Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw

[Vawmataw]

Well, I suppose that, but I was mostly pondering the "ngaru ke lu swey" part. Wondering if you meant by that "nga ke lu swey" or "ngaru ke lu sweya [ommitted noun?]".

It isn't the best for you/to you.

[Tirea Aean]

O. I see nao. Further pondering causes me to remember it seems to follow the same "ADJ lu N-ru" pattern as yawne and some others. Maybe I'm just a rust bucket lol

[Blue Elf]

Well, I suppose that, but I was mostly pondering the "ngaru ke lu swey" part. Wondering if you meant by that "nga ke lu swey" or "ngaru ke lu sweya [ommitted noun?]".

It isn't the best for you/to you.

Best would be ngari (tsaw) ke lu swey, if it's not too long.
Anyway, nice poem, I like it much.

[Vawmataw]

Thank you, Blue Elf!

Ketsuktiama ayway

Tsun tivìng ketsuktiama aywayti
A lu unyor fa tìyawn menariyä.
Ngampam sayi na lì'u Eywayä
A tìng txepru fpomä tìreyti.

Tsun pamrel sivi ketsuktiama aywayru
Slä rutxe livu txoa oeru.
Oeyä tìnew lu mek na tìvawm
Taluna oet 'awnìm ayul anawm.

Ngari txe'lanmì faylì'u way sivi.
Rivey set, txopu rä'ä sivi.

[Toliman]

Txantsana way nìmun 

[Vawmataw]

irayo

[Toliman]

Ma Vawmataw, didn't you think about Na'vi poem writing again? Your poems were always excellent, I liked them

[Vawmataw]

Ma Vawmataw, didn't you think about Na'vi poem writing again? Your poems were always excellent, I liked them

Well I pretty much gave up since 2017, but I hope you read the one I made for the writing contest hrh

[Toliman]

Yeah, read. It was nice poem too!