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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #20 on: October 16, 2014, 05:13:13 pm »
I'm thinking about changing the subject of my poems. There's not only space and night things. Do you agree?
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #21 on: October 16, 2014, 05:46:12 pm »
I'm thinking about changing the subject of my poems. There's not only space and night things. Do you agree?

It's up to you. :)

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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #22 on: October 16, 2014, 05:49:46 pm »
Here's an easy haiku:

Hìyahaw tsawke
Tuna ayfìwopx herum
Kìyevameie
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #23 on: October 17, 2014, 08:36:20 am »
Boo at my last haiku.

Fäpämì
Ta Vawmataw

Oel, mì ramoä fäpä,
Tok fäpäti kifkeyä.

Fìwopx tìran oeäo.
Txampay rikx oeäo.
Ayram sì rey'eng a äo taw
Kllkxem oepxaw.

Oe rol ulte reykol.
Lu oer lawnol.
Oe eyk ta fäpä
Tì'efumì oeyä.



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Hayku ta Vawmataw

Zup tompa awew
Fra'u längu vawm sì wew
Trr längu keftxo
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #24 on: October 20, 2014, 10:55:56 am »
Tìhusahaw
Ta Vawmataw

Tìhusahaw,
Tìsnaytx aungiayä.
Herahaw,
Txon lefpom ma kifkey fra'uyä.

Krra hahaw oe,
Hum ftu kifkey tsuktse'a oe
Ulte frrfen kifkeyt ayunilä.

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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #25 on: October 20, 2014, 11:14:49 am »
Txantsana vur! :D

Kxeyeytsyìp.
Ulte frrfen kifkeyti ayunilä.

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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #26 on: October 20, 2014, 11:24:02 am »
Irayo ma Tìtstewan! :D

Slä pelun sweylu txo oe pamrel sivi fìfya lì'ur?
Mì way a plltxe alu Kifkey a txewluke, oe plltxe san Oel tse'a kifkeyt akosman.
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #27 on: October 20, 2014, 11:33:30 am »
ey is a diphthong...
...from Na'viteri:
-r-ru-ur-t-ti-it
ey-keyeyrukeyeyurkeyeytkeyeyti-
ay-wayruwayurwaytwaytiwayit
ewfahewrfahewru--fahewtifahewit
aw'etnawr'etnawru'etnawur-'etnawti'etnawit
...and as text on Na'viteri: scroll down to "A NOTE ON CASE ENDINGS WITH DIPHTHONGS"

NEVERMIND... I confused it with ew... :-[

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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #28 on: October 20, 2014, 11:39:06 am »
NEVERMIND... I confused it with ew... :-[
It's ok, but thanks for the lesson.
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #29 on: October 20, 2014, 12:44:42 pm »
Nìngay aywayti akosman tsun fko ivinan fìtsenge :)
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #30 on: October 20, 2014, 03:54:00 pm »
Nìngay aywayti akosman tsun fko ivinan fìtsenge :)
Aynga lu sìltsana sute asìltsan.

Kawtul ke lamawk lì'fyavit alu tìsnaytx aungiayä. Ral tsun livu fì'u alu Loss of signal srak?
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #31 on: October 21, 2014, 06:52:39 pm »
Here is the THIRD version of Kifkey a txewluke. Which version do you prefer?

Kifkey a txewluke
Hayku ta Vawmataw

Tsawke 'ìp txonfpi
Ayfrrtu txonä srerer
Sìsop sngerä'i

English version
Note: Fpi means ''for the sake of'' in my poem.

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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #32 on: October 22, 2014, 12:48:25 pm »
Here is the THIRD version of Kifkey a txewluke. Which version do you prefer?
Hmm, all are good, but I probably like most the very first version.
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Kawtul ke lamawk lì'fyavit alu tìsnaytx aungiayä. Ral tsun livu fì'u alu Loss of signal srak?
Tìsnaytx is loss in sense of lossing game (defeat), not loss of something, so it doesn't work. We do not have good word for this meaning now...
« Last Edit: October 24, 2014, 01:38:37 pm by Blue Elf »
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #33 on: October 22, 2014, 04:02:07 pm »
Here is the THIRD version of Kifkey a txewluke. Which version do you prefer?
Hmm, all are good, but I probably like most the very first version.
... Me too.

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Kawtul ke lamawk lì'fyavit alu tìsnaytx aungiayä. Ral tsun livu fì'u alu Loss of signal srak?
Tìsnaytx is loss in sense of lossing game (defeat), not loss of something, so it doesn't work. We do not have good word for thing meaning now...
poem ruined :(
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #34 on: October 23, 2014, 08:02:34 pm »
Really ruined ^

I let you read my new poem. There's a lot of text.
http://tseovawmataw.weebly.com/ayfamrel/tseng-aysanhiya
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #35 on: October 24, 2014, 01:41:26 pm »
Really ruined ^

I let you read my new poem. There's a lot of text.
http://tseovawmataw.weebly.com/ayfamrel/tseng-aysanhiya
lora way :)
Just wondering why that ko was used:
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Fìtxon nìyll tsive'a fìkifkeyt,
Txana aysìpawnit sì ayingyentsimit ko.
Fìtxon lu awngar te'lan atsawl.
If it was intended, translation is:

let's share together this world tonight
and many questions and mysteries.
Tonight we have huge hearts
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #36 on: October 24, 2014, 03:52:18 pm »
I just edited my poem again.

To answer to your question:

tonight let's together look at the world above tonight,
and many questions and mysteries.

Which would be:
Fìtxon 'awsiteng nivìn kifkeyt a io,
Txana aysìpawnit sì ayingyentsimit ko.

Really ruined ^

I let you read my new poem. There's a lot of text.
http://tseovawmataw.weebly.com/ayfamrel/tseng-aysanhiya
lora way :)
Irayo.
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #37 on: October 25, 2014, 03:10:34 pm »
I just edited my poem again.

To answer to your question:

tonight let's together look at the world above tonight,
and many questions and mysteries.

Which would be:
Fìtxon 'awsiteng nivìn kifkeyt a io,
Txana aysìpawnit sì ayingyentsimit ko.
io is adposition and it requires some noun to be attached. But your usage has no such noun. In That sentence "above" works as adverb, unfortunately we do not have such adverb in Na'vi. Best solution is to attach something to io, like

Fìtxon 'awsiteng nivìn kifkeyt a awngaio

It doesn't ruin rhyme.
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #38 on: October 25, 2014, 03:27:05 pm »
That's cool. Thanks. :)
Edit: If you want, you can answer to a question in the section tìpawm on my website.
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Re: Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw
« Reply #39 on: October 25, 2014, 06:12:28 pm »
Seze

Neytiriru
Ta Vawmataw


Tsaioang lu ean.
Tsaioang lu oeyä 'eylan
Alu oeyä tsmuk a yo'.

Po lu txur frato
Na toruk makto.
Po lu sìltsan frato
Na hona yawnetu.

Ultxa si Sezehu.
Sivunu ngar tsaw.
Slä rä'ä nìn peyä menarit nìyey!
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