ayRam aLusìng

[Plumps]

fì'u lu – na tstxo li peng – teri ayram alusìng ... lu kop pamtseo, ha fko tsivun rivol slä na lì'utseo nì'aw tsaw lu letam

ayRam aLusìng

°1
sanhìyä atanvi herum trr'ongmaw
tsawla tsawke arim terìran ka taw
'ewana zize' tswerayon kip ayrìk ye'rìn
mì ayutraltsyìp fayramä, ma ayRam aLusìng

°2
tätxaw ayfa'litsyìp nìk'ong ne kelku
fwa txonä tìvawm hum Ritir prrte' ke lu
fayfayfya hangham sì lrrtok si nìkalin
lok ayutraltsyìp fayramä, ma ayRam aLusìng

°3
ayfayti kilvanä payoangìl tok
yayol txula kelkuti tsatsengelok
ayikran ziva'u ne zongtseng nìwin
pxawpaluke sì txopu, ma ayRam aLusìng

°4
tì'i'a tìreyä vuyin oe Eywar nìlaw,
layu oeru le'awa tìrangal nì'aw
fwa oeyä vitra kip ayrìk aean lìng
a tsawl slu mì na'rìng, ma ayRam aLusìng



edit: °4 vuyin oel Eywar > vuyin oe Eywar, irayo nìtxan ma B.E.

['Oma Tirea]

Inspired from one of the songs ta Inspirata... kxawm srak?

In any case, txantsana tìkangkemvi

[Alyara Arati]

Seysonìltsan nìtxan ma Plumps!  Txantsana tìrol alor lu fì'u.

[Plumps]

Inspired from one of the songs ta Inspirata... kxawm srak?

zenänge oe pivllngay san kehe sìk this has been on my mind since the beginning of the year. The melody is again an old Irish folk song about the shores of a region called Gaoth Barra na dTonn.
I just happened to finish it yesterday

Ma Alyara, aylì'uri ngaru seiyi irayo.

[Kamean]

Seysonìltsan ma Plumps. Poem ngeyä leiu txantsan sì lor nìtxan.

+1

[Blue Elf]

Ma Plumps, ngal sleykolu oeru tìprrte' fa fìpoem. Lu teri ayram a sunu oeru ulte ngal solar lì'ut a eltur tìtxen si alu "fayfayfya" (3 letters 3 times repeated and result sounds well )

But I have difficulties with begining of the 4th verse:
tì'i'a tìreyä vuyin oel Eywar nìlaw. "Vin" is transitive, so I'm missing some patientive. What you want to say is probably:

At the end of my life I ask Eywa clearly
I'll have the only wish only...
But first line doesn't fit too much into your one. () I'd write is as:

Oel vuyin Eywar le'awa tìrangalit
nì'aw krr a tì'i'a tìreyä zaya'u oene

So - what I missed?

[Plumps]

Ma B.L.,

ngeyä aylì'uri irayo ngaru nìtxan... srane lì'u alu fayfayfya lu 'o' nìngay

But I have difficulties with begining of the 4th verse:
tì'i'a tìreyä vuyin oel Eywar nìlaw. "Vin" is transitive, so I'm missing some patientive. What you want to say is probably:

At the end of my life I ask Eywa clearly
I'll have the only wish only...

Yes, you're right. That's what I wanted to say more or less I tell you, I struggled with that line. You are not missing anything What is actually missing is a connecting futa in the second line that didn't make it into the poem because of rhythm
So, it would be (correctly):

     tì'i'a tìreyä vuyin oel Eywar nìlaw
     futa layu oeru le'awa tìrangal nì'aw

     at the end of (my) life I (respectfully) ask Eywa
     that I will have only one wish

I took a few liberties... same as K. Pawl said, oel spaw futa XYZ... can be oe spaw, XYZ... in colloquial speech. But then the -l should probably go as well, shouldn't it?

[Blue Elf]

Tìoeyktìngìri ngeyä oe irayo si, ma Plumps.
Things are clear now. And I agree, that -l would be better to left out, it will be easier to understand that line.

[Sireayä mokri]

Txantsan nìngay, ma Plumps, lora aylì'u leiu ngar.

ngal solar lì'ut a eltur tìtxen si alu "fayfayfya"

Mllte

[Plumps]

Thank you, ma B.L. – I changed it

Ulte irayo ngaru kop, ma Sireayä Mokri

Furia fì'u sunu suter oeru teya si.

[Blue Elf]

Thank you, ma B.L. – I changed it

Nìprrte', ma Plumps Ulte tstxo oeyä lu B.E. (fu Bl.E.) HRH

Furia fì'u sunu suter oeru teya si.

Slä pamrel si fa lì'fya leNa'vi lu ftue fìtxan (txo nga fnan)

[Plumps]

Thank you, ma B.L. – I changed it

Nìprrte', ma Plumps Ulte tstxo oeyä lu B.E. (fu Bl.E.) HRH

oe lu skxawng! tsap'alute, ma B.E. alu Blue Elf

['Oma Tirea]

ngal solar lì'ut a eltur tìtxen si alu "fayfayfya"

Nìnagy eltur tìtxen si, slä ke tslam tsalì'ut...

[Blue Elf]

fay+ payfya (those streams/brooks)

['Oma Tirea]

Tìslusa'tsuri irayo.  Lenition...