Ayhayku

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Toliman

#400
Irayo :)
And thank you for your ideas!


Quote from: Vawmataw on August 25, 2018, 08:00:37 PM
QuoteMì saw txonä a lu vawm
I don't know if the stacking of a genetive word and a relative clause after the noun is allowed. Therefore, I suggest "Mì vawm lu a taw txonä", and you get a weak rhyme. :) Or mì lu vawmataw txonä :P
"mì lu vawmataw txonä" ;D
"Mì vawm lu a taw txonä" - this sounds really good!


Quote from: Vawmataw on August 25, 2018, 08:00:37 PM
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Pxaya txephì'ang
I like your coining the word firefly in Na'vi. Maybe you should open a thread on the LEP board.
Not sure if I am right, but I think that this word (or similar idea) was already proposed in LEP before few years...


Toliman

Atan tsawkeyä
Tswayon ne wewa kllte
Sanga krr za'u

Kxener io txeptseng
A srew nìyrr io kllte
Wewa krr za'u

Toliman

Atan sanhìyä
Layu keng oe tayerkup
Tsa'u lu sìltsan

Kxitxìri oe pey
Taluna pum zaya'u
Krra nga ke srefey

Tìyawn a lu fkew
Säsìlpeyl tspolang oeti
Tìkeftxo za'u

Vawmataw

Quote from: Toliman on August 31, 2018, 07:04:43 PM
Atan sanhìyä
Layu keng oe tayerkup
Tsa'u lu sìltsan
Rä'ä tiverkup :o ;D
Also the second line contains 8 syllables and I'm not sure to understand it.

Otherwise this is a deep work; good job!
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Toliman

HRH ;D ;D

Quote from: Vawmataw on September 02, 2018, 08:31:29 AM
Also the second line contains 8 syllables and I'm not sure to understand it.
oops, yeah - I see that keng is not good selected word...
So there is my idea for this hayku in English:

Light of stars
Will exist although I will die
It's good


Quote from: Vawmataw on September 02, 2018, 08:31:29 AM
Otherwise this is a deep work; good job!
Irayo :D

Vawmataw

Here are my suggestions. Some remain close to your original haiku while others use my imagination. ;)

QuoteAtan sanhìyä
Layu hufwa tayerkup
Oeru lu sìltsan

Atan sanhìyä
Layu hufwa tayerkup
Tsa'u lu sìltsan

Nayrr aysanhì
Hufwa oe tayerkup
Tsa'u lu sìltsan

Nayrr aysanhì
Mawfwa oe tayerkup
Tsa'u lu sìltsan
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Toliman

Nice suggesions, irayo :) You are better poet than I am ;D

Vawmataw

hrh that's really nice of you
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Toliman


Toliman

Tanhì zerup set
Ngaru tsun livu tìnew
Tìterkup za'u

Ngäzìka fya'o
Tsenga oe nì'awtu kä
Mì tawewa txon

Few txampay atxukx
Oe nì'awtu sop txankrr
Äo txewlukea saw


Vawmataw

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Toliman


Toliman

'Awvea herwì
Oeti eyk mì txon avawm
Tsmìmìl nantangä

Yayoyä sìrol
Mì sìvawm - tompa zerup
Trr'ong zera'u

Ayram mì yapay
Tsim kilvanä a lu ngim
Sngä'ikrr atanä

Vawmataw

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Toliman


Vawmataw

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Toliman


Toliman

Tìfnu a lu txukx
Ayayoyä sìrolìl
Ripx apxa ramit

Txon'ongä tanhì
Kifkey a längu kewong
Trr'ongä tanhì

Toliman

Sìltsana yafkeyk
Txantsana trr aö fìwopx
Pxel fpì sìkllyem

Txon'ong zera'u
Txampayìl tayong ye'rìn
Txepit tsawkeyä

Tan Jala

Atanvi anim
Tsawkeri 'ivong, mìso
Tìsom pivähem