Kxitxìl mì oeyä txe'lan längu.

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Txur’Itan

Kxitxìl mì oeyä txe'lan längu.

Oeyä sa'nokìl ke tìyawn ke tilvängìng oeru.
Poel ayfìheyn'ur tìyawn tìng.
Poel ayfngap'ur tìyawn tìng.

Oeyä sa'nokìl ke tìyawn ke tilvängìng oeru.
Poel tìtxanew'ur tìyawn tìng.
Poel aysngel'ur tìyawn tìng.

Kxitxìl mì oeyä tirea längu.

Oeyä sempulìl ke tslilvängam oeru.
Poanìl oeru tsko swizaw tìng.
Poanìl oeru txe'lan atstu tìng.

Oeyä sempulìl ke tslilvängam oeru.
Poanìl oeru tistusi fpìlfya tìng.
Poanìl oeru tsngawvìk aukxo tìng.

Kxitxìl mì oeyä tìtsìsyì längu.

Oeyä ronsemìl ke fpom ke längu.
Ayngal oeti ke kivamänge.
Ayngal oeti ke nängew ke nemrey.

Oeyä ronsemìl ke fpom ke längu.
Ayngal oeti ke nängekx.
Ayngal oeti tìohakx ke tsängurokx.

Kxitxìl mì oeyä way längu.

Oeyä ukxoa reypayìl ke tseo ke längu.
Sa'nokìl sì sempulìl weykem wura txe'lanur.
Sa'nokìl sì sempulìl weykan wawe mì txe'lan.

Oeyä ukxoa reypayìl ke tseo ke längu.
Sa'nokìl sì sempulìl weykäte hu way mì oeyä vur.
Sa'nokìl sì sempulìl weykeyn wina vuryu sì tì'ewan.
私は太った男だ。


Tirea Aean

ah yes. i remember this one trying to figure out what line 3 means. a very interesting piece. :-)

Txur’Itan

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Quote from: Tirea Aean on January 01, 2012, 02:35:52 AM
ah yes. i remember this one trying to figure out what line 3 means. a very interesting piece. :-)

Poe-l ay-fì-heyn-'u-r tìyawn tìng.
She chairs love give

Aside from the kludge circumlocution, and the spacing error I over looked when the E-Mail went out, this basically means "she loves chairs" ...
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Tirea Aean

Ohhhhhh I see what you did there. I didn't think of "*heyn'u"

Txur’Itan

Quote from: Tirea Aean on January 01, 2012, 02:48:11 AM
Ohhhhhh I see what you did there. I didn't think of "*heyn'u"

Considering the spacing error I made, I couldn't blame anyone for missing it.  I cleaned it up a bit.
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'Oma Tirea

I don't really see anyone using 'u in foreign compounds much anymore.

Also, why not poer(u) lu yawne...?

[img]http://swokaikran.skxawng.lu/sigbar/nwotd.php?p=2b[/img]

ÌTXTSTXRR!!

Srake serar le'Ìnglìsìa lì'fyayä aylì'ut?  Nari si älofoniru rutxe!!

Kamean

Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.


Txur’Itan

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Quote from: 'Oma Tirea on January 01, 2012, 03:37:42 AM
I don't really see anyone using 'u in foreign compounds much anymore.

I was here from the beginning, it is probably a bad habit I need to break.

Quote from: 'Oma Tirea on January 01, 2012, 03:37:42 AM
Also, why not poer(u) lu yawne...?

Because, that is not what I intended to say... I liked the idea of using suggestive, emotive or evocative prose. In my opinion poetry is not as suggestive, emotive or evocative prose when it is explicit.

like:

"The woman runs, the woman runs, I am watching the woman running... She likes running..."

versus:

"The hair flows, the feet fall, and the forward stride faster than all... Smile bright, eyes closed..."
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Txur’Itan

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Blue Elf

Really interesting work, indeed, although very pessimistic I'm afraid
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Alyara Arati

Txantur sì txantsan lu fìway nìngay, slä keftxo nìtxan... :(
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Txur’Itan

Quote from: Blue Elf on January 02, 2012, 05:37:48 AM
Really interesting work, indeed, although very pessimistic I'm afraid

Edgar Allen Poe was my inspiration for the piece.

It is very challenging.
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Txur’Itan

Quote from: Alyara Arati on January 02, 2012, 11:13:49 AM
Txantur sì txantsan lu fìway nìngay, slä keftxo nìtxan... :(

Srane.

Fìwayìl akeftxo ale'aw nìtxan leru.
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Sireayä mokri

When the mirror speaks, the reflection lies.

Txur’Itan

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Ateyo Te Syaksyuk

Poe POE?
;D
Oe lu numyu
Nga pamrel si tsur sì seykxel, nìPoe!

Txur’Itan

Quote from: Ateyo Te Syaksyuk on January 09, 2012, 02:17:18 PM
Poe POE?
;D
Oe lu numyu
Nga pamrel si tsur sì seykxel, nìPoe!

HRH, tewti...  ;D

oel fìlì'ut << tsur >> ke tsleram... 

???
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Blue Elf

Quote from: Txur'Itan on January 09, 2012, 02:45:23 PM
Quote from: Ateyo Te Syaksyuk on January 09, 2012, 02:17:18 PM
Poe POE?
;D
Oe lu numyu
Nga pamrel si tsur sì seykxel, nìPoe!

HRH, tewti...  ;D

oel fìlì'ut << tsur >> ke tsleram... 

???
Kxawm txur ?
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Txur’Itan

私は太った男だ。


Tirea Aean

I got the txur, I just wasn't catching the "poe POE? nìPoe" Edgar Allan Poe. Of course.