Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw

Started by Vawmataw, October 10, 2014, 09:09:05 PM

Previous topic - Next topic

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Vawmataw

Featured on the #NaviPostADay of January 7th, 2016

Txon a tì'i'aluke

Zola'u nìprrte' ne atxkxe awew
Pxel fayhifkey a lìm alìm.
Fte nga slivu sang syuratan srew
Tengkrr herwìl klltxet kxerìm.
Aynantangìri sngum rä'ä si nga.
Txonìl tok wrrpat, ke 'ayi'a.

Zola'u nìprrte' ne kifkey alahe
Pxel fayhifkey a tsawkeluke.
Kekem rä'ä sivi, nì'aw nivìn.
Fmawn Ta 'Rrta - News IN NA'VI ONLY (Discord)
Traducteur francophone de Kelutral.org, dict-navi et Reykunyu

Toliman


Vawmataw

#122
Ayoe wä hifkey a txewluke

Lerìng mì hea tsenge.
Velkea wrrpa vezo.
Sìltsana keye'ung ke zeykäpo.

Stxonga tìtxurhu ultxa si oe.
Ayoe wä sanhiyä hufwe.
Ayoe wä hifkey a txewluke.

Lerìng mì hea tsenge.
Fìwopxtsyìp nrr, tse'a oe.
Tìtstewnga'a tìsop frahìkrr lu.
Frahapxì teya fkot tsun sleykivu.

Wä sìmeyp wem ayoe.
Ayoe wä hifkey a txewluke.
Fmawn Ta 'Rrta - News IN NA'VI ONLY (Discord)
Traducteur francophone de Kelutral.org, dict-navi et Reykunyu

Tìtstewan

#123
Lora way, ma Vawmataw.

Slä,
Quote from: Vawmataw on January 09, 2016, 09:36:56 PM
Lerìng mì senge akea.
...
Lerìng mì senge akea.
"akea" doesn't exist, even if kea is an adj. it has to be always before the noun. :)

Just a suggestion:
Lerìng kea tsengemì.

-| Na'vi Vocab + Audio | Na'viteri as one HTML file | FAQ | Useful Links for Beginners |-
-| Kem si fu kem rä'ä si, ke lu tìfmi. |-

Vawmataw

Fmawn Ta 'Rrta - News IN NA'VI ONLY (Discord)
Traducteur francophone de Kelutral.org, dict-navi et Reykunyu

Toliman

Txantsana pamrel nìngay :)

(same as english version)

Blue Elf

Quote from: Tìtstewan on January 10, 2016, 12:36:51 PM
Lora way, ma Vawmataw.

Slä,
Quote from: Vawmataw on January 09, 2016, 09:36:56 PM
Lerìng mì senge akea.
...
Lerìng mì senge akea.
"akea" doesn't exist, even if kea is an adj. it has to be always before the noun. :)

Just a suggestion:
Lerìng kea tsengemì.
I would even say: kea tseng = kawtseng
And:
sìmeyp wem ayoe.

I'd say original is better, but it's hard to translate poem. I see you took care about rhymes, so it would be hard to improve it.
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Vawmataw

kawtseng is an adverb.

Lerìng kawtseng would make a too short verse.
Fmawn Ta 'Rrta - News IN NA'VI ONLY (Discord)
Traducteur francophone de Kelutral.org, dict-navi et Reykunyu

Vawmataw

Featured on the #NaviPostADay of January 11th, 2016

Tsengeo

Mì sengeo, mì hea tseng
Mì ayropxhu a txampay alayon
Pamtseo seri. Oe ftu peseng?

Pesengftu ftawnemkrrä tson
Alu fwa lang tsyokxnuä?
Tsaw lu stxeli zusawkrrä.
Pamtseo seri. Oel nìn wrrpat.

Fmawn Ta 'Rrta - News IN NA'VI ONLY (Discord)
Traducteur francophone de Kelutral.org, dict-navi et Reykunyu

Vawmataw

Featured on the #NaviPostADay of January 12th, 2016

Ayokrol

Fìtxon Na'vi tìng mikyun
Okrolur a fizayuta
Okur a rol tìng mikyun awnga.

Fìtxon Na'vi tìng mikyun
Aylì'u pxaw ylltxep tswayon,
Lawk krrit a neto tswolayon,
Ayeyktanit a tsyolìl txampayt
Sì torukä maktoyut a wolem.

Stivawm ayngal rol a aywayt.
Räpivun fa fizayuä ayhem.
Fmawn Ta 'Rrta - News IN NA'VI ONLY (Discord)
Traducteur francophone de Kelutral.org, dict-navi et Reykunyu

Toliman

Sìltsan  :)

Nice and interesting poem.

Vawmataw

Thanks!

There's more to come in the next 6 days. ;D
Fmawn Ta 'Rrta - News IN NA'VI ONLY (Discord)
Traducteur francophone de Kelutral.org, dict-navi et Reykunyu

Toliman


Vawmataw

#133
I just published a poem on my blog. It should appear here this Saturday.
Fmawn Ta 'Rrta - News IN NA'VI ONLY (Discord)
Traducteur francophone de Kelutral.org, dict-navi et Reykunyu

Vawmataw

#134
Featured on the #NaviPostADay of January 14th, 2016

Pam, tseo lrrtokä

Pam, lrrtokä 'Rrtayä tseo.
Oe rol nìnitram frato.
To tìyawn fìrol lefpom lu.

​Tsngamawvìk a tompa slu
Ne txampay lrrtokä tsawkeyä.
Oe reykol io tìkeftxo.
Eywal mll'an aysyonit oeyä.
Fmawn Ta 'Rrta - News IN NA'VI ONLY (Discord)
Traducteur francophone de Kelutral.org, dict-navi et Reykunyu

Vawmataw

Featured on the #NaviPostADay of January 16th, 2016
Snolaytx

Oeyktivìng, oeyktivìng.
Ke zene tsngawpayt txivìng.
Ayoe tsun vaykrr tsun.
Ke zene spivaw futa tsun.
Oeri txe'lanit ke tsun kxivakx.
Ke lu tseo akxawnakx.
Ke tsranten fwa mong nga.
Kea tìpawm fu snaytx nga.
Fmawn Ta 'Rrta - News IN NA'VI ONLY (Discord)
Traducteur francophone de Kelutral.org, dict-navi et Reykunyu

Toliman


Vawmataw

Featured on the #NaviPostADay of January 18th, 2016
(With my review of Toruk - The First Flight)

'Eveng

'Eveng lu unil lefpom.
Horen lì'fyayä lu txew le'aw
Lu txana krr sì yol a swaw
Lam sa'nokä säpom.

Tsole'a syulangit sì vrrtepti.
Tìkawngit sì atokirina'ti.
Ta ram uran kä tawne.
Tsaw wou nìtxan oer.

'Eveng a sgnumluke
Tìtxen si tsawla suter.
Fmawn Ta 'Rrta - News IN NA'VI ONLY (Discord)
Traducteur francophone de Kelutral.org, dict-navi et Reykunyu

Vawmataw

Featured on the #NaviPostADay of January 20th, 2016
FAFN

Kämakto ma frapo
Nìwin hufwena.
Ayre'oti 'ayeko
Fpi Na'viya nìnrra.
Tìng tumpinit set.
Tìng eampinit trray.
Tìng teyrpinit tì'i'avay.
Neytiril fpomit fyawìntxu.
Fpom fa mesyokx zaya'u.
Fmawn Ta 'Rrta - News IN NA'VI ONLY (Discord)
Traducteur francophone de Kelutral.org, dict-navi et Reykunyu

Toliman