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Tererkup
« on: July 16, 2011, 05:06:32 pm »
Following text is inspired by some Czech songs, where one sings about things related to death. These are: Umírám (I'm dying) by Buty, Jednou (Once) by Olympic and Smrt (Death) from Dracula musical.
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Tererkup.
Tìtxurìl txerìng oeti.
Oel stawm Eywayä mokrit a syaw oeru.
Ye'rìn oeyä tirea tayul ne poe ulte tokx 'ayì'awn fìtseng.
Oeri tsawke slayu neyn, oel tayok tsatsenget nì'awtu.
Nawma Sa'nok payawm oeru san pefya nga roley ngeyä tìreyur?
Lolu nga tute a lu srung-susi sì txantslusam fu skxawng nì'aw? sìk.
Ulte ke layu ftue fwa taryìng tì'eyng aeyawr....

Tererkängup.
Ma yawntu, munge oeyä tsyokxit nemfa ngeyä pum,
ulte rìlyol oeru ngeyä tìrolit.
Lrrtok sivi vaykrr txe'lanur lu 'ekong mi,
fte oeyä 'ok ator livu lor.
Tìterkup tìsraw si nìhawng,
slä txo tse'a oel keyit ngeyä,
tsaw lu ftue nì'ul.

Tererkängup.
Oeyä kxitx 'eykayefu keftxo ngaru,
slä ke lu tìrey luke kxitx
ulte ke lu kxitx luke tìrey.
Sutel terel krrit ta Eywa fte rivey.
Tuteoru lu krr ayol, tuteoru lu krr atxan.
Krr oeyä lolu txan slä set...
Tsaw 'eri'a.

Tererkängup.
Tse'a oel fayìvat mì menari ngeyä,
slä rä'ä tsngawvìk, rutxe.
Sayunu oeru txo oel fayrrfen oeti
mì ngeyä ayunil.
Tse, lu fra'ur sneyä tì'i'a.
Oe zene hivawl oeti
fte kivä ne fya'o ator.

Tererkängup.
Tìng tora tìpomit oeru.
Oeyä tokx sì txe'lan sleru meyp.
Awnga za'u ta kllte ulte tätxaw nemfa hllte.
Nawma Sa'nok syaw, syaw oeru poene,
srake stawm tsamokrit?
Oe zene kivä...
Eywa ngahu, ma yawntu...

Edit: some corrections
« Last Edit: July 18, 2011, 03:35:25 pm by Blue Elf »
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


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Re: Tererkup
« Reply #1 on: July 17, 2011, 05:36:01 pm »
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Tse'a oel fayìvat mì menari ngeyä,
slä ke tsngawvìk, rutxe.

Zene oe tsngivawvìk nì'it talun fì'u lu fìtxan kalin sì keftxo. :'(
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

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Re: Tererkup
« Reply #2 on: July 18, 2011, 08:10:56 am »
....Ma Blue Elf, fì'ul nìngay skama'a txe'lanit oeyä, ulte lameiu lor nìtxan nìteng. :( :) Sìltsana *poem*, ma 'eylan, tsa yawne lu oer. :D

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Re: Tererkup
« Reply #3 on: July 18, 2011, 09:04:40 am »
:(

Lu lora *poem*, ma Blue Elf, slä lu keftxo atxan nìtxan...
Krr a lì'fya lam sraw, may' frivìp utralit.

Ngopyu ayvurä.

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Re: Tererkup
« Reply #4 on: July 18, 2011, 09:10:31 am »
Txantsan leiu nìngay ma Blue Elf. Nìngay tseiun fko 'ivefu sì'efuti a fì'ul nga'. Seysonìltsan.

Nìsung:

Nawma Sa'nok payawm oetiru san pefya nga roley ngeyä tìreyur?
Lolu nga tute a lu asrung-susi* sì txantslusam fu skxawng nì'aw? sìk.
Ulte ke layu ftue fte fwa tsivun tivìng tì'eyng aeyawr....
...
ulte rìlyol oeru ngeyä tìrolit.
Lrrtok sivi vaykrr txe'lanur lu 'ekong* mi,
...
Tsaw 'eri'a.
...
slä ke rä'ä tsngawvìk, rutxe.
...
Tse, lu fra'ur tseyä sneyä tì'i'a.
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Awnga za'u ta kllte ulte tätxaw hllte.
...
srake stawm tsamokrit?
When the mirror speaks, the reflection lies.

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Re: Tererkup
« Reply #5 on: July 18, 2011, 10:17:48 am »
Prrte' oeru fwa fìpamrel sunu ngaru.

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Nawma Sa'nok payawm oetiru san pefya nga roley ngeyä tìreyur?
So pawm is intransitive? (not marked in dictionary)
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Lolu nga tute asrung-susi sì txantslusam fu skxawng nì'aw? sìk
But if I use it this way, adjective txantslusam stays alone after connector without lu. Is It possible?
and i think srung-susi works as adjective - that's why I used it with lu and sì and another adjective (I know it is not gramatic, but in poetry.... you know  :))
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Awnga za'u ta kllte ulte tätxaw mì hllte.
"Into" would be the best - it is variation of "We are dust and we return to dust".
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


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Re: Tererkup
« Reply #6 on: July 18, 2011, 10:32:20 am »
So pawm is intransitive? (not marked in dictionary)

Pawm is transitive, but is used without agentive/patientive when is paired with san...sìk.

I know it is not gramatic, but in poetry.... you know  :)

Well, yeah, you can keep it in this case, if you feel that it fits the rhythm better.
When the mirror speaks, the reflection lies.

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Re: Tererkup
« Reply #7 on: July 18, 2011, 02:11:27 pm »
Keftxoyä tìlor. :'(
Nìngay leiu txantsan. :)
slä ke lu tìrey luke kxitx
ulte ke lu kxitx luke tìrey.
Ngaru tìyawr.
Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.


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Re: Tererkup
« Reply #8 on: July 18, 2011, 03:08:22 pm »
säfpìl alor ma Elf. oeti tolakuk txe'lanmì.
pamrel ke si oe nìtxan talun aylì'ut ke tsun rivun.
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Awnga za'u ta kllte ulte tätxaw mì hllte.
"Into" would be the best - it is variation of "We are dust and we return to dust".
then use nemfa.
Nivume Na'vit, fpivìl nìNa'vi, kivame na Na'vi.....
oer fko syaw tswusayona tsamsiyu

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Re: Tererkup
« Reply #9 on: July 18, 2011, 03:50:37 pm »
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Lu lora *poem*, ma Blue Elf, slä lu keftxo atxan nìtxan...
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Keftxoyä tìlor.
Srane, lu keftxo fìpamrel taluna plltxe teri tuteyä ayu ator. Tìrey lu keftxo krro rro, ke lu ftxozä fratrr.
Awngal ke tok fìtsenget frakrro, a fì'ut sweylu txo fkol ivomum.

Slä rä'a 'efu keftxo, oeyä vur ahay lefpom layu nì'ul.
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


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Re: Tererkup
« Reply #10 on: July 18, 2011, 04:06:20 pm »
Slä rä'a 'efu keftxo, oeyä vur ahay lefpom layu nì'ul.
Ngaru tìyawr. :)
Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.


 

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