Eywa'ite

[Syulang]

tokx tawtute
txe'lan sì tirea Na'vi
Oe tìyawn oeyä aysmukan sì aysmuke
Ayoeng lu Eywa'eveng
Oe lu ngaru tsmuke sì Eywa'ite

Spoiler

So that's my attempted poem.  I'm not very good at this stuff yet, but I thought I'd post here for once instead of the Beginner's section.  hope you like it, and corrections are appreciated. 

[Tirea Aean]

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tokx tawtute
txe'lan sì tirea Na'vi
Oe tìyawn oeyä aysmukan sì aysmuke
Ayoeng lu Eywa'eveng
Oe lu ngaru tsmuke sì Eywa'ite

So that's my attempted poem.  I'm not very good at this stuff yet, but I thought I'd post here for once instead of the Beginner's section.  hope you like it, and corrections are appreciated. 

I was hoping you would! Thanks for posting. We here always love to see new stuff in this board.

tokx tawtuteyä
txe'lan sì tirea Na'viyä
Oeru tìyawn yawe lu oeyä aysmukan sì aysmuke
Ayoeng lu Eywa'eveng (Eywayä 'eveng)
Oe lu ngaru ngeyä tsmuke sì Eywa'ite Eywayä 'ite

Eywa'eveng is the word for Pandora not sure if you wanted to say that or not, otherwise the thing in the parenteses. Also not sure Eywa'ite is a word. But I like this. it's a good start. Keep writing. it's great practice!

['Oma Tirea]

tokx tawtuteyä
txe'lan sì tirea Na'viyä
Oeru tìyawn yawne lu oeyä aysmukan sì aysmuke
Ayoeng lu Eywa'eveng (Eywayä 'eveng)
Oe lu ngaru ngeyä tsmuke sì Eywa'ite Eywayä 'ite

Eywa'eveng is the word for Pandora not sure if you wanted to say that or not, otherwise the thing in the parenteses. Also not sure Eywa'ite is a word. But I like this. it's a good start. Keep writing. it's great practice!

No such word as Eywa'ite.  Also, for Eywayä 'eveng, you may have meant to say instead, Eywayä (ay)eveng.

[Blue Elf]

Sìltsan! Hufwa pamrelìl nga' keyeyit, sunu oeru. Tskxekengìl zeyko tsat, txopu rä'ä si. Vivar!

[Syulang]

Irayo, guys  thanks for the corrections and advice, I'll try to remember and improve. 

[Sireayä mokri]

Oeri sung mokriti fumur a plltxe san seysonìltsan ulte vivar *

[Kamean]

Ma Syulang, ngeyä pamrel sunu oer. Seysonìltsan!

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[Alyara Arati]

Zola'eiu nìprrte' fìkìngne ma Syulang!  Sìlpey oe tsnì nga pamrel sivi fìtsenge pxìm.

[Tirea Aean]

Spoiler: snip

tokx tawtuteyä
txe'lan sì tirea Na'viyä
Oeru tìyawn yawne lu oeyä aysmukan sì aysmuke
Ayoeng lu Eywa'eveng (Eywayä 'eveng)
Oe lu ngaru ngeyä tsmuke sì Eywa'ite Eywayä 'ite

Eywa'eveng is the word for Pandora not sure if you wanted to say that or not, otherwise the thing in the parenteses. Also not sure Eywa'ite is a word. But I like this. it's a good start. Keep writing. it's great practice!

No such word as Eywa'ite.

Also, for Eywayä 'eveng, you may have meant to say instead, Eywayä (ay)eveng.

Number Principle (Koren Holpxayä = KH):
In referring to the same entity, express number only once per clause.

(tsim)