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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #120 on: January 07, 2016, 06:56:59 pm »
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Txon a tì'i'aluke

Zola'u nìprrte' ne atxkxe awew
Pxel fayhifkey a lìm alìm.
Fte nga slivu sang syuratan srew
Tengkrr herwìl klltxet kxerìm.
Aynantangìri sngum rä'ä si nga.
Txonìl tok wrrpat, ke 'ayi'a.

Zola'u nìprrte' ne kifkey alahe
Pxel fayhifkey a tsawkeluke.
Kekem rä'ä sivi, nì'aw nivìn.
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #121 on: January 08, 2016, 07:28:35 am »
Interesting and nice pomem  :)

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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #122 on: January 09, 2016, 09:36:56 pm »
Ayoe wä hifkey a txewluke

Lerìng mì hea tsenge.
Velkea wrrpa vezo.
Sìltsana keye'ung ke zeykäpo.

Stxonga tìtxurhu ultxa si oe.
Ayoe wä sanhiyä hufwe.
Ayoe wä hifkey a txewluke.

Lerìng mì hea tsenge.
Fìwopxtsyìp nrr, tse'a oe.
Tìtstewnga'a tìsop frahìkrr lu.
Frahapxì teya fkot tsun sleykivu.

Wä sìmeyp wem ayoe.
Ayoe wä hifkey a txewluke.
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #123 on: January 10, 2016, 12:36:51 pm »
Lora way, ma Vawmataw.

Slä,
Lerìng mì senge akea.
...
Lerìng mì senge akea.
"akea" doesn't exist, even if kea is an adj. it has to be always before the noun. :)

Just a suggestion:
Lerìng kea tsengemì.
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #124 on: January 10, 2016, 12:45:58 pm »
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #125 on: January 10, 2016, 02:12:19 pm »
Txantsana pamrel nìngay :)

(same as english version)

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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #126 on: January 10, 2016, 02:33:25 pm »
Lora way, ma Vawmataw.

Slä,
Lerìng mì senge akea.
...
Lerìng mì senge akea.
"akea" doesn't exist, even if kea is an adj. it has to be always before the noun. :)

Just a suggestion:
Lerìng kea tsengemì.
I would even say: kea tseng = kawtseng
And:
sìmeyp wem ayoe.

I'd say original is better, but it's hard to translate poem. I see you took care about rhymes, so it would be hard to improve it.
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #127 on: January 10, 2016, 02:36:24 pm »
kawtseng is an adverb.

Lerìng kawtseng would make a too short verse.
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #128 on: January 11, 2016, 04:13:47 pm »
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Tsengeo

Mì sengeo, mì hea tseng
Mì ayropxhu a txampay alayon
Pamtseo seri. Oe ftu peseng?

Pesengftu ftawnemkrrä tson
Alu fwa lang tsyokxnuä?
Tsaw lu stxeli zusawkrrä.
Pamtseo seri. Oel nìn wrrpat.

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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #129 on: January 14, 2016, 04:07:16 pm »
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Ayokrol

Fìtxon Na'vi tìng mikyun
Okrolur a fizayuta
Okur a rol tìng mikyun awnga.

Fìtxon Na'vi tìng mikyun
Aylì'u pxaw ylltxep tswayon,
Lawk krrit a neto tswolayon,
Ayeyktanit a tsyolìl txampayt
Sì torukä maktoyut a wolem.

Stivawm ayngal rol a aywayt.
Räpivun fa fizayuä ayhem.
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #130 on: January 14, 2016, 04:16:25 pm »
Sìltsan  :)

Nice and interesting poem.

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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #131 on: January 14, 2016, 04:17:14 pm »
Thanks!

There's more to come in the next 6 days. ;D
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #132 on: January 14, 2016, 04:20:02 pm »
There's more to come in the next 6 days. ;D
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very good

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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #133 on: January 14, 2016, 04:28:00 pm »
I just published a poem on my blog. It should appear here this Saturday.
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #134 on: January 16, 2016, 07:19:51 am »
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Pam, tseo lrrtokä

Pam, lrrtokä 'Rrtayä tseo.
Oe rol nìnitram frato.
To tìyawn fìrol lefpom lu.

​Tsngamawvìk a tompa slu
Ne txampay lrrtokä tsawkeyä.
Oe reykol io tìkeftxo.
Eywal mll'an aysyonit oeyä.
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #135 on: January 17, 2016, 09:03:17 am »
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Snolaytx

Oeyktivìng, oeyktivìng.
Ke zene tsngawpayt txivìng.
Ayoe tsun vaykrr tsun.
Ke zene spivaw futa tsun.
Oeri txe'lanit ke tsun kxivakx.
Ke lu tseo akxawnakx.
Ke tsranten fwa mong nga.
Kea tìpawm fu snaytx nga.
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #136 on: January 17, 2016, 10:24:09 am »
Nice and interesting again  :)

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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #137 on: January 19, 2016, 04:16:51 pm »
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'Eveng

'Eveng lu unil lefpom.
Horen lì'fyayä lu txew le'aw
Lu txana krr sì yol a swaw
Lam sa'nokä säpom.

Tsole'a syulangit sì vrrtepti.
Tìkawngit sì atokirina'ti.
Ta ram uran kä tawne.
Tsaw wou nìtxan oer.

'Eveng a sgnumluke
Tìtxen si tsawla suter.
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #138 on: January 21, 2016, 08:06:45 pm »
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FAFN

Kämakto ma frapo
Nìwin hufwena.
Ayre'oti 'ayeko
Fpi Na'viya nìnrra.
Tìng tumpinit set.
Tìng eampinit trray.
Tìng teyrpinit tì'i'avay.
Neytiril fpomit fyawìntxu.
Fpom fa mesyokx zaya'u.
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #139 on: January 22, 2016, 07:49:54 pm »
Both poems are very good  :) :)

 

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