Ayhayku

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Tirea Aean

Txantsan leiu fwa tse'a tìreyt nìmun fìtseng :D Haykuri irayo. Kxawm oel nìteng pumit ngivop. :)

Hufwa nìkeftxo oel ke tslam nìwotx letsima ralit fìpumä ngeyä.

Tìtstewan

Quote from: Tirea Aean on June 26, 2014, 08:49:06 PM
Txantsan leiu fwa tse'a tìreyt nìmun fìtseng :D Haykuri irayo. Kxawm oel nìteng pumit ngivop. :)

Hufwa nìkeftxo oel ke tslam nìwotx letsima ralit fìpumä ngeyä.
Fì'u.



Hayhu amip: :)

Pxaya payoang,
txampaymì atxukx slele,
apxa fu hì'i.

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Ezy Ryder

Ma Tirea Aean, sran, 'awa haykuìlä nì'it fwa ralpeng lu ngäzìk. Oeyä ral lu fwa, nìngay, tìftial leykatem oet. Lì'fya ì'awn teng. Hufwa, oe ke 'efu nìketeng. Ki, lam fwa tsalì'fyar lu sälatem. Set, lu pumur mipa ral (a tslamtsuk oer). 'a'awa zìsìtsre, txo pukit kxiveltek oel, tsakrr lu pumur pxaya pam/ralrelvi alor, slä (oer tslamtsuka) ral-luke. Set fìtìfkeytok lolatem. Mi ke tslam nìyo', slä tìusinanur tìprrte' tsun livu.

Tirea Aean

Tolel - Tìoeyktìngìri irayo si ngar oe. Set oel tslam tsat.

Lì'u alu pumur sweylu txo livu lì'u alu tsaru. Taluna pum nì'Ìnglìsì ke slu it.

Eltur tìtxen si a fpìlfya nìngay! :D An interesting way to look at language learning indeed. :)

Ezy Ryder

Tìralpengìri irayo. Set tìketengit kame. Tìngayri, lì'ut pxel tsar oel tswolänga' :) Pxiswaway sleykìsyu eyawr.

Alyara Arati

Seysonìltsan, ma smuktu!  Ayhaiku alor. :D
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

阿波

#386
Ngeyä flawmit oel
'erampeiyi nìflrr,
Ta'lengit zerìm.

Swaw 'i'ängia,
Tätxaw nekifkey oeyä,
A tsat ngal ke tok.

Slä zir ahewne
'erì'eiawn nìyol,
Na ke new txilvìng.

Blue Elf

sängop alor, sunu oer :)
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


阿波


Alyara Arati

Very beautiful and delicate, like a feather falling!  I adore it!

Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

阿波

Yes, I meant txilvìng. Must have been a typo. I corrected it now, thanks for pointing it out!

Toliman

I already wrote any poems nìNa'vi but I never tried write hayku nìNa'vi...
So there is one attempt:

Saw atxewluke
Sanhì nrr nìtxanatan
Nì'awtu alìm

Tirea Aean

sunu oeru :D

fìkìng rey nìmun a fì'u lu txantsan nang!


Toliman

Irayo :)

Nìngay, fìkìng lamu tìfnunga' nìhawng.

Toliman

Pxehayku teri txon'ong ;D :)

Tsawke txon'ongä
Atan tswayon ne tawtxew
A lu txewluke

Tora atanvi
Ta tsawke - keng aysoruk
Tswayon ftu fìtseng

Sìrol yayoyä
Fìwopx atun pxel reypay
Txon'ongä tanhì

Tirea Aean

Kosman! Set, new oe fìkem sivi nìteng :0

Toliman

Irayo nìtxan :D

Quote from: Tirea Aean on August 23, 2018, 03:02:54 PM
Kosman! Set, new oe fìkem sivi nìteng :0
:)

Toliman

I composed next three:
(seems that I found inspiration XD)


Kxamlä ayutral
Atanvi tsawkeyä nrr
Uk hum neto

Tsawke txonä nrr,
Nìk'ong sop io ram apxa
Io ram fìwopxä

Syayvi lam asim
Nìfkeytongay lu alìm
Alìm pxel aysaw

Toliman

Nights spent under stars are such inspirational... ;D


Pìwopx a lu hek
Mì saw txonä a lu vawm
Fya'o okupä

Soma txon avawm
Pxaya atantsyìp io oe
Pxaya txephì'ang

Nì'awtu oel tok
Txayoti äo txonä taw
Hu pxaya sanhì

Vawmataw

#399
Nice work :)

QuotePìwopx a lu hek
hek is a stative verb, so the lu is superfluous. That leaves a spare syllable.
I tend to suggest Pìwopx lìng nìhek, but it's your haiku not mine. ;D

QuoteMì saw txonä a lu vawm
I don't know if the stacking of a genetive word and a relative clause after the noun is allowed. Therefore, I suggest "Mì vawm lu a taw txonä", and you get a weak rhyme. :) Or mì lu vawmataw txonä :P

Quote from: Toliman on August 25, 2018, 06:51:37 PM
Soma txon avawm
Pxaya atantsyìp io oe
Pxaya txephì'ang
I like your coining the word firefly in Na'vi. Maybe you should open a thread on the LEP board.

Nìvingkap...

Quote from:  Vawmataw vawmataw seri....Nì'awtu txayot
Äo txonä taw tok oel
Sì pxaya sanhìl

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