Oeyä ayfamrel - Vawmataw

[Blue Elf]

Nice!

Tsenga ayway ultxa si
Ta Vawmataw

Fratseng new sivop oe,
Txampayt tsive'a,
Fäziva'u ayramne,
Kivä tsengene a
Aywayru tìreyhu lu ultxa.
New fivrrfen oe
Snatanhìt sì hifkeyt alahe,
Tsenga aswoka ayway
Ultxa si hu txayor okupä. (Ultxa si is used with hu)
Oe new klltxivay,
Mì tayo wayä,
Äo sanhì sì tsawke.

Ke lu kea tskxe
Fratuteyä kelku
Ki kifkey ftu awnga za'u.

[Vawmataw]

oopsie
Thanks for your feedback!

[Blue Elf]

oopsie
Thanks for your feedback!

You're welcome. I'm glad you've found it useful 

[Vawmataw]

I always did.

[Vawmataw]

So I choose a more Na'vi style, using figures of speech in the Weaving and the Hunting song. To begin, I wrote a prose poem. I also copied a part of my song Tìtxurä tsawkeyä to complete the text.
I bet I will improve in my upcoming works.

Trrtxonä tìrol

Mokri tsawkeyä, mokri trrä
Tìtxenä sì sngä'ikrrä
Tìtxen si syena hahawyur,
Heykahaw 'awpot atxen ulte
Tul ta'lengne awngeyä,
Nìtengfya 'ekong sì kato,
Kato sì 'ekong leNa'vi.

Ma frapo, tìng mikyun
Nawma sa'nokä mokriru.
Ma frapo, tìng mikyun
Txantura wayru
Kxorä ngamhu.

Mokri sanhìyä, mokri txonä
S(ì) ayatokirina' Eywayä,
Eywäyä kato fpi fpom
Tìtxen si syena hahawyur,
Heykahaw 'awpot atxen ulte
Hasey seyki 'ekongit sì katot,
Katot sì 'ekongit leNa'vi.

Ma frapo, tìng mikyun
Nawma sa'nokä mokriru.
Ma frapo, tìng mikyun
Txantura wayru
Kxorä ngamhu.

[Toliman]

Ah, it's very nice     Result of your work with this style is for me amazing.

[Vawmataw]

Small haiku.

Faysanhìeo
Piak säpi tirea
Ulte oe 'ia

[Tirea Aean]

Beautiful work ma Vawmataw. Seriously.

[Vawmataw]

Beautiful work ma Vawmataw. Seriously.

Irayo seiyi mengaru oe nìtxan.

[Toliman]

Small haiku.

Faysanhìeo
Piak säpi tirea
Ulte oe 'ia

Small, but very nice haiku 
Maybe I will try write some haiku ...

[Blue Elf]

Small haiku.

Faysanhìeo
Piak säpi tirea
Ulte oe 'ia

Nice piece. Last line has one more syllable, but who cares

[Vawmataw]

Small haiku.

Faysanhìeo
Piak säpi tirea
Ulte oe 'ia

Nice piece. Last line has one more syllable, but who cares

Irayo
The extra syllable doesn't matter as you said.

[Vawmataw]

Fayokrol

Fìtxon Na'vi tìng mikyun
Okrolur a fizayuta
Okur a rol tìng mikyun awnga

Awngat pengyul reykun
Tsleykam fte kivame
Keykame fte tslivam

Ha fìtxon Na'vi tìng mikyun
Aysìpawm slu aysì'eyng
Ulte awnga zerok tìtstewit.

[Vawmataw]

Frapo alahe

Oe tìrolur pamrel si
Ke omum lunit
Oe fpìl ngateri

Oel taron srrit
Ke omum lunit
Pelun slamu nga sanhì?
Lu na tsko a txe'lanmì...

Lefpoma faylrrtokit
Fìmokrit a'ango
Eana fìmemikyunit
Ke tayìng frapol alahe kaw'it

[Vawmataw]

Sngumluke

Äo txayo sanhìyä
Mì tayo zeswayä
Oel tse'a ayeylanit
Oel nìwotx kame tawit

Ram lu swizaw
A takuk ne taw
Sanhì lu ayswizaw
A takeiuk ne menari

Krro krro sanhìo tìran
Krro krro sanhìor lu ioi
Ke klltxay nì'awtu
A fì'ut oel 'efu

Hum ngaya tìrey
Ftu tokx vitrasì oey

[Toliman]

Txantsana pamrel 

(I also should write some again ...)

[Hahaw[hhvhhvcz]]

Txantsana pamrel!

(First poem i can understand completely and it is bery good )

[Vawmataw]

Irayo ma mesmukan

[Vawmataw]

Tsìlpey
Ta Vawmataw

Ngul lu taw
Ya lu wew
Oe ke lu tstew
Yafkeyk lu oeyk nìlaw

Oer kea tìkan ke lu
Slä oe sìlpey
Taluna ayutral tun lu

[Blue Elf]

Tsìlpey
Ta Vawmataw

Ngul lu taw
Ya lu wew
Oe ke lu tstew
Yafkeyk lu oeyk nìlaw

Oer kea tìkan ke lu
Slä oe sìlpey
Taluna ayutral tun lu

Tse, fì'u lu ngaya tìsla'tsu yafkeykä lefkrr. Nì'aw tompatsyìp lu lom