / ke tsun sivi ultxa mi / oet leykarmängim
Previously Ithisa Kīranem, Uniltìrantokx te Skxawng.

Name from my Sakaš conlang, from Sakasul Ältäbisäl Acarankïp

"First name" is Ačankif, not Eltabiš! In Na'vi, Atsankip.

Ezy Ryder

#370
Lolatem oe.
Sweylu fwa tsakem soli.
Slä, srake nimvew?

Edit: Corrected.

Le'eylan

Quote from: Ezy Ryder on May 28, 2013, 01:57:54 PM
Lolatem oe
Sweylu tsaw tsakem soli.
Slä, srake nimvew?

Lor!  :)
Krro krro pamrel seri fìtsengmì, alu oey pìlok leNa'vi
Sometimes writing here, on my Na'vi blog
=^● ⋏ ●^=

Tirea Aean

Quote from: Le'eylan on May 28, 2013, 02:10:06 PM
Quote from: Ezy Ryder on May 28, 2013, 01:57:54 PM
Lolatem oe
Sweylu tsaw tsakem soli.
Slä, srake nimvew?

Lor!  :)

Srane! Eltur tìtxen si. :) I'd have said fwa instead of tsaw to make it more grammatical, because you have two verbs and a noun there in one clause. But I don't wanna cramp any artistic style. :3

Kamean

Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.


Blue Elf

Quote from: Tirea Aean on May 28, 2013, 02:39:44 PM
Quote from: Le'eylan on May 28, 2013, 02:10:06 PM
Quote from: Ezy Ryder on May 28, 2013, 01:57:54 PM
Lolatem oe
Sweylu tsaw tsakem soli.
Slä, srake nimvew?

Lor!  :)

Srane! Eltur tìtxen si. :) I'd have said fwa instead of tsaw to make it more grammatical, because you have two verbs and a noun there in one clause. But I don't wanna cramp any artistic style. :3
Wanted say the same words - nice work.
Change tsaw to tsawa is enough, but it breaks syllable count. More about sweylu usage can be found at Naviteri.
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Tìtstewan

Hayku amip. :D

Sanga krrìl set
Tok narìngit fa tìrey.
Rey'eng fra'u lu.

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Blue Elf

"End of week" haiku:

Mrrtrr 'oli'a.
Nì'i'a! Tsun tsivurokx
fko vay trr'awve.
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Alyara Arati

#377
txankrr srefarmey
pxaya ton le'aw ftolem
pesenget tok ngal?

oel mi sreferey
krrit a tsun ivomum
keyt ngey, ma syay oey...


kìfkey layatem
tsawl slayu oemìkam
tì'ong fra'uä

Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Tìtstewan

#378
I've written a little hayku-poem :)

Faysrrtxon za'u.
Oeyä ayunil tok mi
Tawsyuratanmì.

Txantsana sanhì!
Frapo tanhì na 'eveng
Mì Eywa'eveng.

Fìwopxtsyìp mì ton
A sunu oeru nìtxan
talun lu eylan.

Sänrr ayewllä...
Tsasänrr, lam na sanhì,
Lora atanìlä.

Tengkrr txana txon,
Tirea tawmì li tswayon,
Ngima snatanhì.

Eywa'evengmì,
Eywa vitrahu oeyä,
Atanfa trrä.

Ätxäle si tsnì
Faysrrtxon ke 'ivi'a
A oer prrte' lu.

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Ezy Ryder

#379
Mipa lì'fyay'ä tìftiayä kesrefawneya tìngay.

Oe lolatem,
Slä lam fwa ki tsalì'fya;
Set tsaru lu ral.

Sìlpey oe tsnì ye'rìn fìlì'fyar kop :)

Edit: Pumur->tsaru.