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Started by Blue Elf, June 15, 2011, 04:14:14 PM

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Blue Elf

Lu txon li, hola aysway kxamtxonsre. Nga new hivahaw, slä tsaw ke tsunslu. Ngal 'efu tskxeti mì te'lan ngeyä.
Nga pawm san pelun ke tsun oe hivahaw ?
Mokrio 'eyng:
- Kxawm nga kemo sami a lu kawng...
- Ohh! Tok fìtsenget tuteol, srak?
- Srane, oel tok fìtsenget, lok nìtxan.
- Pesu lu nga?
- Oe lu tsapo a omum pxaya ayut.
- Nga latsu ... Eywa, srak?
- Kehe, oe lu hì'i to Eywa. Slä oel tse'a frau't a nga tìng nari. Oel stawm frapamit a nga tìng mikyun. Ulte oel nìteng tse'a frakemit a nga kem si.
- Pesengit ngal tok? Oel ngati ke tse'a.
- Ke tsun tsive'a oeti. Ngaru lu oe mì ngeyä re'o sì txe'lan. Oel tok tsenget mìfa nga.
- Peut ngal new oeta?
- Ke'ut. Smon oeru taweyka nga ke tsun hivahaw.
- Peut nga tsun ivomum?
- Fmi fpivìl. Kempe sami nga fìtrr?
- ìì... Oel tamok na'rìngit Txewìhu ulte moe tolaron. Poan lolu taronyu asìltsan to oe.
- Tse, fìlunìri nga stoli ulte skola'a peyä tskot. Tsakem ke si kip meylan...
- ìì... srane. Tsari oe 'efu kawng.
- Pehem sayi?
- Oe kayä fte tsap'alute sivi.
- Tìyawr. Slä tsaw ke lu letam. Fyape po tayaron luke tsko?
- Tse, oe zene ngivop mipa tskot poru. Fu tayìng oeyä tskot poru.
- Säfpìl asìltsan a sunu oeru, tsaw muiä lu. Tse, nga tìkxey sami, slä tsun zeykivo tsat. Set hahaw, txon lu yol. Rewon to txon lu txantslusam.
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Alyara Arati

Quote- Peut ngal tsun ivomum?

Tìstusä'nìri keyeyä ke fnan oe, ngian oeru lam fì'u sìltsan nìtxan! :)
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Kamean

Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.


Blue Elf

Quote from: Alyara Arati on June 15, 2011, 05:15:46 PM
Quote- Peut ngal tsun ivomum?

Tìstusä'nìri keyeyä ke fnan oe, ngian oeru lam fì'u sìltsan nìtxan! :)
Wiya! Snumìna kxexey nìtxan! Zoslolu.
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Puvomun

WOU! Txantsan, ma Blue Elf!
Krr a lì'fya lam sraw, may' frivìp utralit.

Ngopyu ayvurä.

Sireayä mokri

Mllte, lu txantsana tìpängkxo a oeyä eltur tìtxen seiyi :)

However couple of patientives are missing:

  Oel tok tsenget mìfa nga.
  ulte skola'a peyä tskot.
When the mirror speaks, the reflection lies.

Blue Elf

Snumìna keyey nìmun, wiya pxeylo!
But only three together - hmm, best result ever  :) Slä oe zene nivume nì'ul :)
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Sireayä mokri

Yeah, agentive\patientive can be tough to catch sometimes :) Still great job!
When the mirror speaks, the reflection lies.

Tswusayona Tsamsiyu

txantsan nìngay. vivar pamrel sivi. ;)

about mistakes:
where you said Slä oel tse'a frau't a nga nari si. it should be tìng nari.
Peut ngal new oeta? - here it should be oeri and not oeta. although you can say peut a oeta ngal new? but Topical is easier.
right after that sentence there's ke'u which needs patientive.
that's all I can find. you are making this hard for us. ;) ;)
Nivume Na'vit, fpivìl nìNa'vi, kivame na Na'vi.....
oer fko syaw tswusayona tsamsiyu

Blue Elf

Quote from: Tswusayona Tsamsiyu on June 16, 2011, 02:30:56 PM
txantsan nìngay. vivar pamrel sivi. ;)

about mistakes:
where you said Slä oel tse'a frau't a nga nari si. it should be tìng nari.
Pxasìk, you are right! How I could mismatch it? Idioms are sometimes nonsensial...
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Peut ngal new oeta? - here it should be oeri and not oeta. although you can say peut a oeta ngal new? but Topical is easier.
Agree that topical can be used here, but IMHO it makes the meaning a little unclear. Topical is a mysterious construction
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right after that sentence there's ke'u which needs patientive.
patientative without any verb? It works in my native language, I think, but in Na'vi?
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that's all I can find. you are making this hard for us. ;) ;)
That was my intention ;D
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Tswusayona Tsamsiyu

Quote from: Blue Elf on June 17, 2011, 01:04:30 AM
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right after that sentence there's ke'u which needs patientive.
patientative without any verb? It works in my native language, I think, but in Na'vi?
there's an implied new there. he wants nothing. it refers to the verb in the question in the sentence above.
Nivume Na'vit, fpivìl nìNa'vi, kivame na Na'vi.....
oer fko syaw tswusayona tsamsiyu

Sireayä mokri

Quote from: Tswusayona Tsamsiyu on June 17, 2011, 09:21:57 AM
Quote from: Blue Elf on June 17, 2011, 01:04:30 AM
patientative without any verb? It works in my native language, I think, but in Na'vi?
there's an implied new there. he wants nothing. it refers to the verb in the question in the sentence above.

This can also be "Ke'u [lu fwa new oel]."
When the mirror speaks, the reflection lies.

Tswusayona Tsamsiyu

but who is so poetic to answer this way?
Nivume Na'vit, fpivìl nìNa'vi, kivame na Na'vi.....
oer fko syaw tswusayona tsamsiyu

Sireayä mokri

Probably no one, but I think it would only add some more mystery this way :)
When the mirror speaks, the reflection lies.

Tswusayona Tsamsiyu

so I think we can agree that in this case both answers are correct, but the one with patientive is more likely to happen.
Nivume Na'vit, fpivìl nìNa'vi, kivame na Na'vi.....
oer fko syaw tswusayona tsamsiyu

Sireayä mokri

Absolutely. Patientive is really more expected here, since the general tone of the conversation is rather casual (I notice hola+plural there).
When the mirror speaks, the reflection lies.