Ulte Kllte Rikx - a duet

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Alyara Arati

May 18, 2011, 11:09:44 PM Last Edit: May 19, 2011, 01:39:38 PM by Alyara Arati
poe

    ke tsun oe
    oe pamlltxe
    ke tsun wivìntxu
    oey keyit kifkeyru
    oeru txopu
    nìhawng leru
mefo

    ulte kllte rikx
poe

    ke lu seykxel
    pxiset oe pxel
    äietu fu tsamsiyu
    tsalsungay oe lu
    nìngay txantstew
    hu eylan afkew
mefo

    ulte kllte rikx
poan

    oeri txopu si
    oe pamrel sami
    fwa ke tsun kivame
    oet fu tsive'a sute
    oe nì'aw pawm
    txonä tìvawm
mefo

    ulte kllte rikx
poan

    set oe mi
    wäpan ta nari
    slä tsun stivawm fko
    fa oey pamtseo
    fì'u lu relna
    oey tirea
mefo

    ulte kllte rikx
mefo

    fìfya lu oeng
    ke 'awsiteng
    slä oeng tsawl sleru
    ke nìwotx nì'awtu
    tìrey latem
    krro krro fa fayhem
mefo

    ulte kllte rikx
mefo

    rerikx nìk'ong
    kllte hu 'ekong
    txe'lanä kifkeyä
    a omum nìmuiä
    tsranten mi
    ayu ahì'i
mefo

    ulte kllte rikx
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Blue Elf

#1
May 19, 2011, 06:01:58 AM
Ngaru tsulfä, ma Alyara, txantsan tìrol!! Even with rhymes, Eywa zamene pivom ngati :)

Just one note in second strophe: hu eylan afkew
You have my admiration.
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)

Sireayä mokri

#2
May 19, 2011, 08:15:55 AM
Wou nìngay :D Oe new nì'aw sivung mefì'ut: äieyu lam keyawr talun -yu sar fkol hu hemlì'u ulte äie kemlì'u ke lu, ki lu tstxolì'u. Ulte:

Quote from: Alyara Arati on May 18, 2011, 11:09:44 PM
ke tsun tsive'a fu
ke kivame kawtut
When the mirror speaks, the reflection lies.

Tswusayona Tsamsiyu

#3
May 19, 2011, 09:18:29 AM
txantsaaaaan!! woouuu!!! fì'u lu sweya tìrol ngeyä setvay. fwa lu txantsana tìrol ke tsun sliva'tsu. vivar!

Quote from: Sireayä mokri on May 19, 2011, 08:15:55 AM
Wou nìngay :D Oe new nì'aw sivung mefì'ut: äieyu lam keyawr talun -yu sar fkol hu hemlì'u ulte äie kemlì'u ke lu, ki lu tstxolì'u. Ulte:

Quote from: Alyara Arati on May 18, 2011, 11:09:44 PM
ke tsun tsive'a fu
ke kivame kawtut
ha sar äietu.
Nivume Na'vit, fpivìl nìNa'vi, kivame na Na'vi.....
oer fko syaw tswusayona tsamsiyu

Kamean

#4
May 19, 2011, 10:51:04 AM
Txantsana tìrol ma Aylara.  :)
Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.

Alyara Arati

#5
May 19, 2011, 01:20:21 PM
Quote from: Sireayä mokri on May 19, 2011, 08:15:55 AM
Wou nìngay :D Oe new nì'aw sivung mefì'ut: äieyu lam keyawr talun -yu sar fkol hu hemlì'u ulte äie kemlì'u ke lu, ki lu tstxolì'u. Ulte:

Quote from: Alyara Arati on May 18, 2011, 11:09:44 PM
ke tsun tsive'a fu
ke kivame kawtut

Hopefully, kivame and kawtul are both supposed to be related to tsun.  Since I don't need the second ke, would it be better "oet kivame kawtu"?
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Sireayä mokri

#6
May 19, 2011, 01:25:44 PM
Then I'd suggest to swap fu and oet: ke tsun tsive'a oet fu kivame kawtu.
When the mirror speaks, the reflection lies.

Kamean

#7
May 19, 2011, 01:30:30 PM
Quote from: Sireayä mokri on May 19, 2011, 01:25:44 PM
Then I'd suggest to swap fu and oet: ke tsun tsive'a oet fu kivame kawtu.
I like it. :)
Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.

Alyara Arati

#8
May 19, 2011, 01:41:34 PM
How's this:
fwa ke tsun kivame
oet fu tsive'a sute
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Sireayä mokri

#9
May 19, 2011, 01:51:33 PM
Yeah, I think it's fine :)
When the mirror speaks, the reflection lies.

Kamean

#10
May 19, 2011, 02:05:22 PM
Quote from: Alyara Arati on May 19, 2011, 01:41:34 PM
How's this:
fwa ke tsun kivame
oet fu tsive'a sute
Txantsan :D
Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.

Tirea Aean

#11
June 17, 2011, 12:18:29 PM Last Edit: June 17, 2011, 12:23:12 PM by Tirea Aean
Lehawngkrr pamrel si oe slä...

Txantsana tìkangkem alor nang!! Seysonìltsan! ;D nìrangal lirvu oe pamreltu a ngana sìltsan :) set zene oe ngey pamrel alahe!

Tìsung: it would be epic to hear a recording of this.

Alyara Arati

#12
June 17, 2011, 04:01:59 PM
Quote from: Tirea Aean on June 17, 2011, 12:18:29 PM
Lehawngkrr pamrel si oe slä...

Txantsana tìkangkem alor nang!! Seysonìltsan! ;D nìrangal lirvu oe pamreltu a ngana sìltsan :) set zene oe ngey pamrel alahe!

Tìsung: it would be epic to hear a recording of this.

You wrote a single!  All I need is music for this... and maybe a couple of people to do vocals...  :P
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Kamean

#13
June 17, 2011, 04:29:42 PM
It would be great. :)
Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.

Tirea Aean

#14
June 17, 2011, 04:38:34 PM
Quote from: Alyara Arati on June 17, 2011, 04:01:59 PM
Quote from: Tirea Aean on June 17, 2011, 12:18:29 PM
Lehawngkrr pamrel si oe slä...

Txantsana tìkangkem alor nang!! Seysonìltsan! ;D nìrangal lirvu oe pamreltu a ngana sìltsan :) set zene oe ngey pamrel alahe!

Tìsung: it would be epic to hear a recording of this.

You wrote a single!  All I need is music for this... and maybe a couple of people to do vocals...  :P

just lemme hear your vision for the vocal melody, and I'll try to come up with something for bass and acoustic guitar :D

Alyara Arati

#15
June 17, 2011, 05:10:03 PM
I don't know how helpful that would be; it is (or was supposed to be) a little like rap.  But I'll give it my best shot. ;)
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

'Oma Tirea

#16
June 18, 2011, 12:51:41 AM
If suteo can give me a recording of what you have I could work it in to Kllrikx :)

IIRC that was the original plan.

[img]http://swokaikran.skxawng.lu/sigbar/nwotd.php?p=2b[/img]

ÌTXTSTXRR!!

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