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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #140 on: January 22, 2016, 09:12:38 pm »
Irayo seiyi ngaru :)
Sì suteru a inan slä fnu. :)
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #141 on: January 24, 2016, 04:06:57 pm »
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Fa'li hu txep

Fìtsenget fol ke mayunge.
Ayoe kame, fo ke kame.
Fol tung for frakemit
Slä kea tìyawr kaw'it.

Ultxa sivi hu fa'li a txephu.
Tìtxur a ta Eywa fratseng lu.
Ultxa sivi hu samsiyu
Na'viru aynga toruk ke lu.

Na'vi, ayolo' lu 'aw.
Vitra Eywayä kawkrr ke hahaw.

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Mipa kifkey

Trr'awve mì ton'ongmaw
Trr lamu sang, txon lu txawew.
Tìska'at kifkeyä ke nulnew,
Ha pxiset new txivula nìmun nì'aw.

Tsayun mivunge ke'ut fo.
Io yengwal ayoe txayula.
Neykivrr atanit mì sìvawm ko.
'Ok lu trram, mipa kifkey trray.
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #142 on: January 24, 2016, 04:10:54 pm »
Txantsan sì kosman nìngay  :) :)


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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #143 on: January 24, 2016, 04:17:54 pm »
Nga leiu tstunwi nìtxan nang. :D

Btw, beware the edits, because I also added Fa'li hu txep. :)
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #144 on: January 24, 2016, 04:31:01 pm »
Btw, beware the edits, because I also added Fa'li hu txep. :)

It's also nice and interesting poem  :)

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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #145 on: January 26, 2016, 06:28:22 pm »
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Kifkey avolawve

Mì layona txampay akosman,
Trram nì'awtu nga tarmìran.
Nì'i'a ayoe zola'u.
Fwa fwew hasey slolu.

Ma kifkey avolawve
Ziva'u nìprrte' soaiane.


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English version of 'O'
'O'
Vawma tokx awew
Txe'lan slu som fa tìwew
Srake lamu 'o'?
Mì hufwe

Mì hufwe tompayä
Mì hufwe ayramä
Nìtengfya txonìl sutx katot
Mì mepun oet sì txayot
Mì mepun txampayìl oet pom
Oel nìn tawit, 'ong skxom
Skxom alu tìyawn ke 'i'a
Ayngat oel zerok
​Oengeyä fpomit oel zerok

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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #146 on: January 26, 2016, 06:40:04 pm »
Nice  :)

'O'
Vawma tokx awew
Txe'lan slu som fa tìwew
Srake lamu 'o'?

Very interesting (English version too)

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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #147 on: January 26, 2016, 06:51:07 pm »
I'll answer to your two comments here:
Thank you! You're a very nice and supportive person. :)
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #148 on: January 28, 2016, 08:52:55 pm »
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Nì'i'a

'Rrta syaw ketuwongru
 'Rrta syaw tìfnuä sopyuru
 Livu ngahu Eywa atstunwi
Tìsop lu tsyeym sì stxeli
'Okrol zayerok ngati na Seze.

Oeri txe'lan re'osì lu txen
Slä nì'i'a ke tsranten
Nayìng tawit, Kiyevame


Just by curiosity, who reads them?
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #149 on: January 29, 2016, 07:42:46 pm »
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Kxamtxon nì'awtu

Kxamtxon tok nì'awtu.
Lu tirea a fneyku
Meka tsrayt askawna'a.
Layompinìl tsweyka'
Fratutet sì frapamit
Ulte läponu wewa sutetsyìp.

Oel frrfen utralä kilvanit.
Frasäsìlpey oeuo 'olìp.​
Tìvawmìl kxemyot täftxu.
Frapo fnu mì hifkey oeyä.

Pehem lolen eylanru oeyä?
Nì'awtu tawìl oet fyawìntxu.
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #150 on: January 30, 2016, 07:39:08 am »
Just by curiosity, who reads them?

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On your blog, of course :)
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #151 on: January 30, 2016, 07:41:41 am »
Just by curiosity, who reads them?

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On your blog, of course :)
Ah, hidden readers. :D
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #152 on: January 30, 2016, 05:44:42 pm »
Kxamtxon nì'awtu

Kxamtxon tok nì'awtu.
Lu tirea a fneyku
Meka tsrayt askawna'a.
Layompinìl tsweyka'
Fratutet sì frapamit
Ulte läponu wewa sutetsyìp.

Oel frrfen utralä kilvanit.
Frasäsìlpey oeuo 'olìp.​
Tìvawmìl kxemyot täftxu.
Frapo fnu mì hifkey oeyä.

Pehem lolen eylanru oeyä?
Nì'awtu tawìl oet fyawìntxu.

Nice and interesting poem  :)

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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #153 on: January 31, 2016, 04:25:19 pm »
Irayo :D

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Space disco

​​Tivìng yat fte pamtseo srivew
Tìving oer kifkeyt a ke smon trr
Tìprrte' lerìng sanhìfew
Oe rey nìmun krra txon nrr

Rum atsawl srew mì saw
'Awpo heyn ulte lapol yat wo

Txivìng swoaseyt, tivìran ko
Smuk za'u ta kifkey a'a'aw
​Kaltxì, kame, kìyevame.
Aungia ta ngip aye.
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #154 on: January 31, 2016, 06:17:11 pm »
Sìltsana pamrel  :)

(hmm ... how translate "space disco" into Na'vi ...  ;D )

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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #155 on: August 14, 2016, 08:17:33 pm »
No Na'vi poem in a while, so your waiting is over.

Eo Eywa

Ayatokirina' lu aungia
Aungia Eywayä tsìlpeyä
Wou yueya key ngeyä
Fìtxon oeng 'ayieia

Oel omum futa ngaru ke lu swey
Slä eo Eywa fra'u zo nìswey
Mesireal sleyku tìme'emit
Fpomìl 'awstengyem tìreyit

Mesireal sleyku tìme'emit
Utral Aymokriyä lu tseng aswey
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #156 on: August 14, 2016, 08:21:00 pm »
^ Lor nìtxan nang! :) Oeru sunu

Line 5 seems a tad bit off grammatically so I don't fully understand it, but overall nicely done! Reminds me of something I might have written when I was actively writing Na'vi poetry. :)

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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #157 on: August 14, 2016, 08:23:35 pm »
Just to say that the poem is a bit sensual while being fully PG-13.
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Line 5 seems a tad bit off grammatically so I don't fully understand it, but overall nicely done!
I bet you meant  tsat -­> futa, right? In some languages it makes more sense to say that than in others. I will switch to futa.

^ Lor nìtxan nang! :) Oeru sunu
Irayo :D
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #158 on: August 14, 2016, 08:25:28 pm »
Txantsan  :) Sunu oeru  :)

Very nice poem with nice theme

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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #159 on: August 14, 2016, 08:54:40 pm »
Well, I suppose that too, but I was mostly pondering the "ngaru ke lu swey" part. Wondering if you meant by that "nga ke lu swey" or "ngaru ke lu sweya [ommitted noun?]".

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