Ma nawma Eywa, nga lor lu.

[Puvomun]

Tsawke tok fìwopxuo
Moengìl nìn atanit atxanatan.
Hufwey lu oeyä keymì.
Oeyä ikran zawng, oeyä txe'lan rol.
Ma nawma Eywa, nga lor lu.

Prrnenìl tok mepunit sa'nokä
Oel nìn atanit atxanatan.
Tìyawn lu keymì sa'nokä.
Oeyä ikran fnu, oeyä txe'lan tsìsyì.
Ma nawma Eywa, nga lor lu.

Uniltaron tok eltumì oeyä
Oel 'efu atanit atxanatan.
'Olo tok oeyä txe'lanmì.
Oeyä ikran tswayon, oeyä txe'lan nìteng.
Ma nawma Eywa, nga lor lu.

[Blue Elf]

Ma nawma pamrelsiyu alu Puvomun, lu txantsan pamrel ngeyä, nang! Sunu nìtxan oeru.
Srake nga fperìl teri pamrelo a fpi *contest?

aylì'uo a nga pamrel ke soli nìfya'o aeyawr:

Spoiler

Tsawkel tok fìwopxot
Moengal nìn atanit atxanatan.
Hufwey lu oeyä keymì. Kxawm sìltsan nì'ul: Hufwet 'efu oel keymì
...

Uniltaronìl tok eltutmì oeyä
...
'Oloìl tok oeyä txe'lanitmì.

[Kamean]

Pamrel akosman ma Puwonun!

+1

[Alyara Arati]

Nice work!

Also, an interesting point: female persons are referred to as sevin, but one presumes Eywa would indeed be lor.

[Puvomun]

Ma nawma pamrelsiyu alu Puvomun, lu txantsan pamrel ngeyä, nang! Sunu nìtxan oeru.
Srake nga fperìl teri pamrelo a fpi *contest?

Kehe, ma Blue Elf, oel ke fpìl futa oeyä tìomum leNa'vi ke lu sìltsan nìtam...

aylì'uo a nga pamrel ke soli nìfya'o aeyawr:
Tsawkel tok fìwopxot

Pelun 'ot'? I mean to say that the sun is behind (-uo) the clouds.

Moengal nìn atanit atxanatan.

I notice now that this not exactly what I mean to see. It should have been we both / 'moe'/I and someone else (effectively meaning the ikran).

Hufwey lu oeyä keymì. Kxawm sìltsan nì'ul: Hufwet 'efu oel keymì
...

Uniltaronìl tok eltutmì oeyä
...
'Oloìl tok oeyä txe'lanitmì.

Thank you for these, ma Blue Elf. I am not so good with clever things in the evening... After 7pm my brain shuts down.

[Puvomun]

Pamrel akosman ma Puwonun!

+1

Irayo, ma Kamean sì Alyara Arati.

Also, an interesting point: female persons are referred to as sevin, but one presumes Eywa would indeed be lor.

I gave that some thought as well. For me I decided that Eywa is more than the entire world, she is everything, and that transcends male or female. Oh, the intricacies of language and concepts.

[Alyara Arati]

Ma nawma pamrelsiyu alu Puvomun, lu txantsan pamrel ngeyä, nang! Sunu nìtxan oeru.
Srake nga fperìl teri pamrelo a fpi *contest?

Kehe, ma Blue Elf, oel ke fpìl futa oeyä tìomum leNa'vi lu sìltsan nìtam...

Nìngay ke zene nga livu tsulfätu.  Ulte fpìl oel futa tìomum ngeyä lu sìltsan to futa ngal spaw.

[Tanri]

Mllte frapohu oe, ngeyä aylì'u kosman sìltsansì leiu, ma Puvomun.

[Sireayä mokri]

Pamrelìri amip irayo, ma Puvomun.

Pelun 'ot'? I mean to say that the sun is behind (-uo) the clouds.

Then I'd say tsawkel tok (tsengit a) fìwopxuo.

Nìsung: olo' ends with a glottal stop.

[Blue Elf]

aylì'uo a nga pamrel ke soli nìfya'o aeyawr:
Tsawkel tok fìwopxot

Pelun 'ot'? I mean to say that the sun is behind (-uo) the clouds.

My misunderstanding, hìtxoa. I read it as "Sun is in some clouds". Preposition attached from back side sometimes confuses me...

Thank you for these, ma Blue Elf. I am not so good with clever things in the evening... After 7pm my brain shuts down.

HRH, oeri nìteng krro krro.... even earlier