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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #380 on: June 26, 2014, 08:49:06 pm »
Txantsan leiu fwa tse'a tìreyt nìmun fìtseng :D Haykuri irayo. Kxawm oel nìteng pumit ngivop. :)

Hufwa nìkeftxo oel ke tslam nìwotx letsima ralit fìpumä ngeyä.

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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #381 on: June 27, 2014, 02:36:34 am »
Txantsan leiu fwa tse'a tìreyt nìmun fìtseng :D Haykuri irayo. Kxawm oel nìteng pumit ngivop. :)

Hufwa nìkeftxo oel ke tslam nìwotx letsima ralit fìpumä ngeyä.
Fì'u.


Hayhu amip: :)

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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #382 on: June 27, 2014, 05:15:29 am »
Ma Tirea Aean, sran, 'awa haykuìlä nì'it fwa ralpeng lu ngäzìk. Oeyä ral lu fwa, nìngay, tìftial leykatem oet. Lì'fya ì'awn teng. Hufwa, oe ke 'efu nìketeng. Ki, lam fwa tsalì'fyar lu sälatem. Set, lu pumur mipa ral (a tslamtsuk oer). 'a'awa zìsìtsre, txo pukit kxiveltek oel, tsakrr lu pumur pxaya pam/ralrelvi alor, slä (oer tslamtsuka) ral-luke. Set fìtìfkeytok lolatem. Mi ke tslam nìyo', slä tìusinanur tìprrte' tsun livu.

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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #383 on: June 27, 2014, 07:57:20 am »
Tolel - Tìoeyktìngìri irayo si ngar oe. Set oel tslam tsat.

Lì'u alu pumur sweylu txo livu lì'u alu tsaru. Taluna pum nì'Ìnglìsì ke slu it.

Eltur tìtxen si a fpìlfya nìngay! :D An interesting way to look at language learning indeed. :)

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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #384 on: June 27, 2014, 09:31:57 am »
Tìralpengìri irayo. Set tìketengit kame. Tìngayri, lì'ut pxel tsar oel tswolänga' :) Pxiswaway sleykìsyu eyawr.

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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #385 on: July 11, 2014, 04:09:58 pm »
Seysonìltsan, ma smuktu!  Ayhaiku alor. :D
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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #386 on: January 05, 2015, 04:38:01 pm »
Ngeyä flawmit oel
'erampeiyi nìflrr,
Ta'lengit zerìm.

Swaw 'i'ängia,
Tätxaw nekifkey oeyä,
A tsat ngal ke tok.

Slä zir ahewne
'erì'eiawn nìyol,
Na ke new txilvìng.
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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #387 on: January 06, 2015, 11:44:57 am »
sängop alor, sunu oer :)
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #388 on: January 06, 2015, 11:54:40 am »
Irayo :)

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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #389 on: January 07, 2015, 04:27:49 am »
Very beautiful and delicate, like a feather falling!  I adore it!

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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #390 on: January 07, 2015, 07:33:37 am »
Yes, I meant txilvìng. Must have been a typo. I corrected it now, thanks for pointing it out!

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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #391 on: August 23, 2018, 05:15:30 am »
I already wrote any poems nìNa'vi but I never tried write hayku nìNa'vi...
So there is one attempt:

Saw atxewluke
Sanhì nrr nìtxanatan
Nì'awtu alìm

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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #392 on: August 23, 2018, 10:43:46 am »
sunu oeru :D

fìkìng rey nìmun a fì'u lu txantsan nang!


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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #393 on: August 23, 2018, 10:51:32 am »
Irayo :)

Nìngay, fìkìng lamu tìfnunga' nìhawng.

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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #394 on: August 23, 2018, 02:54:47 pm »
Pxehayku teri txon'ong ;D :)

Tsawke txon'ongä
Atan tswayon ne tawtxew
A lu txewluke

Tora atanvi
Ta tsawke - keng aysoruk
Tswayon ftu fìtseng

Sìrol yayoyä
Fìwopx atun pxel reypay
Txon'ongä tanhì

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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #395 on: August 23, 2018, 03:02:54 pm »
Kosman! Set, new oe fìkem sivi nìteng :0

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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #396 on: August 23, 2018, 03:07:05 pm »
Irayo nìtxan :D

Kosman! Set, new oe fìkem sivi nìteng :0
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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #397 on: August 24, 2018, 04:19:30 am »
I composed next three:
(seems that I found inspiration XD)


Kxamlä ayutral
Atanvi tsawkeyä nrr
Uk hum neto

Tsawke txonä nrr,
Nìk'ong sop io ram apxa
Io ram fìwopxä

Syayvi lam asim
Nìfkeytongay lu alìm
Alìm pxel aysaw

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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #398 on: August 25, 2018, 06:51:37 pm »
Nights spent under stars are such inspirational... ;D


Pìwopx a lu hek
Mì saw txonä a lu vawm
Fya'o okupä

Soma txon avawm
Pxaya atantsyìp io oe
Pxaya txephì’ang

Nì'awtu oel tok
Txayoti äo txonä taw
Hu pxaya sanhì

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Re: Ayhayku
« Reply #399 on: August 25, 2018, 08:00:37 pm »
Nice work :)

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Pìwopx a lu hek
hek is a stative verb, so the lu is superfluous. That leaves a spare syllable.
I tend to suggest Pìwopx lìng nìhek, but it's your haiku not mine. ;D

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Mì saw txonä a lu vawm
I don't know if the stacking of a genetive word and a relative clause after the noun is allowed. Therefore, I suggest "Mì vawm lu a taw txonä", and you get a weak rhyme. :) Or mì lu vawmataw txonä :P

Soma txon avawm
Pxaya atantsyìp io oe
Pxaya txephì’ang
I like your coining the word firefly in Na'vi. Maybe you should open a thread on the LEP board.

Nìvingkap...

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Nì'awtu txayot
Äo txonä taw tok oel
Sì pxaya sanhìl

Don't mind me  :P
« Last Edit: August 25, 2018, 08:04:59 pm by Vawmataw »
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